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Reviews for Anachronism

By : starcrossedkayla
  • From starstruck86 on December 19, 2009
    I'm still reading... growing more and more disgusted with Severus with every passing chapter (as i'm sure i'm meant to? LOL). Especially after that one. *growls* I very rarely say this, but poor Harry. To put yourself in that position, where you love somebody and to have it all disappear into something as menacing as Severus has become... *shiver*

    As ever, hanging on for more. I really love your writing style.
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  • From mrequecky on December 17, 2009
    Oh loved! Can't wait to see Harry break... (I know, I'm mean)
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  • From ANON - okoko on December 16, 2009
    What means "mon renard" at the end if the chapter harry says it.

    loved the chapter but im still waiting to see if by some reason severus enrage and pounce harry or he just cant take it any more and jumps harrys bones

    jajaja your story is magnificent so far
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  • From KillingProphet on December 16, 2009
    I am really interested in knowing what is up with Harry and the 'Slut, whore, ect' words. He seems to get really upset with them. You think somebody as perceptive as Severus would have noticed by now. Again very egocentric that man is. But I can't help it, he is amazing. This last chapter was sooo wonderful. Thank you for the update. I want another in an hour... THink you can do it? Hehe.
    KP
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  • From KillingProphet on December 16, 2009
    It's amazing how much I can love Severus when he is like this. He is such an arse but I love him. I'm just like Harry. ^.^ You are an amazing writer. Update soon.
    KP
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  • From mrequecky on December 15, 2009
    Oh wow, Severus really has a nack for saying the worst things possible to Harry - he must be sooo close to breaking. I wonder, if he will break down in front of Severus any time soon...
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  • From ANON - noctu on December 15, 2009
    I like seeing someone waiting for Snape for once in the fanfiction universe.

    Usually the shoe is on the other foot, and Snape has to weather abuse and threat of abuse from "Harry's friends" or other "well meaning acquaintences" who promise unspecified harm to Snape if he hurts poor lil Harry's feelings and leaves/splits up with him. Really, they never approve, why don't they bribe him to leave, hmm?

    I love that you have Harry trying his hardest not to be offended, even when Snape means to offend him. And I also love that you give Snape his due as a spy and erstwhile detective, sneaking and peeking and drawing his own conclusions instead of having him parroting someone else's ideas, or worse, accepting what he's been told as a given.
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  • From ANON - okoko on December 15, 2009
    i absolutely love ur story. the characters seem so real to me, and poor Harry having to put up with this as**ole Severus. But im just waiting until Sev crack, that is something worth waiting for
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on December 15, 2009
    P.S Love all the inner turmoil. You really hit the bulls eye with this depiction of Severus!
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on December 15, 2009
    Aha! I have just realized something! I have actually read your storys before! I knew this had to be the case as, in all honesty there are only about a hand full of talented writers on AFF who can atually balance their plot and their smut properly and you happen to be one of them. I am SO tired of authors who feel that 1-2 lines of explantaion are enough to explain the fact that Severus is now a sex god, Ron and Hermione are evil, Harrys a complete Masochist and apparently half the cast are vampires. Right. I looked up your profile as I wanted to read your other storys only to find that I had already read your other storys! Huh. You know I really loved your bunny storys!!:)
    But back to my review. An excellent update. We are finally getting to the smutty stuff! Hurrah! Love sub harry ^_^! And I can tell you know ur science stuff. In all honesty its all greek to me. I studied English, German and Philosophy. Haha. But it comes across as very knowledgable and well researched so kudos to you!!( not that I would notice if something was wrong,lol). I was wondering if, when you refered to a witch in a earlier chapter that lived in Calafornia and that Harry had chatted to...was that a veiled reference to yourself?( in an AU sense of course) In some way? Maybe? Or am I totally wrong with that ...?
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  • From QueenB on December 14, 2009
    Ch. 7 This story is depressing. Snape is afraid he
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  • From QueenB on December 14, 2009
    Ch. 7 Severus knew he could have properly taught Potter at Hogwarts if the boy hadn't been such an arrogant prick who refused to follow simple instructions.

    Then again, he could have taught Harry if Snape wasn
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  • From ANON - J on December 13, 2009
    Someone needs to pound Severus Snape until all mental comparisons of James Potter and Harry are knocked clean out of his head. He's watching everything, listening to everything, but ultimately he seems to see nothing, hear nothing understand nothing.

    I agree, Harry should get a medal for dealing with this, his lover has gone from his loving business and romatic partner, to a paranoid, rude, cruel, creature who seeks to find fault in all he does. And if he approached Snape years ago, then he's had to deal with this shit TWICE! That just is not fair. But then when has Harry's life ever been fair?

    Keep them coming!

    J
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  • From QueenB on December 12, 2009
    Ch. 6
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  • From mrequecky on December 10, 2009
    Wow, interesting. Oh, and I hate how Harry is suffering, because of Snape... Poor guy...
    Loved this chapter!
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