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Reviews for To Comfort a Hidden Hero

By : Aunjel18
  • From ANON - arisblaze on December 07, 2009
    Holding a story hostage just to get reviews won't earn you any friends though.
    It might even cause your readers to abandon it altogether. Then there are those like me that don't review until well after the second or third chapter.
    Good luck though. You're going to need it.
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  • From ANON - makovaso on December 07, 2009
    good story, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - R.Carter on December 06, 2009
    Liked the first chapter hope to see more
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  • From ANON - catnona on December 06, 2009
    I'd be very interested to see where you are taking this plot. So I really do hope that you continue to write and post this story.

    On a side note, you used the word thierselves and it grated on my nerves a bit, when you should be using the word themselves. Thierselve isn't a word as far as I know. Grammar and spelling aside the story has potential
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  • From AlphazSlut on December 06, 2009
    Has potential, it'd be nice to get another chapter, see where you're going with it. This could be very entertaining.
    Hoping you'll update soon unlike me,
    Kay
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on December 06, 2009
    Hi, I couldn't remember if I reviewed or not? So feeling bad and wanting an update on this great start of a story, I thought I will review (again?). LOL:D
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  • From ANON - Alaine on November 29, 2009
    Right, where to start? I did like the idea you have, and the chapter itself was not badly written. There are just a few things that bother me a little; such as not writing the first words "Room of Requirements" in capital letters. Futhermore a few spelligmistakes were scattered here and there throughout the story, so I think you should consider getting a beta. Do not get me wrong, I do like the whole idea, I am just trying to give you some constructive critism:)
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  • From Aunjel18 on November 29, 2009
    Wow already 56 hits in just 20 minutes and a review I feel so good. Im glad you liked it. If things keep going like this I will be motivated to have another chapter up by tommorow night :D
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on November 29, 2009
    Yay, I like it.
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