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Reviews for To Comfort a Hidden Hero

By : Aunjel18
  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2014
    really interesting so far, what do you have in mind for the next chapter? keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Nocturnal_Insomniac on January 02, 2012
    Hey, this story has an awesome start, and I can't wait to see where it is headed. Sitting here hoping you will update soon - I know, my entire life is FanFiction. I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - makovaso on October 23, 2010
    Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2010
    hello, your story is cool! Enter them more quickly, but I want to know what Harry does with Sev!

    Lg Sevinia
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  • From ANON - Lame on January 16, 2010
    I just want you to know that your story line is ok, your sentences are choppy and hard to read, and threating to not post because of less reviews is really kind of pathetic. Either post your story or don't, people here just wanna read.
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  • From ANON - Jess on January 02, 2010
    Pretty good story so far
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  • From ANON - Canadian Ginger on December 21, 2009
    Your motivation to write should come from yourself, not from reviews. Knowing that people are taking the time to read your story should be good enough.

    Also, posting chapters that are simply notes demanding reviews is not a good way to make readers have any desire to come back.
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  • From Gypsii on December 15, 2009
    Your writing is to hurried, slow it down. Other than that, I can see a god story blooming.
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  • From ANON - puck on December 09, 2009
    You are holding your story hostage until you get reviews? Your story, which is all of one chapter long and mostly a recap of the last chapter of HBP? Full of spelling errors? I'm not trying to discourage your writing. You did a fair job, but honestly, you may need to give people a bit more actual story before you start manipulating your readers like that. Attention seeking in this manner is extremely unattractive in a writer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2009
    sorry cant review a story intill its done
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  • From ANON - akahimena on December 08, 2009
    Wahh! Ok Please write some more. The spelling errors are a bit of an annoyance but I like the story so far and wonder where you are going with it. Please no more story ransom! ^_^
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  • From ANON - pinktarg on December 07, 2009
    Your story is interesting; however, thus far, it only really mimics canon. Also, your grammar and spelling mistakes make it very difficult, at least for me, to read.
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  • From SilentInvictus on December 07, 2009
    I think the motivation to write comes from inside the author and the desire to write without caring if people actually read the work. Forcing people to review to get more story is just going to harbor resentment, and people won't review because of spite. It isn't worth the effort sometimes. The only reason I don't have stories posted is because they deleted my account for no reason...

    So here's your review:

    It's a good start. I would have loved to see the tower scene from the book rather than the movie, but it's alright. I have no idea what the premise of the story is yet because you only have one chapter up. Post another chapter please, and you'll probably get more reviews!

    -SI
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  • From Blaubeergeist on December 07, 2009
    I'm sorry to tell you but it shouldn't be the reviews alone that make you cotinue a story normally an author has an idea in his head and wants to put it into words making it available for everyone to read and share his thoughts and I'd like to inform you that it's quite common that you will not get so many reviews in the beginning moreso if the first chapter you publish is this short, people can't really tell yet if they like your plot or your style. Personally I think I like your summary and the plot it indicates but I can't tell in detail yet. Anyway I would advise you to either get a beta or to read your chapters again before posting them there are quite a few errors.

    I hope you find this useful

    MD
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  • From ANON - Troz on December 07, 2009
    interesting plot.

    but please spell check and edit for grammar.


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