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Reviews for Unravel

By : AmoryHarlow
  • From LydiaLydia on January 07, 2012
    This is actually a repost of a story with a different title, by a different author: [archive]hp[/archive][story=600007747]Breakdown[/story] by [archive]hp[/archive][author=1296803520]Cambria[/author].

    The original story has been on my profile's "Recommended Reading" list for months, it was easy to remember where I had read this before.

    The review mentioning six updates in one week and the lack of consistency between the original story and the added last chapter, as well as the absence of an Author's Note explaining why they couldn't just update "Breakdown" if they're the same person is... uh, weird?

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  • From LydiaLydia on January 07, 2012
    This story has been reposted here with an additional chapter and under a different author's name. It doesn't mention this at all. It's called "Unravel" by AmoryHarlow: [archive]hp[/archive][story=600024185]Unravel[/story] by [archive]hp[/archive][author=1296878799]AmoryHarlow[/author]
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  • From LydiaLydia on May 19, 2011
    I just finished reading the first chapter: this has got to be one of the best writing among the hundreds posted here. The story is old and, judging by the last reviews, you went all co
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  • From tanyaflorio on March 29, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STRY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From sophiebelle on January 26, 2010
    The little sneek peak is just mean. Hurry, hurry!!!
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  • From jaceni50 on January 18, 2010
    Love how it's winding down. Great story and can't wait for the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - Jade2099 on January 15, 2010
    What a fab story! Draco's thoughts...his demons...and Hermione in all her delicious innocence. :) Look forward to your next update! :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 14, 2010
    I really am enjoying this story. Your writing of their emotions is wonderful. I can't wait to see how you get them out of this. I like the twist of Draco being the one to make the first move and possibly helping take down that monster in his home. Oh, and Voldemort, too. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From dragongirl on January 14, 2010
    Ok Voldie, here we come!!!!!!!! Wondelful!
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  • From dragongirl on January 08, 2010
    Thank you Thank you Thank yo
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  • From ProfSnape101 on January 08, 2010
    Please update soon! This is my favorite one by far and trust me i have read almost all in this pairing here on AFF.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 07, 2010
    Well crap! These two just can't catch a freakin' break! The fight, discussions, and make up were perfect. But, damn Lucius, Voldemort, and the entire dark side!!!! ARGH. Just don't let him get hurt too badly, okay? Please? Or better yet, have him go to Dumbledore now! sigh...Just wishful thinking, I know. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From amerereader on January 07, 2010
    I really am loving this story! I can't wait for another update and to see where it goes! Oh, and I really do hope for a happy ending! :-D Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Miss random reviewer on January 07, 2010
    Fantastic! It's simply an amazing story, and in character, which is becoming a rare thing these days.
    Though, I can't seem to understand why people haven't reviewed more. :/
    But as for me, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on January 07, 2010
    ooooh shit, here comes batman to the rescue! Hahaha great chapter btw!
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