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By : AmoryHarlow
  • From ANON - shalamonde aka lala on November 19, 2006
    Merlin, that was AWEsome!! I especially love "He looked up again, into her soul, "I hate you Granger."
    That was it? That was it, but it didn't sound like he hated her. If the phrase he just said would have been I love you it would have sounded just as natural." Do you have a beta? I saw a few errors, though nothing that inhibits the flow of the stroy. You have a great writing style, and I'm a little disheartened to know this fic is a one shot... wish there were more. Plus, I just have to say I thought it was absolutely hilarious how you had Draco sent in the bathroom FOR HOURS... and when he came out all he could say-- was I hate you.. when he meant I love you. The simplicity of that statement bears sucha complex connotation... I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jeni on November 19, 2006
    awsome!
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  • From ANON - draco_luver92 on November 19, 2006
    I LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR. I REALLY, REALLY CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'LL BE WAITIN FOR THAT UPDATE THEN. OH, BY THE WAY, LOVED THE LEMON. THANKS.
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  • From ANON - Anathema on November 19, 2006
    *fans self* Wooooooooo! Dayum woman! That is one friggin' HOT way to start off a story!!! God's nightgown, it's just...guh. Gah.


    *clears throat*

    So....you're gonna update soon, yes? ^__^
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