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Reviews for Nightmares.

By : DarklingWillow
  • From ANON - Guest on February 03, 2022

    I'm late at the party, but this is INCREDIBLE.
    So well written and intense, thank you for have shared it!


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  • From pittwitch on January 17, 2011
    WD: Just a personal thing, but I'd reword your summary. Ordinarily, if someone refers to their own work in such a derogatory manner, I won't waste time reading it.

    "... thoughts creep out of the shadows ..." A very evocative turn of phrase, well done.

    "... flame of a candle peaking ..." Could you please change it to peeking? Peak - top of a mountain etc. Otherwise, I like the imagery of the candle's light intruding into Draco's room.

    You're right, you're jumping verb tense in places. :P Easily fixed.

    Wow, Lucius never struck me as someone who would scream or drink straight from the bottle. Those descriptors really force the reader to think of him differently, as a different person, in these nightly forays.

    " ... the feeling is gone, killed in the onslaught ..." nice phrasing

    The ending makes me wonder who is haunting him at Hogwarts. Does his father dare enter there? A classmate? Snape?

    Interesting. Like I said before, not a pairing I would ordinarily read, but very interesting. Thanks for sharing, PW.




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  • From Angelus82 on December 09, 2009
    Love and hate in the same time.
    I love this story, so sad and dark, but beautiful... and hate Lucius but in the same time, i like too much his character even if i belive he really is so dark inside.
    Hope you'll write more soon, because i really want to know what's going to happen to Draco and Lucius.

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