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Reviews for Sympathy for the Predators

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From MaskedLily on July 23, 2010
    So I have to admit that I wasn't sure how I would feel about a Harry/Lucius pairing as I've read a few before and didn't like them very well. But once again my doubts have come to nothing and for that I'm grateful. I really loved this story. The emotion and passions you write about are so strong and amazing that I can feel them and immerse myself into them with no trouble at all and there are very few writers who can do that for me. Your stories allow me to get caught up in what is happening and forget reality for the duration that I'm reading and that is a fabulous feeling for me. So thanks for that and congrats on another well written story. =)
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  • From ANON - Dvice on March 29, 2010
    Did you give up on this? I love this! Don't let it die...
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  • From ANON - suzuki1969 on March 23, 2010
    This fic is fantastic!! Your Lucius is spot on in character and Harry is as vunerable and confused yet strong and set in his values as we can ask of a grown up version of the Harry we know. Brillantly written as the only other story of you that I read, your "their Phoenix". Are you open to take the challenge of writing a SS/LM/HP fiction? I have come across many of them and they are basically PWP ones, I'd love to see what you woudl do with it with the depth and care for details and slow development of characters and feelings in your stories!! Well done (stand up and applauds)!! Cannot wait for updates!
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  • From ANON - purple-er on February 20, 2010
    Finally!! Thank you SO much for this chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on February 17, 2010
    wow. ......okay had to just let that sink in. when i read your stories i don't look forward to the smut because i know that you won't write unless it works with what you're trying to achieve in the story. but i am pleasantly surprised when you do because the experience produces a plethora of emotions, realizations and spectacular moments that have just been forever captured in your writing. i have to say this was one of the better scenes. the sex was slow going but not agonizing more sensual and coupled with a very good plot. in short amazing and no position issues this time. ;) VIVA!
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  • From alecto on February 17, 2010
    what a lovely astral sex scene. gorgeous!
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  • From ANON - Jesilyn on February 02, 2010
    I have read just about everything H/D you have written here (and on Hex), but... occasionally, I do like a little Lucius, so... gave this one a try. You kept me up about two hours after my bedtime because I had to read it in it's entirety, and am now waiting eagerly for the rest. I love your Lucius, and I can't wait to see how this plays out once he gets back home with Harry. To see whether things move along with them, or... if Harry gets all... flustered and runs away for a bit longer. Anyway, I love it so far, and am excited for the rest.
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  • From ANON - Mia on February 01, 2010
    Of all the glories in this chapter, it was Ron's short appearancethat struck me the most. Now remember, I am as much a fan of villifying Ron as anyone, but I particularly loved this incarnation of Ron. He felt a bit like Samwise Gamgee. (From Tolkien, not your character.) I quite liked that. It was a truly pleasant surprise. I like that Draco is not feeble and weak in this simply because he is the aggressor and not the suitor. I also love that that does not make him evil.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - js on January 31, 2010
    I like your stories, because they always make me think. I'm glad Lucius is having to work for Harry's attention.
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  • From chris7100 on January 31, 2010
    Love the almost eligiac tone of Lucius' thoughts after Draco attacks him. This is a beautiful, if rather odd, piece. It's always a treat when you update. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - purple-er on January 28, 2010
    yay! another chapter! Thank u thank u.
    an absolute fan!

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  • From BoundnHurt on January 27, 2010
    my god this is absolutely the best. I mean... each chapter is something different something new...and i love it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 7!!! Sounds like someone in the Weasley family needs to talk to Harry!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on January 26, 2010
    again not fond of this pairing but this elegant game of graceful maneuvers and well articulated attacks are so intriguing. i want to talk to this version of lucius simply to test myself against his skill of stimulating conversation and see how i would fare. i know i wouldn't win but the chance to improve my own skills would be a sweet treat. i find that you often set harry's stubbornness against him especially when it comes to denying himself. do you really see him as still doing that after the war? or do you think he would have finally learned that there is no need for him to sacrifice everything of himself? or do you think that someone would have to help him learn that lesson? wish you would share your writing skills with me. til next time. viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - Sharkoon on January 26, 2010
    Harry's vanishing of the owl's claws in ch. 5 ruined this story for me. It's just too cruel (in general and for Harry in particular) to do this to an animal that only followed orders and which he easily could have held off with lots of other protective spells. An owl without claws can't ever sit down again and eventually has to die. And having to read Harry's derisive sentence after that makes me just angry. I could never sympathise with such a person.
    Needless to say that I'm disappointed. :(
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