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Reviews for The Other Child

By : SnapesOnlyOne
  • From ANON - staar on January 26, 2015
    Another one of Snape , I see that you really like him...so do I !!!! But what Mafloy Sr. did to his wife well to tell you i don't like him at all but well !!!!! hope Snape gets better ...Thanks for this and see you soon !!!!
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  • From JigokuDayu on July 16, 2010
    I like the plot and the way it's developing. Though I think it could use a rewrite to fix the grammar and inconsistencies. I'd say what bothers me most is that after being raped by her father, Amy doesn't seem to be at all effected by it. She never even thinks of it again. Maybe you should nix that part if you don't want to show her being traumatised by it. Him murdering her mother and trying to kill her baby is still quite horrific if you simply want to show what a monster he was. And you do show those things eliciting reactions from her later.

    I would say my favourite part is that you give Snape his due credit. He is the true hero and deserves so much more than what Book 7 dished out for him. *hates that book with a passion and does far worse things to the epilogue than you did* So thank you for your effort in the struggle to give Snape a happy ending! (And I'm sure he thanks you, too.)
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  • From yaoiwriter07 on March 23, 2010
    U really have to finish this!!!! and i love your character Amy, she is everything that i think Lucius sister would have been! Raven is a very cute!!! pleaase please update when yu can! great job on the plot line!!
    strider
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