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Reviews for Truth, Lies & Love

By : ProfSnape101
  • From ANON - Bethany on August 15, 2016

    Hope that you are not going to not finish this story 


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  • From twistedkitten on May 21, 2014
    You should update I of be stories like this :)
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  • From AlexavieraRaven on September 08, 2010
    This story is so beautifully written! i love it! more soon please!!

    I love how everything is twisted hehe how Dumbledore is the bad guy!!!

    Anyways hi Lol. I started reading this and couldn't stop. I love how you put two of my favorite pairings together like this!! it's just wonderful!
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  • From redrain520 on September 03, 2010
    what happens next?


    keep going keep going! i must know :)


    so wonderful i rated this story a 5 - you keep me interested
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  • From redrain520 on September 03, 2010
    i love it so far

    its okay if your spelling is bad in the story...i had to a beta myself so i understand really:)

    i know where you could find a beta there are several

    fanfiction.net
    hawthrone and vine (dramonie website only)
    mugglenet .com (beta forums)

    hope this helps :)
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  • From amsev on May 30, 2010
    Very intriguing twist (I like the Dark!Dumbledore concept). Keep writing!
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 13, 2010
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From dragongirl on May 07, 2010
    Poor Harry! He needs some love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Padfootsgrl on May 07, 2010
    poor harry. yeah severus. lol.
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  • From ANON - SevvysLove on February 23, 2010
    Love this....cannot wait for the wedding night. Please make it happen soon...I realllllly want those 3 in bed together.
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  • From RogueMudblood on January 27, 2010
    I was trying to read it, really I was, but I got so distracted by the links being *in* the text that I couldn't do any more, and I really don't remember enough of the "Hermione's really a pureblood" story to give you any more of a review. A suggestion: since you've already put the links at the end of your story, take them out of the text. You've made too many paranthetical statements that aren't really statements - it detracts from whatever you were trying to convey.
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  • From iamtherealmaverick on January 26, 2010
    Here's a test. Take it all the way to the end, even if it's just for fun. I think it could help you sort things out. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm


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  • From Padfootsgrl on January 23, 2010
    of course he isn't going to make it easy. he's severus snape. lol. really good chapter.
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  • From Chaosmage77 on January 12, 2010
    For being your first fanfiction I like it very much. I can't wait to read more. As far as Beta's I have some free time and I'm not to shabby in fixing others mistakes. If you want my help you can e-mail me at brittanyfaith13@hotmail.com. Hope to read or hear from you soon.
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  • From ANON - iamtherealmaverick on January 09, 2010
    Good concept but careful there, you're Mary-Sueing.

    Get rid of the self-insertion and you'll have a good fic.
    ~M
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