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Reviews for Losing No More Time

By : TimeLoop
  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 05, 2010
    I like time traveling stories quite a bit, so thank you for writing this. I look forward to seeing where you go with it in the end. I find it very curious that Draco had a part in it. I am pretty sure he wasn't planning for his father to fall for Hermione, but he had to have had some change of heart to do it at all. I am not rushing the story, or asking you to change it in any way. I am sure you will get there when you mean to do so. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 05, 2010

    Chapter 5: Thanks for adjusting those lines. I can wrap the text much narrower now. YLucius was a total git to Narcissa when he first met her. Why? Did he know she was chosen for him at that point? Typical, selfish behavior for teenage Lucius. So
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  • From voraciousreader on January 05, 2010
    Question: does he know yet that she is muggleborn? if not this is going to cause his considerable consternation.
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  • From chris7100 on January 05, 2010
    Thoroughly chastised lurker here - I'm really enjoying your story. Your young Lucius's courtly manners and apparent kindness are delightful, although I find myself examining everything for a more Slytherin motive. I'm quite looking forward to the big reveal on why Snape and Draco brought him forward... Please update soon!
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  • From PrincessHildaWerewolf on January 05, 2010
    Won won needs a smack on his bum-bum! How dares he snog Herms? Lucius' chivalry is amazing. Isn't he too sweet? She should huggle him for this! What is Severus up to now?
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 04, 2010

    Chapter 4: If YLucius is over six feet tall, he must tower over petite Hermione. And his eyes must have been trained on her rising hemline as she stepped over the threshold into Gryffindor common room, for him to see her black knickers. That
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 04, 2010

    Chapter 3: Good point about the potions innovations would change the curriculum in 20 years. Eek, McGonagall is throwing Hermione in YLucius
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 04, 2010

    Chapter 2: Important Note!!!!! You need to remove or at least shorten those ~1~1~1~1 lines. Whenever you make long lines, the text cannot wrap any shorter than the longest line you
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  • From PrincessHildaWerewolf on January 04, 2010
    Yay! Lucius needs to slip her the Amortentia, then she will see how yummy he is! Headmaster Severus is mean to poor darling Lucius. Lu should have all he wants! More please!
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  • From PrincessHildaWerewolf on December 28, 2009
    Oh, Minerva liked Abraxas? That could be realistic as after all, Abraxas is much better suited for her age wise than Dumbledurk.

    Lucius is a hunk, she needs to be a little nicer to him. He needs love!
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  • From Kooldragon400 on December 25, 2009
    Oooh. A heroic Lucius. I wish he would help me out of a vanishing stair....and into his bedroom. *sniffle* I like it so far, dearie. You have good grammar and sentence structure, and the plot seems sound enough. I like your characters, but your Lucius seems a tad softer. It's because he's younger and less jaded, am I right? I don't mind it, I just noticed it. Anyway! I hope you enjoyed your Christmas vacation, and I look forward to the next post, whenever you decide to give it!

    ~DragonFyre
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  • From LaBibliographe on December 25, 2009

    Chapter 1: This story has a very creative bent to it. Unusual for a character to move forward in history. I
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  • From margaritama on December 23, 2009
    I like the story but am a bit confused....Draco and Severus brought Lucius forward in time but they need to figure out how to get him back? Why do it in the first place? It seemed like it was deliberate then as if it was an accident. Sorry...thanks.

    Hmmm - hope nothing goes wrong or there's no Draco.
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  • From chickaboo on December 23, 2009
    Oh Lucius. You silly man. I do adore you. lol Fantastic update, hope you have a Happy Christmas!
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  • From PrincessHildaWerewolf on December 23, 2009
    Lucius is a hero! In Gryffindor robes! She should be charmed by his handsome looks and great manners! Feisty wench!

    Also, Herms is much nicer than all the other girls. And he knows it, our Lucius, err, adonis!
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