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Reviews for The Gold Puppet

By : Nerys
  • From TheLadyMiya on January 25, 2010
    chapter 2
    Haha! Nice, this must be the only time when the bad-guy-speech "I'm the baddest of the baddest and this is my secret but you won't be able to do anything about it or tell anyone" has actually worked. Now we readers knows what is going on but the heroin has no clue. Nice, nice. And Voldemort is known to have a lot of bad-guy-speeches. JK let him have a whole chapter in book 4 with almost only his bad-guy-speech. I think he gets off on hearing his own voice.
    And poor Hermione thinks it's just a nightmare. Mohahaha! can't wait to see what will happen to her once she realises that he is real and not just an hallucination. I have a feeling it will take quite some time....
    Next chapter!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on January 25, 2010
    Aha! I remembered my password. I'm such a good girl. And even better; I finally started reading this story. So there is no need to continue poking me, Nerys! *pulls out tongue* Okay, so I won't leave such a long review right now. Want to continue reading. Good beginning girls, good beginning indeed. I'm sure the Dark Lord is very pleased. Hermione's already possessed, Tommy-boy is looking good again... yes, all very well written. Now I'm curious so I'll continue to read and see what happens when Hermione wakes up! Cheers!
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  • From chays020 on January 22, 2010
    Where do I begin? Oh yes -- with the Weasleys. Ginny being tormented (and drugged) into insanity? Ron getting flayed by the truth -- that he's a no-account, jealous, disloyal, stupid git? It's official: I love your Tom. The redheads deserve that and so much more, and I get the feeling Voldy's going to give it to them. Poor Harry...not!
    I'm not crazy about the cup torture (which is a really, really weird phrase when you think about it), but it's a fascinating twist on horcrux lore. And I very much appreciate how you're introducing the idea of Voldy "caring" about Hermione, while still keeping him so deliciously, scarily evil. Great update.


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  • From ANON - Nicky111 on January 10, 2010
    I am just not that into this story. For some reason it is just not catching my fancy. I think it might be because I am not into the whole "sharing a body" thing. I really like The Apprentice a lot! So I will definitely keep reading that one!
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  • From chays020 on January 10, 2010
    I'm enjoying this story a bit too much, I think. I mean, clearly I should be rooting for Hermione to break the hold Tom has on her, right? And I should want someone to really listen to Ginny, who knows a bit of the truth, right? But I loathe the Weasleys, especially Ginny, so I find myself hoping fervently that Hermione crucios her little red head off (because of Tom, of course...) and maybe lays a bit of hurt on Ron, too. Can't wait to see what Tom/Hermione has in store for Harry, now that I think of it. More, please!
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  • From marieve on January 07, 2010
    Tricksy Tricksy...I can't wait to see what Tom's next move will be! I love how you write and this chapter kept me hooked!! Ginny is going to be soo damn frustrated that everyone thinks that she's crazy or imagining things, when she's the only one that actually realises what's happening..Tom however, I think he'll be getting a slight wake up call when it comes to handling Hermione, she's more crafty than he knows. And I cannot wait to see Hermione's reaction when she realises that something in her head is not quite adding up...I'm expecting severe thunderstorms, high winds and a high chance of hail. ;)
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  • From ANON - cennaka on January 02, 2010
    Wow, looks like Hermione got Ginnied. I think she'll be more of a challenge though. Did she get possessed when she destroyed the horcrux or was she just weakened enough to be susceptible later? I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - the-quiet-girl on January 01, 2010
    superb start, I love the way you both write, so for me this is kind of like a new years present - unexpected and utterly delightful.

    I love the title too, not sure why, I just do.

    I have a few suspicions as to where this is going to go and cannot wait to see what 'evil-ness' occurs.

    *applause and cookies for you both*
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  • From francesk15 on December 31, 2009
    omgggg u have me on the edge of my seat! Please update
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