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Reviews for Ceremonies of Strife

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - polka dot on February 08, 2010
    Harry's got a big dark secret, oohhhh.
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  • From ANON - purple-er on February 08, 2010
    Just read the 13 chapters at one sitting. pretty good.
    you already know you're a great writer, but no harm in saying it again.
    Harry's obsession with necromancy is extremely believable. It's a surprise that so few writers explore this.

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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 08, 2010
    about #13...

    I'm so glad you FINALLY let them have that conversation.

    In the back of my mind, I was HOPING you'd let Harry hear
    how Draco still feels about Muggleborn, because I think they
    need to get that out in the open, so they can deal with it and in
    Draco's case, get a 'little' open-minded.

    ...and why does Harry think he got off easy with Draco??? :-)
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  • From icedragonbreath on February 07, 2010
    About your reply to my comment... I don't remember saying anything about Portillo Lopez being possessed...

    Ch12: What? I'm more confused about the tentacle than Draco is now. Oh Harry.... So communication is the key...
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 05, 2010
    about #12....

    1. Okay, I'm not in the story and even Pushkin had me
    wanting to bang my head a couple times, dealing with
    him is like pulling teeth. O_o

    2. You know what, the section when Harry was practicing
    the 'Idiot' ritual to the session with Draco, I don't
    know WHY, but it felt like it jumped from time frame to
    time frame unexpectedly.

    Like watching a movie that skips from scene to scene, but
    you're not sure if it's the same day or not.

    That was my first impression...were you trying to make it flow
    in a certain way?

    3. I think I 'get' what HE is trying to do, what it all boils
    down to is this....,it's more than JUST revenge, HE wants to forget.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 05, 2010
    Sooooo need chapter 13!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 04, 2010
    Dissection, Harry really should have gone it would have been a productive learning experience. I'm all for it, when it's not cute animals being dissected.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 03, 2010
    about #11...

    About time you started showing your sadistic side again! :-)

    Keeps us on our toes...on the edge of our seats...and mentally
    screaming.

    Got a bad feeling though if Harry DOES keep on the path to
    Necromancy, he's going up against Lopez {a simple nay or aye
    will do}.

    Though I have a hunch what he's learning will come in handy.

    By the way, what WOULD be the purpose of turning the world into
    nothingness?
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  • From icedragonbreath on February 03, 2010
    Ch11: Oh, Harry caught, but able to bluff his way out... I hope that isn't his last chance to stop. Oi! He's dead or in a new body? Maybe the one that rushed in to tell them he's dead is now him? Can't wait to find out what they find out about the tentacles.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 01, 2010
    well of course harry has delusions of grandeur, he was practically bred that way
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  • From icedragonbreath on January 31, 2010
    Ch10: Wow! Great chapter I love how Draco seemed to fall into protecting Hermione without a second thought. So he can work with others as partners. *smiles* Yeah, Harry! Great fight scene. Were the tentacles part of Nemo's body? I'm so glad you used the pets in the fights. I love Harry to the rescue.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on January 30, 2010
    Hero Harry does it again. Go Harry!
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  • From ANON - rafiq on January 29, 2010
    Finally, with the apparent capture of Nemo, we may get some idea about who Nihil, Nemo and Nusquam are. Although I'm still not sure if Nihil is a who or a what.
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on January 29, 2010
    I'm a tad excited to see what you'll do for the moment when Draco learns how to make a patronus. Seems like they've totally forgotten about it.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on January 29, 2010
    holy shit!!! That was wicked kool! More please!
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