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Reviews for Ceremonies of Strife

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From thrnbrooke on May 01, 2010
    I'm worried now.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 30, 2010
    If there's one thing I decided on is this...once you see an idea, you
    definitely know how to work it. You go girl!!! :-p
    *************
    about #34...

    1. I didn't realize this until you wrote, but I truly miss the Slytherin
    side of Draco Malfoy. We need a balance between goody-goody & straight
    malice.

    2. How in the world did you come up with the Nemo & Nusquam
    explanation? Did you bounce ideas off someone?

    3. When you think about it, I wish Harry would get to know Draco's
    personality more and REALIZE that the boy used to be a Slytherin!

    Draco is quite capable of handling..or I should say...DOING the
    deeds that would be uncomfortable to those who came from a
    house of HIGH morale and STILL remain unfazed.

    Harry, Ron & Hermione need to realize that they need someone who isn't
    afraid to get their hands dirty.

    I'd say more on it, but it's late...

    Anyway, I liked this chapter, it had the right amount of tension &
    there was no sugar-coating during Harry & Draco's 'confrontation'.
    Though I was curious to know if they would have dared to duel
    each other to prove who's right.


    nuff said...
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on April 29, 2010
    Man. I love Draco like this. So badass. Harry's ideals and morals seem like they'd be a problem even if they weren't interrogating Aran. Aurors would have to do this on the field too I would think. Draco now seems like he's best suited for the job. It's a hard choice to make to hurt someone like that. But generally the best if they say nothing normal works on them.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 29, 2010
    Oh I like chaos and the whole everything to nothingness, yeah he's cool in my book.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 28, 2010
    Excellent job! *looks around* Well, this story has certainly progressed in my reviewing absence. It gladens me to finally hear of Draco's self-realization, an excellent step 'into being' as you put it. Outstanding job!!!!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 27, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 34!!!
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  • From icedragonbreath on April 25, 2010
    [Had a longer reply, but it wouldn't post and I lost it.]
    CH33: So many faces, so little time. I'm glad Draco made it time and that Harry was holding his own.

    Is it time for Harry to worry about Draco loosing control?
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  • From Enamoril on April 25, 2010
    I forgot about this story for a long time, and I have to say I did not regret it. Not because the story isn't good; no no no no. Because I got to read 33 chapters of it all at once, and it all be brand new to me. =3 I love this. Now if ONLY Sirius would just rise from the dead, mind and body... and be happy about it!

    Damn; I know it'll not happen... but... T_T I loves me some Sirius.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 25, 2010
    about #33...

    *whines* Monaaa...when are you going to do Wolf in the Making??? *pouts*
    You can't put something that intriguing out and leave folks hanging!

    Will it be after the third part of this series or in the middle of it?
    **********

    If I recall, I think I was asking what the spell meant or, basically,
    just for the TRANSLATION [in a nutshell]. It doesn't have to be the
    exact meaning or accurate.

    You know, the part where Draco was questioning Aran and everyone
    seemed to freeze.

    My first thought was 'Slytherin'.

    Would it be something if everyone in Slytherin were taught since third year
    how to intently question someone or get them to listen with the intensity
    of a snake? The way a cobra hypnotizes its prey before it strikes...

    I always thought you would have done that with Harry, with him being
    a Parselmouth. Give him the ability to 'hypnotize' with his Parsel language,
    since the hissing IS similar to a snake, but that's something I think deserves
    its own setting in a different story. Don't cha' think?
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on April 25, 2010
    Ohhhh Draco finally stepping up. I kinda like it. Especially in regards to Harry. *wiggles eyebrows* lol. Cant wait to see how this turns out. Arrogant Draco can be hot but dangerous.
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  • From ANON - KadyRae on April 25, 2010
    I hope they finally get some answers this time... very intriguing chapter! I am assuming that Aran's un humanness means he is working with Nihil?

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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 24, 2010
    oh a hive mind so Nihil is like the Borg. I really liked the Borg
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  • From ANON - KadyRae on April 22, 2010
    Love it! update...?
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  • From ANON - rafiq on April 20, 2010
    Are there any auror trainers who don't have a secret agenda? Was Aran's spell to remove the 'dark shimmer of necromancy' from Harry's head? Are the others Portillo Lopez's group?
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  • From icedragonbreath on April 19, 2010
    Ch32: What?!? I guess asking to dodge a bullet for a third time was asking too much... Who's side is this instructor on? Aura, Nihil, Lopez, or maybe even another side, Necromancers?
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