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Reviews for Ceremonies of Strife

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - angelmuziq on April 19, 2010
    Ahh another plot twist! I love it, always leaving me desperate for more. What has Harry gotten into this time? And I hope that Draco will find him and help and then kick that Auror's butt. I do so love a vengeful Draco out to protect Harry. Another great chapter. My appetite for your stories has been quenched for now. lol. Cant wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 18, 2010
    about #32....

    *whispers* I see dead people...

    Okay, I couldn't resist, but it DOES make sense considering
    what Harry had done.

    By the way, do your Latin words have meaning or are you making
    them up as you go along.

    ....and is there a third installment still or will it be condensed
    to a mini chaptered story...just a few chapters to bring it home?

    ...AND how long do you see this second part being?
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 18, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 33!!! What did that spell just do? Why did he cast it? Sooooo need more!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 18, 2010
    Poor Harry it seems like someone's always out to get him.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 16, 2010
    about #heck if I know...

    ...and what business is it of Lucius that he had to be there??? O_o

    I'm glad to see/feel there 'seems' to be a type of balance with
    what it is Harry has done opposed to how it COULD have turned out
    if he had gotten deeper into necromancy.

    Of course, once you've done something that affects your total being
    of COURSE there will be repercussions of some sort.

    Hmmm...

    If there WAS a way to balance Necromancy with Auror skills, then
    there would be a secret division in the Ministry that no one else,
    but an elite few, should know about. Now, that would be a twist in
    the story. :-)

    As a matter, that WOULD be something different in a Harry/Draco story
    about Aurors. It may seem far-fetched but, hell...it IS fiction.
    What do you think?

    You are doing a third installment right?
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  • From icedragonbreath on April 16, 2010
    Ch31: Boy, after dodging one bullet, Harry had to dodge another.
    I'm glad Draco didn't just walk away when he found out there was another secret kept from him.
    Nice group dynamic. They now have someone in the group itching for a fight, the main four never have that fire in them. They need Ventus for that. It's nice to see a character that has the skills to survive being part of their group.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 15, 2010
    Sooooo need chapter 32!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 15, 2010
    Harry's right they were chicken sH!+ when it came to fighting Nihil but they'll go after Harry because he's still a trainee. On the other hand he took of Voldermort, he should be getting more respect or at least people should be smart enough not to threaten him.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 13, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 31!!! That little blackness worries me!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 12, 2010
    This reminds me, although it is in no way related, to a story in which Harry could see the dead and sort of command them after coming back from platform 9 3/4. I remember he could identify killers by seeing their hands. Anyway I'm thinking after this Harry will have some kind of visible mark that says 'I've been a bad wizard'.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 12, 2010
    about # 30....

    *does the Snoopy dance* It's about time you upped the stakes a bit!

    First...damn! That was some exciting s***! :-)
    ...and it's weird to see Draco in charge of the group, especially
    when you're so used to Harry being in the forefront. But, I guess
    this little role-reversal is a little prerequisite [sp?] of things
    to come...in another story?

    Second, the Return of Parseltongue [sounds like a story], what a
    twist!!! Finally, someone found another use for Parsel language
    than seduction, not that seducing someone in that language is
    boring, because it isn't. ;-]

    Third, if I didn't know better I would think Ventus DID have some
    connection to Nihil, not that she wasn't creepy enough.

    ...or just on drugs.

    Fourth, got a bad/uncomfortable feeling while reading that last
    paragraph that Harry might...MIGHT...think he can do Necromancy
    after all, as long as he doesn't succumb to it and remember who he
    is to the people who care for him. Have some type of anchor.

    I believe that Parseltongue put a new twist in it for him.

    Besides it got me thinking, if you did make a Necromancer, would he
    have to live a lonely or solitary life?

    Just an idea that popped in my head..and you know me and my ideas. :-)

    Fifth, there is no fifth...just playing. :-)
    Okay, maybe I'll admit I hail from Texas. NOW, I'm
    finished.

    Good job girl & nuff said...
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on April 12, 2010
    " And a dark shimmer settled permanently into the back of Harry
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  • From icedragonbreath on April 11, 2010
    Ch30: What?!? The Glamour acted as if the ritual was real? Necromancy without the dead?
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  • From ANON - rafiq on April 11, 2010
    I liked the way you put Harry's ability to speak parseltongue in this story. Parseltongue is clearly a powerful magical language. So spells in parseltongue should be more powerful than spells in English or Latin.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 09, 2010
    about #28...

    *points at author* Hah!!! I KNEW it!!! I knew there was something
    off about Dearborn, but yoooouuu tried to be misleading!

    Now, matter how you tried to throw folks off, there was
    STILL something about him that didn't sit right with me!

    Now, that healer, there's something screwy about her, too.

    ANYway, glad SOMETHING good came out of Harry using that damn
    necromancy....the idiot.

    By the way, glad to see Flame FINALLY and is Nasquam[?] going
    to be mentioned soon and the third one who's name I forgot.
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