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Reviews for Ceremonies of Strife

By : Lomonaaeren

From KraesObsession on April 08, 2010
that was pretty intense! im excited for the rest of the battle!
hoping for a steamy scene soon too.....:)

How did Nahil manage the two bodies fighting each other at once thing? Does he have the power to be in two bodies at once, or was it illusion, or.... :D

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From icedragonbreath on April 07, 2010
Isn't hell just about to rain down on them? They need each other more than ever.

Ch 29: About Nihil.... What?!?
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From ANON - polka dot on April 07, 2010
It seems that Draco would be the last one Dearborn would have been willing to mentor unless he wanted to hurt him, but he always went after Harry so I guess I'm not getting it.
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From ANON - qwerty on April 07, 2010
Holy shit! Didn't see that one coming! What a crazy twist! So pumped for the next chapter!
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From icedragonbreath on April 06, 2010
Ch28: Awe, nice Draco/Harry moment after the Hermione encounter. So sad she doesn't believe in him, but Draco is getting back to trusting Harry more and more.
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From ANON - SP777 on April 05, 2010
about #28....

1. About time you brought the little dog back, I thought I had to call
the W-SPCA [W for wizarding] on your ass for neglect! Hmph...

Now, I'm just waiting on Flame...

2. You know it amazes me, how you keep writing stories, haven't you
thought about taking a break and giving yourself time to BREATHE???

If it was ME, I wouldn't stop writing, but I wouldn't post right away.
Just have the story written, take a short vacation, then come back
and post what I've already written.

That's just me though. Of course everyone else would be like 'what the
hell do you mean take a vacation???' But, authors deserve a break...

I just don't want you to burn out, no matter how much steam you got.

Okay, enough being the Mother Hen...

3. I wanted to mention 'Come Slowly Eden'. As you might know, I said
that was a fun story! :-)

That type of competition is RARE in a story that you read, even yours.
I'm glad someone suggested it. Simply, because of the fact, it broke away
from the norm somewhat...Harry trying to get one over Draco in a 'game'
of breaking someone's will....sexually.

For a second, I thought you were going to have Harry flash Draco during
the Quidditch game, with nothing but a...thong or something of that nature.

Anyway, I liked this chapter, with its taste of intrigue. Hopefully, Draco
hasn't bitten off more than he can chew dealing with Lucius.

...and let's see more action!
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From ANON - polka dot on April 05, 2010
I wonder if I can somehow rig up a costume to make my mom's papillon look like Politisse. Personally I hate small dogs, so I don't mind torturing it a little.
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From ANON - KadyRae on April 05, 2010
So I fell to temptation, and began reading another of your stories.... Amazing as always, I cant believe sometimes how well they suck me in, and manage to temporarily destroy my study habits, lol.
Question, does Harry realize that he has met Nemo before this all started, with Hagrid? It seems silly that he wouldnt, but I cant remember them bringing it up. Cant wait for an update :) Is this portion of the trilogy expected to be about as long as the first?
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From icedragonbreath on March 30, 2010
Ch27: Poor Draco can't stop worrying about Harry going dark. It's good, story wise, that Draco still doesn't trust Harry completely. I love how Draco slipped into the role of leader for a bit and he probably didn't realize it either.
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From ANON - polka dot on March 29, 2010
I feel a little bad for Lucius. Draco is going to stand up his own dad. But how will Lucius get Astoria there, he can't tell her he's not in Azkaban and so he can't make sure Draco meets with her.
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From ANON - SP777 on March 28, 2010
about #27....

1. You know, when I really think about it's kind of weird that the
'Boy Who Lived'...'Savior of the Wizarding World' is a somewhat,
partial necromancer. Too bad he can't balance that in everyday life
and make use of it. It could come in handy when/if he becomes an
Auror, especially when he's on a case.

2. Draco held it open with one hand on it. If he gave Harry something, his
thoughts ran, he should get something in return.
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From ANON - SP777 on March 23, 2010
about #26...

1. ...and the Generals are going into action! :-)

2. It just hit me, what happened to Politesse[?] and
Flame???

3. ...and what's wrong with fluff, fluff is good! :-p
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From thrnbrooke on March 22, 2010
Sooo need chapter 27!! I wouldn't trust Lucius!
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From icedragonbreath on March 22, 2010
Ch25: Wow, talk about stirring up a hornet's nest. They want to think about adding a fifth member when they can't get the current four to trust one another.
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From ANON - SP777 on March 19, 2010
about #25...

1. Harry & Draco...ahhh yes, all is almost right with the world..no
thanks to the malicious authoress. *glares at the author*

2. At least now you can see what drug Ventus is on?

:-p

3. I think what I wanted to ask you last time is...do you see either
Harry or Draco as submissive, because I see neither boys as such.

The reason I brought this up is that I've been reading OLD stories and it
seems like folks were really into Harry being submissive and Draco being
this suave dominant...and I'm like 'what the hell!'

Because if you really look at it from a reality POV, neither wouldn't
know WHAT to do in that department, unless there's a Sex Fairy somewhere
in the Wizarding World. I would think it would wind up being an equal
relationship, with Harry looking out for his partner's well being and
Draco willing to submit every now & then..for Harry or someone he TRULY
cares about.

ALSO, I can't see Harry being submissive anyway, because of the simple
fact this IS the same young man who's been fighting a deranged wizard
for many years, wouldn't he have SOME type of backbone???

But, for some reason, people see Harry as submissive because of height
difference. True, Draco is slightly taller, but does that have to make
Harry an automatic candidate for the 'female' in the relationship?

I find myself liking stories where Harry has at least grown to at least,
5'11'' that way he has SOME type of advantage. I even like the one where
Harry gets a power boost, the ole' 'Harry-comes-into-his-inheritance'
story. You don't see those anymore.

Anyway, those are some thoughts that hit me one day and I wanted to know
have you ever read those types of stories and what were your impression.

nuff said...until later.
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