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By : Gypsii
  • From niceladysakura on June 06, 2010
    wow!

    another story to look forward to.. :)

    please update soon
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  • From Antonova on June 01, 2010
    great! update please!!
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  • From Gypsii on February 18, 2010
    げんきですか AncientDancer? LOL. You just want to beta so you can read my story first in class....we shall talk tomorrow.
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  • From Gypsii on January 06, 2010
    pirategrrl: After reading your comment, I realized that I had forgotten to add the paragraph that goes more into detail about his disguise. As it was mentioned twice, Harry is using a glamour for a disguise, giving him silver eyes instead of his trademark green. I will be adding the missing paragraph to the chapter tonight. Look forward for chapter 2 coming sometime at the end of the week. Thanks for reviewing and catching this for me!
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  • From pirategrrl on January 06, 2010
    If Professor Snape was talking about Harry when he mentioned 'silver eyes and black hair' then he did not notice that Harry's eyes are green, just like his mother Lily's. Snape would have known this, considering how attached he was to Harry's mother.
    Good start, then. Continue
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