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Reviews for Quiet Moments

By : rachlp87
  • From hyperninja93 on December 16, 2012
    I like this little one shot.
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  • From Jicky on February 18, 2010
    Nice first story, and I definitely like it being MPreg.
    Needs proofreading for spelling, grammar and typos. There are always betas over at the forum.
    Rather big clump of paragraph.
    Other than that, simple but sweet story.
    Cheers~
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  • From rachlp87 on January 18, 2010
    hiya tribalwolves here again,

    i have just started writing the info for quiet moments and
    you might get a short prequel soon.

    if you like it so much i will probaly get round to a sequel.

    but im not a great writer as u can see
    as i never really studied english very well
    and i would like to find a beta reader.

    thanks for reviewing
    keep leaving for coments
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    Tribalwolves xx


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  • From ANON - nari-chan on January 18, 2010
    please add more ! i would love to read more of this story . its a fantastic start and it would be a shame if it we didnt find out what they are having or more of their back story ?
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on January 18, 2010
    awwww that was so cute ! i loved it
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  • From koki on January 18, 2010
    arr thats so sweet, im pregnant and love the feel of baby moving.
    and two they will get a handfull and they may take like the weasley twins, seeing as one of their idols were harrys dad.
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  • From dragonfly8605 on January 17, 2010
    There were a few grammer errors but that's an easy fix. To me it sounded like English isn't ur 1st language. If it is I'm sorry. But like I said it's an easy fix. Just find a beta or what I do after I'm done typing I wait 3 days then read it over and by then most of the mistakes will be obvious. Other then that the story was cute and cuddly.
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  • From rachlp87 on January 17, 2010
    hi Tribalwolves here, i havent desided if i want to write more as this was my first story and it took ages to write Quiet moments. But i might try a prequel or maybe a sequel i havent desided but if theres enough people that want me to then maybe.

    Thanks for reading and i would love to hear more.

    Tribalwolves
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - S.S on January 17, 2010
    That was so cute... I loved it... Is there more or is that it

    S.S
    xoxoxox
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