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Reviews for Meet Me Halfway

By : windy
  • From jessbrown1102 on November 14, 2011
    Excellent! Love this...hope to see more. :)
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 12, 2011

    First question: Wouldn't Harry have noticed the change in scent when he drank his Pumpkin Juice? That's one of the distinctive characteristics of amortentia. And I thought the effects were supposed to be instantaneous?

    Neither here nor there, just a bit of confusion on my part.

    Second question: What catalyst caused Lucius to call into question his loyalty to Voldemort? Other than a random (and as yet unexplained) meeting within Hogwarts, Lucius has given no reason to lend credence to his changing sides. While I'm glad that Sirius didn't die, Lucius changing sides inside the Ministry being based on great sex? I never really considered his character to be that shallow.

    Without seeing the events that they're going through during the Occlumency lessons, without seeing Lucius form an emotional attachment to Harry, I'm having trouble reconciling his decision to try to help Harry at all.

    Perhaps there's been some great event (of which we have yet to learn?) that caused Lucius to be in Hogwarts that night which would explain the reason he is changing sides. Perhaps his lust for Harry is only secondary, and he has actually been tasked to teach Harry Occlumency. Unfortunately, there are so many things missing that I honestly can't determine the reason for his actions.

    As a result, without meaning to, your story is gradually turning into seemingly pointless sex between two men who are supposedly on opposite sides of a war. I'm afraid I'm just not following the process that led from Harry having a potion-induced reaction to Lucius to Lucius helping Harry to defeat Voldemort.

    The sequence of events in a story not only explains characters' actions, it also explains their interactions. Harry and Lucius' interactions, at this point, are only based on the "what do I get" mentality, yet Lucius is giving Harry extraneous information. I'm not opposed to the change in character; without the background information, though, I am having trouble understanding it.
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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2011
    rather an infuriating man, isn't he. What happened to Cissa?
    btw, ty for ccontinuing this. i remember reading it a while back and enjoying it (just re read it. :P)
    Will you be continuing any of the others? If not, i'll content myself with this.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 26, 2011
    chapter 6 please
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  • From hellangelhellina on January 07, 2011
    lovely.
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  • From LunaRiddle on November 30, 2010
    more more more!!! but stop bypassing the sex!
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  • From bloodravyn on October 27, 2010
    why are you such a great writer and have to get me addicted to your stories?
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  • From dominique1 on October 18, 2010
    i do hope that luc want harry for him
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  • From dominique1 on October 18, 2010
    i like that sirius is alive i do hope that luc care's about harry
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  • From dominique1 on October 18, 2010
    good start i found you and i like your work
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  • From hellangelhellina on September 17, 2010
    I love the story is so interesting. I love Lucius little nickname for Harry its so cute and funny. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 07, 2010
    Chapter 5 please!!!
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  • From Smailii1805 on July 16, 2010
    Hello again!

    Sorry, I seem to have mixed up the summaries of 'Meet Me Halfway' and 'Truly Madly Deeply' which I haven't read because the summary was so full of grammatical errors. Since you wrote that, too, the advice still stands. I can only talk about me, but summaries are the most important factor in my decision to read something .... or not.

    Fruehling
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  • From Smailii1805 on July 16, 2010
    Hello!

    Okay, your story isn't all that bad and your writing isn't either (you seem to have a problem with tenses, however, and I would definitely correct your summary if I were you), but it's not very good for a story if you tell your reader's the entire content of the next chaprter BEFOREHAND. Honestly, it's pretty stupid (no offence meant). So I would just delete those "teasers" who are pretty much summaries themselves. Enhances the suspence. Also I would very much like it if you'd fleshen up your story with some proper descriptions.

    As for ideas ... it's your story not mine^^

    Fruehling
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  • From LonelySyndrome on June 24, 2010
    Another interesting story! Yay! I will try my hardest to give you ideas! Just let me think about it.
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