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Reviews for Shadow Phoenix

By : CainBlack
  • From ANON - vicki on August 13, 2010
    oh my god there has got to be more of this freaking story there just has to be don't say it's over please please preeeeeetttttyyyy please
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  • From firelordeg on July 14, 2010
    sigh still no new update but i have hope that you are just having trobal with life and havent abandend this fantastic story
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  • From ANON - Jenna on June 20, 2010
    I cannot wait to see how you get the DO out of there and what Dumbles has to say about it.
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  • From firelordeg on June 05, 2010
    I'm starting to get worried that you haven't posted an unbetaed chapter yet i hpoe you are still wrighting as this is a fantastic story thou you should probably post it on more than just this site any ways please update a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From ANON - Squeaky on April 25, 2010
    Hi I think that the story is great so far but my main concern is the spelling. I have noticed that you have between 10 and 50 mistakes a chapter.

    Keep up the good work

    Squeaky
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  • From TheRealLoneWolf on April 18, 2010
    Tis a good story. However, it seems like you're turning Harry into Hitler. Charasmatic, well loved while being dismissed by the government, and sactioning human experimentations. I can almost see his S-Class standing in the shadows while the rest of the DO chant "Sieg heil!" to him. Granted, that wouldn't stop me from reading. I look forward to seeing more.
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  • From ANON - Nitpicky on April 16, 2010
    I know this might be a little nit-picky, but it is OOTP, not TOoP. The fact that you can't even get that right makes me not want to read the story
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  • From dragongirl on April 15, 2010
    AH! Final Battle and OoP All in one............ Like it!
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  • From sanda on April 15, 2010
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - firelordeg on April 15, 2010
    yha a new chapter i love this story i dont care if ther not bata read il read them any ways please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From ANON - Swimmer1988 on April 15, 2010
    Great story and if you need a new beta just drop me a line I would be glad to help
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  • From ANON - redjacobson on April 12, 2010
    excellent story, other than the spelling and incorrect word usage, but, considering english isn't your primary language, it's not that big a problem. My concern is, how do we get alerts for a new chapter? I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

    red
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  • From caboose5083 on April 10, 2010
    Great plot overall, keep it up. On a side note if you need anyone to beta a chapter or two just give me a shout and ill do my best.
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  • From ANON - Titan58 on March 31, 2010
    I have enjoyed your story so far, some of the parts are dull or seem to be empty but it is a well written story with a decent plot. I would suggest starting a new thread for SP II and SP III. This way there is a clean separation between your breaks in the story which im assuming will be the summer break. Thanks again for this story i look forward to your next post.
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  • From ANON - firelordeg on March 27, 2010
    yay a new fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
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