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Reviews for Shadow Phoenix

By : CainBlack
  • From Padfootsgrl on February 05, 2010
    i think sirius should benefit from the sex that will be happening at some point. him and hermione sounds good to me. lol. and i don't think he would be breaking any laws and here is why. the age of consent in England is 16 then adult at 18. in the wizarding world adult is at 17 so the age of consent would then reasonable be 15. anway good chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - firelordeg on February 05, 2010
    thank you for another chapter i love this story a few major mistakes in this one thou instead of barrow it should be loan and the quiddich position isint searcher but seeker thanks for sharing this fantastic chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From ANON - azphxbird57 on February 05, 2010
    Good last two chapters.I would like to find out who told Umbridge about the meeting at Hogshead.I also wonder what the enchantent was on the informer.Keep up the good work.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on February 04, 2010
    I am so into this story. Really like the powerful Harry. Just a suggestion, but you could make the ROR have passages to the different houses. I always wondered why it wasn't done in the story when it could make a passage to the Hogs Head in DH. Perhaps because nobody knew it could be done.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on February 04, 2010
    A good straight forward chapter, I like the idea of Dobby and Winky being Harry's elves. Maybe you could have Harry make some artifical puppet-bodies for the ghosts? You know made from plastic, metal, rubber, silicone, and charmed so that a ghost can use them (heck you could even put hidden weapons in them) that way it wouldn't be a dark ritual or spell like the holmoculi body Voldermort created. I think several teachers would also like to join the DA (too bad Hagrid can't keep a secret) I think McGanacall, Flirtwick, and Sprout. Course that's my idea cause you know that...that...Umbritch steps on alot of toes. Keep up the great work and have a great day.
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  • From ANON - yuiop on February 04, 2010
    loved it!
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  • From ANON - firelordeg on February 04, 2010
    thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    loved it!
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    i would rather have un-beta chapters than nothing.
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    loved it!
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    loved it, but the house names you are writing I's instead of Y's. It's spelled GRYFFINDOR or SLYTHERIN
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    good chapter!
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    loved it!
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  • From yuiop12345 on February 03, 2010
    great chapter!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on February 03, 2010
    And it begins Umbritch (misspelled by choice) I hope Harry's "shadow" records everything that...that...'government offical' does illegally perfectly cause without evidence she'll be a pain in the future. So Harry and Hermione are going to get "help" from Rita Skeeter too. (Oh boy here comes trouble.) well if she gives them trouble Harry and Hermione could always "punish" her. Speaking of punishing is Harry and compeny going to give the Dursleys some of there payback? When does more Luna time come in? There are four girls that I love in the story 1. Tonks (magic-goth) 2. Hermione (rule girl raeady to break them) 3. Luna (you don't know what going to happen next) 4. Fleur (beautiful and dangerous)cause they always liven up the story. Of course that's my opinion. Just a question does it bother anyone else that Dumbledore's plan was so risky that it could have gone wrong in just about the smallest of chances? I mean really!!! I know he's 153 years old but I think senility set in sometiem and where. I enjoyed your new chapters and can't wait for more and thank you for the story so far. Keep up the great writing. I wonder if they could use Mrytle for some spying?
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