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Reviews for The Master of Assassins

By : fantasyra
  • From kageookami on February 14, 2010
    You manage to combine the unique magic of the Potter 'Verse and your own style of Horror to a really well rounded story. Interesting plotline, especially as the "Goal" changes from defeating LV to a personal vendetta. You even have realistic and interesting character development rarely found in FanFiction. The only criticism I can come up with, is that you use American English, and not British English, which is a minor point at most.

    I understand you already got a beta, so I'm late to offer, should you still or again need someone to proof read your chapters, I'm willing to give it a go.

    kage
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  • From bill560682 on February 10, 2010
    well you did get me on who harry had helping him. i figured it was fluire since she would have trouble with english having to think of what she wanted to say in french then try to translate it to english. harry's owl never even came to mind.i started with the clue of the personknowing were headquarters was so an order member and female and trouble speaking. now i should have known it was not fluire when it took harry weeks to figure out who she was. as far as master goes i just wrote that off to fliure being bound to harry for saving gabby from the lake.

    now i would like to read some sex scenes sometime soon.

    a way for harry to get more cores would be to hide out just outside the leaky culdren with a dark arts detector set to pick up the dark mard, so whenever a marked deatheaters left going into muggle london harry could just pick them off.
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  • From Intelligo on January 28, 2010
    ...Cloud? Fucking really?

    Is his middle name DeathdemonkillangelSephirothMcBadass too?
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  • From JohnnyK55555 on January 28, 2010
    Very interesting. I like it.
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  • From Thisismyname on January 27, 2010
    Lovely! Oh I can't wait to hear about Harry slicing Snape apart.
    Oh oh oh!! If you don't mind, I have a lovely suggestion for Snape. I'm sure there are some nasty dark potions that require human ingredients. Harry could slowly harvest them from Snape, an eyeball here, a kidney there, and taunt Snape by brewing right in front of him. Especially if Harry were to "accidentally" make a mistake and make the potion, and thus the bits cut from Snape, useless. That would really fuck with Snape's head.
    Anyway... I really enjoyed Harry's little take on Snape's 1st year speech. Well done on that.
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Thisismyname on January 27, 2010
    Fuck me sideways...This is awesome! I can't believe I missed this gem being posted sooner!
    This is a great change from pussy!Harry that forgives everyone who fucked him over and slung him in Azkaban. Harry actually going out and kicking ass in gruesome ways is great.
    I can't wait to read more and think you should switch focus to this story, it's great!
    When are you going to tell everyone that Ishtar is Hedwig? I'd have thought you'd have done so by now. I'm interested in knowing your explanation behind this. Was she an owl who suddenly decided to become a humanmagus or a witch trapped in her owl animagus form, or something else? I hope we see an answer soon.
    Greatly looking forward to more!
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