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Reviews for The Name in Red: Beyond the Gate

By : Raug397
  • From PsychoticRose on July 21, 2011
    Love this story so far. I'm a new fan of yours (I spent all of today reading The name in Red, took me eight hours to finish the whole thing.). Let me just say that I think you're amazing for writing all that and coming up with such a great plot, I would love to be able to get a peek into your imaginative brain. Thanks for all your hard work. Can't wait to read the next chapter to this story. Happy Wednesday!!
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  • From ANON - G on March 30, 2011
    Update?
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  • From Prissylilchica on April 06, 2010
    Hey! This is a great story! Please add me to your e-mail list! Prissylilchica@gmail.com
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  • From missanimegrl on February 26, 2010
    I don't know if you got the original review I wrote for chapter two, but I'll do it again. To summarize: I loved it. The lemon was quite overdue and nicely presented, and the new plot point is intriguing. I'm very curious about how this new Head of the Department of Mysteries will pan out (he reeks of Saruman the White from LOTR, though I know you had no intention of crossing the two worlds. They don't mesh well). I'm looking forward to more! Please update again soon!
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  • From missanimegrl on February 19, 2010
    HI! I just finished reading your story, The Name in Red, and have now read chapter one of the sequel. I figured its best to just put reviews for both stories on a single one. Otherwise it'd just be silly. First, I am SO happy that for the first book you not only had Snape live after DH, but you made a plausible explanation for his survival! So many things were just wrong with his death in the books that it irked me. He could have survived! Come on! Anyway, I'm also very pleased with your original character, Sarah. True, the American angle is being used all over the place these days, but her typical American attitude and strength make her a worthy match for Snape in all areas (especially the bedroom ;D ). The story and plot of the first novel (cause let's face it, you wrote a complete novel in fanfic form, it should have the title, 'Harry Potter and The Name in Red', for all its lengthiness),and you made a plot filled with enough character development and action worthy of a Potter book, and had there been no lemons, it still would have been an enjoyable read and perfect for teen readers (though, it wouldn't be nearly as fabulous given that I'm a huge Snape fan, and I love Snape-rotica, as I call it ^.^ so please, don't skimp on the fresh squeeze lemon goodness when it comes to him!). I enjoyed reading your greater work immensely, especially at the end. Indeed worthy of the series, using a form of magic out of love and self sacrifice rather than for selfish, greedy gains was perfect. Now for THIS story, a much longed for sequel, I'm intrigued. What could be the cause of their non-aging? Yes, they share a soul that has been rent in twain, but perhaps that is an after affect of doing that. After all, when one creates a Horcruxe it makes the 'main body', in essence, 'immortal', but Voldemort still aged, even as he was splitting his soul apart. What could the meaning of Snape and Sarah's perpetual 'youth' mean? And, I've longed to ask, will they eventually be expecting a little dark-haired witch or wizard of their own? I think Sarah would just love to father Severus's children. ^.^ That is, if this un-aging thing isn't a hindrance. Oh, I'm on pins and needles! I can't wait! I hope you update soon! And I hope you won't be taking two years to write this gem of fantastic fiction! Please, add me to the email updates list! My email is ringer_grl21@yahoo.com. Please update soon! I'll be checking your page and my emails with vigilance!
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