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By : Buumkin
  • From Rosei on June 14, 2011
    Dear, Dear B!!!!!

    I really like the fact that HP is out of control and speaks in Parsel tongue
    when he is so aroused. That is fantastic and I don't know why many before you
    haven't done the same but I believe many after you will!!!!

    Your porn is hot (as always!!!) Thank you very much!!!!

    R
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  • From ANON - Nirehtyls on October 28, 2010
    This is wonderful! I love Snape! I love Harry! :)
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on September 20, 2010
    Oh my gosh...normally I don't like the Snape uke thing but wow!! That was some hot stuff there! Your smut scenes are some I'm envious of and I pride myself on mine. more. Wants it. lol
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  • From ANON - Bellamorte666 on September 05, 2010
    hottest fucking story i have read in a long time!!! The level of violence accepted so easily was astonishingly disturbing and erotic at the same time. Once i started reading, i could not help but to continue. Great job!!!
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on June 29, 2010
    Wow. That was certainly intense. Severus is not the only one with issues, as Harry has just proven.

    Excellent fic.
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on June 29, 2010
    Definitely full of wonderful smut. I've never really read any stories with Harry as the Dom in a relationship, nor have I read many stories with a more darkish Harry. Your story has twisted my view of him and I must say that I like it. I don't know if it was your intent to change the characters at all, but it's working. I can't wait to read more. Great job!
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  • From countesszero on June 03, 2010
    chapter four! and the sh***ing is getting better! yay!
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  • From ANON - Angel on May 18, 2010
    Wow, there is no way that your story is 'just porn'! Not that theres anything wrong with porn, far from it, but that was an interesting, well written story and I really hope you continue with it. It must be good as I'm willing to put up with the Weaslette being in it! :D
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  • From ANON - charlie on April 11, 2010
    Please let me know when u update, my email is charlie-becks@manx.net thanx! Now i really need to go hunt for my password for this lol
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  • From neelix on April 06, 2010
    I have been reading fanfiction for well over two years, and never have I read such a fantastic line as this:

    "It did occur to him, even before this shameful bout of depression, that he much preferred what was on the outside to what was on the inside."

    If tht doesn't sum up Snape I don't know what does. Just amazing.

    I wonder if you would be interested in me Beta'ing your writing? This is a great story, but the grammar and typos get in the way a bit. I'm happy to help (not that I'm an expert - if fact, I have only just become a Snarry fan and normally read / write HGSS...) but this is so good and I would love to see you develop it to it's full potential.

    If you want some help, email me here: neelix_2000@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Sarah on April 06, 2010
    looooving the hottness and smutyness! keeping it going please!
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  • From serenagold on April 04, 2010
    Unloveable? I love it!

    (Okay, so I couldn't resist the cheesy pun.)
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Elvira on April 04, 2010
    Wow.

    I loved these chapters!

    Update soon!
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on March 01, 2010
    Please do keep up the good work. I must admit, I wish that you could have provided me a bit more detail concerning the sexual positions. You lost me a little before the chair was shoved away and then I understood what position they were in. Otherwise the porn sequence was fantastic. What will Ginny say to this Snape/Potter relationship? And what about the rest of the Weasley clan and Ron and Hermione?


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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on March 01, 2010
    I like this story. The tone of the characters seems true to the cannon. Can't wait to read more.
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