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Reviews for Counter Dimensions

By : BellaDonnaPrincess
  • From ANON - Verity on January 12, 2013
    I really like this!! Please post more I know the story is from like 3 years ago but please continue it!!
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  • From HeartStar on April 14, 2010
    AHH!!!!!!!!!!! I want more please hope to see it soon.
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  • From jaceni50 on March 02, 2010
    Well, lets just say I'm disappointed in the feelings Rini had for Draco of her world. If she loved him so much, why is she cheating with Harry. It doesn't make sense, especially since she supposedly has known him since they were children. I can understand why Mione might be developing feelings for Draco since he is the only one there to help her and she doesn't have permenant attachments in her world. I don't consider her budding romance with Harry as a permenant attachment since they were neither boyfriend/girlfriend or fiance. Unless you tell me that Rini is a whore in her world and constantly cheated on Draco, then I don't understand it. Yes she can only count on friends and people she didn't have before, but that didn't mean she had to start a romance with one of them so quickly. I thought that she would try to get the Draco of that world too, not get with Harry. Oh well, what's done is done. I will continue to read because I want to know if they go back to their respective worlds and how and I also want to see more of the Mione/Draco interactions, but I'm not a fan of Rini anymore. Well, can't wait for your next update. :)
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  • From ANON - lemonade8 on February 18, 2010
    I think this has a lot of possibilities, and you make an interesting story. Some advice, though... I wouldn't put in little personal quips into the story, it tends to jerk the reader out of the universe and you want them to be immersed. The names you choose are fine, although it would only take a google to find suitable names from canon. I also wondered why madame Pomfrey didn't just give Hermione pepperup potion for her fever. Also, the fever was never explained. I'm not sure of the reason that she got a fever at all, or how it moved the plot along. Maybe you will explain it in a future chapter. I like the dark mark disrepancy. I also wonder why Draco in Rini's original world warned her to be silent about her situation, but then told his friends (slytherin ones!) that she didn't have a dark mark. Also, I'm not sure why Hermione would find Draco suddenly husband material. I know the one in the alternate universe cares about her, but it's such an abrupt switch I expected her to have to work on trusting him enough to give physical affection to someone who tormented her and verbally abused her in her world. I know this sounds picky, and it seems like I didn't enjoy your story, but I actually did enjoy it and will never give this kind of review or take the time on a story I DIDN'T enjoy. Hope to see your next chapter soon.
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  • From jaceni50 on February 10, 2010
    Another great two chapters. Really like this story and can't wait for your next update!
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  • From chiquitaf16 on February 03, 2010
    This story has good possibilities and it's not a common idea, I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on February 03, 2010
    I liked it!!!!
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