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Reviews for Prisms of Darkness

By : serpentinred
  • From ANON - cosettex on August 21, 2010
    Well wonderful chapter as usual, although I can't believe you left it hanging like that!! Oh I just want to see Hermione make a fool of herself in front of the Order, oh he's going to have sex with her in front of them, isn't he? Omg cannot wait, poor Hermione, the situations we put her in. lol. So you said two lemons in your message to me, but there was only one . . oh yeah, and how did I inspire this? Not that I'm complaining, mind ; )
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  • From ANON - soniab on August 03, 2010
    Excellent chapter. What will Hg do now? Three days is a long time to be under the influence of a lust potion.

    Keep up the fantastic work, and please update soon.

    love Sonia :)
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  • From Popcornbandit on July 27, 2010
    So very dark and wonderful, I first found your stories on FF.net and stalked you over to here. I am a HUGE vold/herm fan and you really wrote them out wonderfully. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Nerys on July 26, 2010
    Yummy! Such a deliciously evil smutty chapter. I love it. I've read it so many times already and thought I already reviewed, but imagine my surprise when I hadn't. Will correct that blatant inexcusable error, right now.

    "He extended his arm and curled his index finger, beckoning her to go over silently." - swoons. It's the little things that make him so droolworthy. Like this.

    "Shall I assume that you've lost your cleverness in our little trip? Or have I simply overestimated your intelligence?" he asked mockingly. He tapped his hand on the armrest, and a few seconds passed before he spoke again, a vicious smile on his lips. "Since you've lost the ability to comprehend simple signals, come over here, Mudblood. I want you in front of me." - Should I get out my Hermione voodoo doll already? I think I must. Love his mocking and him speaking down to her like that. XD

    *snnrkks* Oh my, he's really letting her have it, isn't he? Making her crawl to him, and then, making the floor so slippery that she can't even do that. *snnrkkss* That really was a wonderful image in my mind: Hermione the seal. And his "how clumsy of you" ... LOLs.

    "I will be most grateful," she answered, gritting her teeth even harder and clenching her hands. - Hermione's self-restraint is amazing me. LOL.

    sighs. I so love the part where he makes Hermione pleasure him. LOL. You're really getting it across to the reader how much Hermione feels uncomfortable and humiliated, and how much he's taking pleasure in taunting her, making it even worse with every move, gesture or spoken word.

    "A very vivid image of people roasting pigs above an open fire" - well, that puts a mental image in my head as well. LOL. Ah, interesting potions. Always knew that subject was more usefull than Snape let everyone to believe. XD

    ""Is your excitement because of the ... supposed control you have over me? To think that you had the upper hand?" Slowly, he slipped a single digit into her and started to rotate his wrist with just enough pressure so that he was touching every part of her, but not enough to satisfy her. "Or is it because you actually enjoy being submissive?"" - seeing she has no control, I'd say the latter. LOL. But eh... if Lord Daftness doesn't pick up on that, I can't be held...AHHHH!

    "he asked gently, almost like a man questioning the woman he loved.

    But Hermione knew that he was not being sincere. His eyes were still like gems, gleaming with a hard cruelty and emitting coldness." - And I like how you keep him I.C. He's still the evil sob we love.

    And Hermione is still the tough gryffindor that we know and love too. She doesn't become some sobbing wench when he cuts and burns her, but bites away the pain. "The look of agony must have been enough for him even though she managed to not utter a sound because he stopped before he spoke again." - Interesting that he stopped though. One does wonder why. He's sadistic enough to enjoy another's pain, so could it be that he does harbour some feelings towards her?

    "Once the potion makes its way into your system, you'll feel an uncontrollable need for the person you"
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  • From mrequecky on July 07, 2010
    Wow, intense :D LOved!
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  • From magentasouth on July 07, 2010
    BRILLIANCE!!!!!!
    Oh.. the next chapter is going to be even more horribly wonderful when hermione has to stand before her former allies in this state. You are the greatest..most devious..
    gold star to you for delicious cruelty!
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  • From magentasouth on July 06, 2010
    what a pity you never continued with this..
    In a sense i can kind of understand it.. but its so well written and there are so many delightful scenes in it.. it really is a shame
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  • From ANON - scarlet on May 29, 2010
    oh this was going so good pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon. Your fics are so underpraised. You ended it at quite a cliffhanger, please update soon. I love how you portray this deadly dark lord.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From ANON - love this story on April 16, 2010
    update update update!!!
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  • From ANON - mel on April 09, 2010
    come on! you have to write another chapter soon! i love this story and since you haven't updated in a while, ive had to search for new stories to feed my hunger for tom :( but none are as good as this story so please keep on writing!!
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  • From Nerys on March 29, 2010
    Waiting very impatiently on your promised smutty chapter, SERP.

    Surely, you don't have to sleep. Go write, write, write. LOL
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  • From ANON - liv on March 24, 2010
    holy shit, that last chapter was amazing. wow. so graphic. Cant wait for more!
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  • From Kayrox133 on March 14, 2010
    Okay so I had to do a reread today and I must know if you plan to revisit this story and write more or if you are devoted to Somewhere in Time right now?
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  • From ANON - dulce_invierno on February 25, 2010
    omg! i know im gonna love this.... an adult version? OMG! yeap, im gonna LOVE this :D thank u!
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  • From mrequecky on February 17, 2010
    Ohoh... Sounds really bad... Why doesn't he use Legilimens??? He can't really believe she is that good at it?

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