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Reviews for Somewhere in Time

By : serpentinred
  • From ANON - Christina on April 09, 2016
    What happened to the original somewhere in time where u showed the sex scenes
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  • From ANON - Pops on February 17, 2016
    So, this is the fifth time I've read this story now...I think it's very telling of how amazing this story is! I also just realized that I keep signing the reviews under different names soooo yea, just wanted to let you know that I adore this story--it's my absolute favorite. I am curious as to where all the lemons disappeared off to! It's not on FFnet, adultfanfiction, or AO3 :( this story is brilliant, of course, but I miss the lemons since they were so well-written as well. Please let me know if they are still around!
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  • From ANON - Pattycake on November 04, 2015
    Oh my gosh! This story is the best! I really really really enjoyed just everything about it! I loved Draco especially! So hilarious! The romance between Tom and Hermione was also totally realistic! I could definitely see Tom behaving the way he did and Hermione reacting the ways she did! You are such a wonderful writer and the author of what is most likely my favorite Tomione fic! Thank you so much for writing it!

    I just have a little issue though! I've read this story a couple of times now and it seems like there are parts missing from it! What happened to all the...you know...sexy times?

    I really enjoyed those parts of the story and not in a creepy way! I just really liked how they revealed plot points and gave me deeper glimpses into the minds of the characters!

    Has something happened to the site? Or is it just me that can't see the missing parts?

    Anyways, I just wanted to leave my first ever review of any piece of work! I hope you realize that I really adore this piece and that I'm so grateful you chose to share your wonderful writing with us! I hope you keep writing and that you continue being as awesome a storyteller!

    My eternal gratitude to you, SerpentInRed!

    Love forever,
    Pattycake
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  • From Kiikii-no-squeaky-chan on October 22, 2015
    I miss my lemons.... and I don't read hetero very often so that says something....
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  • From ANON - cloakanddagger on June 05, 2015
    I absolutely love this fanfic, I've read the entirety of it twice and I just think the complexity of Tom and Hermione is amazing and the plot is so well thought out. Just a quick query though, I was flicking through chapters and I swear some smutty stuff has been edited out very recently? Like when they are in Salazar's cabin and Tom and Hermione share a room, scenes like that. I may be going mad, but I swear they were much more graphic than they are now and they must have been edited very recently because I only read it a couple of months ago with a hell of a lot more smut!
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  • From ANON - Slytheringirl on May 29, 2015
    I'm so upset! Why did u take the lemons out of your story?! *sobs* do u have that version up anywhere else or send it to me ?
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  • From ANON - Pops on September 19, 2014
    I believe this is the fourth time this year that I've found myself reading your story. I believe that really does say something about your writing prowess! This is my absolute favorite story and I hope I can read more stories from you--I am in love with your writing
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  • From ANON - Kim on August 05, 2014
    This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Hermione was amazing and Tom remained true to him. Truly wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Lauren on January 06, 2014
    I need more!!! This was so we done. Please one and this is what happens later!!!!
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  • From ANON - k on January 02, 2014
    Ok 2 things.

    1...I've been following this story for a while. .love it. Absolutely. Fantastic story.
    2...I don't know what I missed...but who sent them back in the original timeline? Did I miss a hint?
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  • From ANON - Aviendha on December 11, 2013
    Yaaaay!! Another chapter! You made me so incredibly happy, thank you!!!

    You are right, usually even a crappy ending is better than no ending. Looking forward to the rest of the fic ... and any others you might choose to write/finish.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2013
    I'm so happy this story was updated!!!!!! I'm seriously happy, I love reading this story so much. Ive read so many tom/hermione fics and I think this is one of the best (if not THE best) ones out there. As always, the chapter was begautifully written and that opening dream scene had me cracking up, especially the wedding invitations part. I can't wait until the next update, keep doing your thing! ^^
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  • From ANON - Aviendha on November 26, 2013
    I had the feeling that the increasing intricacy of the plot (the insanely multiple time travels) will make the writer abadon the fic. :( Which is such a shame...

    Serpent, do you plan on ever returning to this fic? Perhaps you could simplify the plot and be done in a few more chapters? More isn't always more, sometimes it's less.

    I wouldn't even be asking except you are such a talented writer and your stories have a way of coming alive within the reader. After all this time, I'm still very much involved with your characters. Oh well, I guess an unfinished story is the one you remember most, so that's not bad. But towards the end the plot line has become so complex that it doesn't even work as an open ending which the reader can imagine themself and which can sometimes be a good alternative to the more conventional ending.
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 23, 2013
    This is seriously the best story ever. I've read many, many stories and this is the most memorable. I've read it three times in the course of five months just because I love this story so much, even though it takes me ages to finish since there's so many chapters. But this is seriously my favorite story of all time and I do hope that you continue. You have a gift with words!!
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  • From ANON - mekom on July 23, 2013
    I love this story. I went back and reread it from the beginning, because I was a few chapters behind due to life getting in the way. You are one of my favorite writers. You do an excellent job with character development. I love your possessive Tom. I was cheering on Ginny in the scene where she was ranting at Dumbledore for all the horrible things that he did in their original time.

    I am really curious to find out what is going to happen now that Hermione is back, and Tom has taken over. I hope that you get a chance to update soon. It would be a nice present before I begin vet school, and won't be able to surface until December. *looks hopeful*
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