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Reviews for Somewhere in Time

By : serpentinred

From MegiiOfMysteriOusStranger on July 14, 2011
I've already reviewed this chapter over at ff.net, but it occurred to me yesterday who Prof. Riddle must be: Could he be a Horcrux? Hmm? Hmm? ::grins widely:: Well, anyhow, I eagerly await chapter 50 to see you prove me wrong (because you're amazing like that)!
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From CafeAuLait on July 05, 2011
Hmm, I didn't see the change in time happening. I knew it would change, but I surely didn't believe that that would be the outcome.
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From CafeAuLait on July 05, 2011
YES! I've been waiting on Tom's pov. I really dislike that the majority of this story is from Hermione's pov. It would be different if the story was in first person but it's not. Anyhow, this was definitely the best chapter. It was very intense and I loved that Tom killed Salazar for taking away his girl. I love jealous and possessive Tom.
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From witch on June 25, 2011
Ahhhh!!!! *squeaks and falls off her chair, in a dead faint*

The last line of your chapter was a strategic move of epic proportions, Serpent! I applaud your cunning mind, darling... it seems like you would have felt right at home among your fellow Slytherins! (squints her eyes and sees Nerys and Ms Velvela among the green-clad gang as well). Evil cliffies is a must, of course! And my pulse is literally raising like a niffler on crack with the anticipation of what your next chapter shall contain! :D

What is more, the interaction between your characters was as entertaining and engaging as always! It looks like Ron is an utter moron no matter what timeline is concerned. Is it very, very evil of me to enjoy seeing him change colours like a demented chameleon in misery during his interaction with Tom? Nah... *scoffs at the absurdity of the idea* And it's quite entertaining to know that no one in the present timeline seems to know who Voldemort was before taking up the mantle of the Dark Lord... Weaslebee (I adore Draco's mocking tongue at times) has really put his foot into his own mouth, hasn't he? *cackles in sheer delight*

Basically, I can go on and on how amazing yet another update of your was... and the addition of Nefertiti's tomb was a nice addition! Looking forward to your update with held breath!!! (And I am also awaiting some Voldemort/Hermione interaction as well! I cannot wait to see how she shall handle the new body of her lover... *blushes prettily*)

P.S: I also had the chance to read your own review on my the Rise of the Dark Age story... oh, Serpent... I was on the verge of bursting into tears when I saw that two of my stories were gone! Technical errors are a real bitch, let me tell you that *pouts in unfairness* However, I changed my password and feverently hope that nothing like that will happen again. The 5th chapter is slowly but surely progressing forwards now until I am assured that everything is as perfect as I could get it (that's the mini-Hermione within me forcing me to do it!) :) And some Voldemort/Hermione interaction is on its way as well... hehe! XD

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From mrequecky on June 22, 2011
Yay, loved the new chapter :D
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From TheLadyMiya on June 15, 2011
Dun, dun, duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun. Mehehehe. Or course she snogged Professor Riddle! I'm really looking forward to learn more about how that came to be! And also, Hermione, please cut to the chase and just dump Ron already! I can't believe Ron actually waited two years... however, I do wonder if he has waited faithfully... Hermione hasn't. Mehehehe. And I was sooooo hoping for a little cosiness when Hermione got to Voldemort's room, but alas, they were just chatting. Chatting, chatting and chatting. What's this deal with Nefirtit's(sp?) tomb? I feel that I am forgetting something... hm, will have to reread this story later on. Oh, well. Now I should get to bed. Either way, very interesting chapter! Great work! Wish you best of luck writing the next one and talk to you soon :)
Toodles!
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From ANON - Fleur K. on June 13, 2011
Also, I totally agree that you need to write a Professor Riddle flash back. That would be HOT.
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From ANON - Fleur K. on June 13, 2011
What a pleasant surprise! I'm so glad you updated :) Ron is such an arse sometimes. Seriously. Also....professor riddle?! That was unexpected! What a cliffy, I can't wait to read about Voldemort's reaction....he never disappoints ;) Thanks for updating with another brilliant chapter!
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From Shamonti on June 13, 2011
NO-WAY!
I did not expect Tom to be a Professor to Hermione. I am expecting a flash back memory of their encounter. Teacher/Student lemon or lime is too HOT to pass. Please do one. I'm begging you.
However, please don't feel obliged to do a Lockhart flash back...I would choke on my own vomit if I read a scene of them lip-locked. *shudders*
Update soon! xx
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From ANON - mekom on June 13, 2011
OMG! Evil cliffhanger. I am dying to know more about these new memories. I am also curious to hear more about the Order in this timeline. This story just keeps getting more and more intricate. I love it. I hope that you get a chance to update again soon.
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From Popcornbandit on June 12, 2011
Oh GOD why do you do this to me! PROFESSOR RIDDLE! *dies laughing*

Oh yes, I can JUST see that. *wipes tear* so perfect, ah Voldy what now.

(Ron is an idiot though. . . *sigh* I mean Hermione is clearly smart, so what if she was into older men who happen to be Professors. After all none of the BOYS her age can keep on her level mentally. Plus Voldemort obviously had a thing for her to begin with due to the whole Time Travel thing. . . )

I almost wish Ron would ask Voldemort to marry him and Hermione. . . That would go over well since if anyone ever marries her it would be him since shes the closest thing to love he has ever had. Not love, more like a twisted, sadistic obsession but still the closest he has had to it.

Hope you update soon because I am literally going to freak out if I don't get more. :P

xoxo

Reine
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From ANON - somebody french on June 12, 2011
Nice,long,good chapter today! I didn't mind the wait, it was worth it!
"My Lord," she said, "Ron Weasley is at Hogwarts and asks for permission to see Miss Granger and the others." Oh, they are in trouble! I sense awkward moments and walking on egg shells ahead.
Hermione has reached a whole new dimension of patience. First Tom as Tom, then Tom as the Dark Lord ( which is not necessarily better)and now Ron. Wow. But it went kinda well, since he spend most of his time fighting about Draco, and he was satisfied with "It's a secret." It could of been worse,really. So she was pretty lucky.
"Mum wants to know when we are going to get married," Or not.....
"Do you reckon the Dark Lord can marry us?" Oh god, that's just wrong. I mean, even though Voldemort has a different status now, he's the Dark f*** Lord! He doesn't marry people. It's barely a step away from inaugurating a community center, or having a backing sale! He jut doesn't do that! He just doesn't! But I would like to see Ron ask. *will be eating popcorn with Draco*
I honestly cannot believe that Hermione would want lots of children, or at least not in Weasley terms, which sounds like a terrifying number (they make rabbits blush). And now Hermione has a good reason to end things since he more or less called her a slut.
"Professor Riddle." Wait, what...? How? When? Him? Is it his part time job? If so, they obviously don't know there the same guy. But then, that means he still has his looks. And Ron called him useless...Not good, not good. But what does he teach. Let it be Transfiguration like Dumbledore. That would be deliciously ironic.
So now I wait a month.* huge puppy eyes*
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From IkuniHattori on June 12, 2011
Dun dun dunnnnnn!!!! Oh, dear lord. You mean to tell me that Mr. Voldy-poo, aka Tom M. Riddle, not only lords over the castle but also teaches there? (did he get the DADA position? Please say yes. :3 ) Ohhh. . .If I were Hermione, I would hex Ron so badly he wouldn't be able to walk straight for months. . .
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From IkuniHattori on May 23, 2011
I found this on FF.net (and yes, I'm going to review there too) and I love this story. I simply adore it and I wish to worship you for your creativity. Your story is the first I've read that includes everything that you have. I also love your version of the 'future' present. :3 I love it.
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From ANON - Lisa on May 12, 2011
Loved this chapter. UPDATE SOON!

Also have on quick question I know you cut the smut out on FF.net, but are the chapters the same here and on Granger Enchanted. Thanks.
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