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By : serpentinred

From ANON - inuyashaluphsesshy26 on March 08, 2011
love your last chapter... :D
its so great... by the way, i follow your twitter... (veve_ch) :D
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From TheLadyMiya on March 08, 2011
Oh, thank Merlin you updated. I was reading this fic I've started to read several times before, but I've always stopped and I always forget why, because it's really well-written and perfectly edit in all that. Then I remember.... Hermione is a bloody Mary Sue. She is superduperpowerful because she was a virgin when she turned 17. Her animagus shape is a fucking UNICORN. Seriously. UNICORN! Have you every heard about anything more Mary Sue?!
Okay, end rant. Will read deliciously Tom now who thankfully isn't a pony-horse but instead have the decency to eat them. I like how he is all nonchalant about the murder. Yep, that's unicorn-blood for you, making you all calm and in control in bad situations. I should try that. Also, this proves that you do not become what you eat. You become the opposite of what you eat, mehe. (and yes, I'm aware that Tommy-boy haven't eaten any unicorns yet, but with all the time-travel you are working with...)
"No, he forgot to brew coffee for me this morning, and you lot all had two biscuits while I only had one." - Oh, Tommy-boy haven't got his coffee in the morning. That explains it all. Of course you become murderous without your coffee. And only one biscuit?! I'm surprised he didn't kill him twice.
Oh, now they are caged up and DRACO(!) is the one making sense. Yes, Dumbledore is a manipulative old goat. I'm not that surprised that Draco managed to pick it up.
Hm... so Coin of Charon, right. No, I don't think Lucius would want to bring Voldemort back. Instead, it's more likely that Voldemort is using Lucius to buy this thing so Voldemort himself can get his soul back. Because Voldemort isn't dead. Because Voldemort sent Hermione and C:O back in time so they could make sure he wouldn't die when the curse rebounded. Because Hermione will sometime soon let it slip how Tommy-boy will die. So then he has time to come up with an idea to change that. And thus, Voldemort isn't dead. MOHAHAHAHA. Did I crack the code?
HAHA, Hermione giving Salazar a piece of her mind... well, she is right. And that is so funny! Salazar storming out like the drama-queen he is ;)
Naaaaw, Hermione is missing Tom already. How cute. And Tom is mad about her leaving... I guess that can only mean he was planning something with her. Mehe! OOoh, and now Tom is killing his ancestor! How cute :) That was really about time. Mehehe. And I'm glad Tom wants Hermione so much and the way you are portraying it. If he had just said to Salazar how displeased he was and how Hermione was his, he would have come off as... well, Draco. But with a couple of curses to show his displease, he is actually Voldemort. Because Voldemort is more action than talk. Thankfully.
Great chapter! Really enjoyed it :D Good luck with the writing!

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From witch on March 08, 2011
Serpent in Red, you have managed to make me squee with utter happiness! As soon as I have spied that the new chapter was up, I managed to produce the most degrading sound of all *scoffs*
But
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From Popcornbandit on March 08, 2011
Firstly thank you for not spoiling with my speculation on who sent her back :D

Second, Oh sweet Christmas cookies! I love Tom so much. I feel bad for Hermione, but don't worry dear. Your possesive lover will get you back in a jiffy. (Although now it makes their future job moot since Slytherin is dead. . muahaha.)

I actually found this chapter far more amusing than I probably should have. . .

"Don't play cute with me, Tom Marvolo Riddle
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From witch on February 28, 2011
Ohhhhh!! I am enjoying this so much that I can barely find words to express my level of excitement! *grin*
Your Tom is certainly one of a kind...danger and sensuality wrapped in one irresistible package. What is more, it is pure joy to witness his unwitting jealousy. Nevertheless, I sincerely hope that it won't be the cause of Nicholas' death. He is a weird one but I really like him nonetheless )))
Your story and Nerys' one is giving me a much-needed kick in the arse to continue writing Chapter 4 of my own Hermione/Voldemort story! Therefore, I would like to thank you for that inspiration as well *wink*
Looking forward to an update! XD
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From TheLadyMiya on February 28, 2011
Ohh... I wonder what will happen when they try to sneak away to meet Slytherin. And why doesn't he want his heir to know anything about it? Hm... I'm starting to think more and more that Voldemort is somehow alive and was the one who sent them back ^^ But what reason could Tom have to go to Germany if not to meet Grinderwald (whoever, I don't think would have wanted that so much...)
Ohoh... why does Nicholas want to go to the forest with Hermione? Am I missing something? It feels like I am... Tom is getting jealous? hm... I'm missing something. Ooooh, now I realise what I forgot. Nicholas is the young man who they saved. I thought about the old man. *slap head*
Boy, Harry, Ginny and Draco are stupid... Tom will so want revenge after that talk. *shake heads* tsk, tsk, tsk.
Bah, so now Harry wants to talk and say that things are too dangerous... just because he isn't the one to put himself at the risk. It's all okay when he does it, but if someone else tries to do something that can be a little dangerous, then he is full of objections... bah...
Dietfried Kaufmann is dead?! Why? Shouldn't he go after Nicholas? Or? What, what, what? Bah, now I'm all confused... I think I'll have to reread the last couple of chapters... I feel like I'm missing something...
ooooh, well, great chapter! Not the most exciting, but all chapters can't be that ;) I guess the next one will be much more exciting! Ooh, will Hermione confront Tom now or stay back? Hm... interesting :) Toodles.
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From ANON - Fleur K. on February 27, 2011
GAH! I always want your chapters to go on forever.....or instead of updating with one chapter I would rather you update with, hmmm, 5. Unrealistic, I know *sighs* I am really interested to know more, why he killed him and where the hell Nicholas is. DEEP QUESTIONS! To sound extremely redundant.....that was another great chapter and I am left wanting more as always :)
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From TheLadyMiya on February 27, 2011
Baaah... didn't have time to read this... remembered I have to go up earlier tomorrow so I'll be a good girl and not begin to read until tomorrow... yes I will... I WILL! Okay... eh... will review tomorrow when I've read then ;)
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From Popcornbandit on February 27, 2011
OH MY GOOSENESS!!

Ok, Tom murdering someone. . . Not so shocking.

But. . . IT IS!!! o.o

I was expecting Nicholas to be dead! Oh boy.

And don't worry I understand people can't update all the time. Hell I update my stories once every 3 months. My poor readers probably got tired of waiting on me by now. xD
(On FF that is, I haven't updated on here in who knows how long. . . )

I love twists and turns! *squee* Cannot wait for the next chapter. Although I highly admit to being sad because Hermione's leaving Tom behind. Actually I secretely have believed that Tom was the one to send them back the whole time. It makes sense.

First of all who else has complete access to Slytherin's library? Who else (especially if Tom is obsessed with Hermione) had the motive to send her back in time.

Ok I'm done now.

XoXoXo~

Zombie Reine
Sarah
Rei
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From Popcornbandit on February 21, 2011
This is amazing, second time reading it (And that was months ago and you've only added a few chapters. shame shame :] )

Please update, you write some of the best Hermione/Voldemort/Tom stories and this one is not an exception.

I mean, I don't say this a lot but I actually got chills up my spine a few times reading this. (Something thats only happened to MAYBE 5 stories/books and I've read a LOT)

With Love,

Zombie Reine
Sarah
Rei
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From ANON - Tourniquette on February 10, 2011
Loved that ending! W00t. I am so thankful you didn't end on a HORRIBLE, TANTALIZING CLIFFHANGER this time. THANK YOU. XD
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From TheLadyMiya on February 03, 2011
Well, well, well, that was sure interesting. Now I'm thinking that it was either Salazar or Voldemort (who have learned the secret from Salazar) that sent them back in time... But it will be very interesting to see later :)
Haha and you know Hermione got it baaaaaad when she can't focus on a conversation which is about House-Elves rights. Hermione and Tom, sitting in a tree K I S S I N G, first comes loves them come babies... and yada, yada, yada...
Too bad we didn't get to see what was in that letter.... and I wonder how Tom will react when he realise she is going back. Something tells me that he isn't going to take that very well. Oh... no, not well at all.. hehe, hehe... I'm very much looking forward to see how he plans to stop it. Or maybe that is why he later sends them back in time and he somehow have learned how to become immortal by Salazar and it wasn't him that died at the battle, but someone polyjuiced to look like him or something... and then he will come back and take Hermione with storm and together they will RULE THE UNIVERSE! MOAH
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From ANON - Fleur K. on February 02, 2011
Ooooo....so....if they go back to the future, isn't present day Voldemort going to recognize Hermione and be like "wtf?" Or perhaps, "ah-HA!" Or perhaps Tom will figure out what is going down before then. I cannot wait to find out :) I'm sorry about my impatience, your story is worth the wait! Also, Freud can be kind of mind-boggling, in a non-accusatory type of way that is pretty entertaining. I have to say though, SIT > Freud. Bam.
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From janasi83 on February 02, 2011
I love you and I hate you. But I love you more. :) I love everything you write and I hate that I have to wait for an update only to get another tiny little bit of the story.

So if for some reason you ever decide to give this story up (God forbid!), you need to write a last chapter with the plot outline. Otherwise I may just come and hunt you down. I don't think I was ever as involved with a story as this one. Maybe Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time - so yeah, you rank right up there. :)

Anway, you know that this story is brilliant, every chapter is just as brilliant as the next, so I won't be repeating myself all over again. :) Please update soon!
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From Ssserpensssotia on January 18, 2011
I WANTED TO POST IT ALL ON YOUR LIVEJORNAL BUT YOU DISABLED ANONS! glares..

So, you'll get it here...Hooohohoho..Even though I, being hellishly(is there such word?) drunk, can see that I am posting under my name...SUUUUCCKKKS...Bitch!Enter Drunk!Serpie!Glare
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Maaaan..I am drunk..Hot wine (Gl
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