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By : serpentinred

From ANON - Fleur K. on December 01, 2010
YAY! Thanks for updating! :D That forest is pretty freakish and the idea of "intelligent" trolls is definitely disturbing. You just had to end with a cliffy, didn't you? Blasted! I eagerly await another update :) Thanks for momentarily distracting me from finals studying!

I'm glad you found the "crops" captcha amusing and I hope your muse....er.....goes there in the future! hahaha My captcha this time is "newked". I know!! They should "newk" the trolls. Wow....utter brilliance. You're welcome.
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From ANON - Blacklabyrinth8 on November 29, 2010
@ Contraceptives...touche. Touche. I know what you mean about trolls. I get enough of them in trade chat on World of Warcraft ( thank you blizzard for the ignore feature ) Bloody idoiots the lot of em. Anyway.
As always I enjoyed the chapter....And...I was listening to Thirty Seconds to Mars the other day and I came across a song that just struck me with inspiration so i think over the holidays when I'm not working on crap for classes....I've an idea for A LV/HG and DM/HG being tossed around ( Draco courtesy my fiance and Katy Perry...DON'T ASK! roflmao! )

Having never written in the Potter Fandom before will probobably set me back a little considering I have to work for the flow and all together believability in all things. Should be interesting but a week at my grandparent's with no internet...shouldn't be too bad...

ANYWAY. I loved the chapter and eagerly await your update ( I feel like a kid on xmas when I look to see if you have, and you have )
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From TheLadyMiya on November 29, 2010
oh, another dun, dun, duuuuuun, ending. What a surprise. Never would have guessed. I mean, who would have thought that YOU would write a cliffhanger. ;) Very exciting chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one now! Wonder why those two men speaks English... I got a few ideas at first, like the villagers sacrificing the men to the trolls so that they would leave them alone, but I'm not sure. Hm... strange. Will be interesting to see what's about to happen :) Good luck writing!
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From ANON - Rena on November 29, 2010
Oh my!! Who saved them?!?! Or what saved them? I think it was Quirrell he always had a thing with Trolls lol. You know it would go something like this:
Quirrell appeared on a fly carpet, waved at the four still standing and in a booming powerful voice said, "I have freed you go on and run free!" He then spread his arms wide and flew away on the magic carpet...
Lol and he could have Dumbledore with him and everything! Lol sorry I just had to say that, it just poped into my head at the end there, it must be becasue it's one in the morning and I should be asleep.
I'm glad you like the song by the way, it defently fits him, I can totally see him struting around (in a gracful and dignified way of course) and have that song playing in the background. Oh another song that I like for the Death Eaters and is a little more bad ass is 'Don't Stop' by Innerpartysystem, and there's also a music vid on youtube for the Death Eaters with it. The vid is very well made if your interested in watching it at all here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4xA9yeNa8ag
It's also got a little bit of Tom in there too.
It's funny that you should mention that young kids tend to flirt with you I also find it the same with me, but I also for some strange reason find that people 40 years and older try to flirt with me too and I'm like 0_o in my head! It's really creepy!!
Well thanks for updating and I can't wait to read the next one!
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From ANON - Kat on November 24, 2010
Just finished reading this story up to Chapter 40 for the first time and I must say I am impressed. I like how well you've fleshed out your characters, and I like the TR/HG soo much :) Can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Fleur K. on November 24, 2010
Please allow me to just say...."wow". I have been spending my free time over the past few days reading this story and I am completely addicted. It's incredible. Am I going overboard here with the compliments? You have taken such an absurd situation, something that shouldn't really be believable and have made it *completely* real. Your Tom Riddle is dark....as he should be.....and Hermione is...well....Hermione. Now that I have read all 40 chapters I am left eagerly awaiting more.....I think I should have drawn it out a bit, but I digress, I just couldn't stop. ANYWAY, I hope you update soon as I cannot wait to read what happens next. What a way to end chapter 40, by the way, that was incredibly sexy! :D

P.S. the first captcha word that I must type in to send this review is "crops"......foreshadowing, perhaps? Or just exceedingly appropriate.....?
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From TheLadyMiya on November 21, 2010
YEEEEEES! That was totally wicked and sooooo hot. Looooove the torture-in-pleasure scene and all the UST in it! Wonderful, wonderful! And the promise of more is just... aaaah, lovely. Makes a girl all giggly. And I won't even feel bad for Harry and Ginny who are worried like hell. They will just have to wait as Hermione and Tom tries to scratch each other's itches ;)
Hm, wonder if Tom heard Hermione threatening that German woman. I bet he would just love that she is so jealous!
ooooh, don't know what else to say, just such a lovely chapter in all it's smuttiness. The snakes feel more sexy than the ants for some reason, though ;)
Keep on writing :D
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From ANON - Blacklabyrinth8 on November 19, 2010
I can't help but wonder...Is there contraceptives in play and it's just assumed that that particular detailed is taken care of or is there a reason it's left out?
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From ANON - nitesfool on November 19, 2010
this story is my new obsession!
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From ANON - Aviendha on November 17, 2010
For some stupid reason I can't get AFF.net to send me my password! Anyway, LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter (previous ones too!)!
It's so wonderful that you're letting the story develop at a slower pace.

And yay for angry, intimidating, slightly crazy Hermione! :D I want to see more of her!
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From ANON - Tourniquette on November 17, 2010
"Deal with it." LMAO.

I really like the "and fuck you, too" attitude Hermione is giving back to Tom. Not everyone can be obedient, and Riddle may have to learn that the hard way, although it's probably going to be more painful for Hermione than it will be for him.

That was great. Hope you had a nice trip to Japan!
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From ANON - Rena on November 17, 2010
I like the bathroom they can stay in there all they want lol! I love what Hermione did to Melantha I was laughing so much when I read that and got a mental picture! Germany is turnign out to be better than I imagined!!
So a short story here it does a something to do with your wonderful story of course, anyway when I read stories I also go on youtube and you know how one thing leads to another? Well I have a talent for it seems finding some of the weirdest song on there. And just as Tom locked the bathroom door I found one called 'Sexy' by French Affair. I suggest you give it a listen, I think in my mine it's Tom's new theme song...yes, yes it is...
As for Coulson or Dillane I am afriad I have to go with the Dillane team. He's a good actor but like your thoughts on Dillane I guess I just don't see Tom looking like Coulson. Though I do have to agree on Dillane having boyish looks...maybe that's why I like him though he is the same age as me...don't think I would ever date someone younger though lol. Though Daniil Strakhov a russian actor kind of reminds me of Tom, mostly in the role as Vladimir in 'Bednaya Nastya'. But I must say I caught sight of the comment reply you made to Angel1988 and the links you posted...Mathias Lauridsen is HOT!!! He would also make a great Tom!!
Rena
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From ANON - Blacklabyrinth8 on November 16, 2010
Because I have a nasty habbit of saying something wrong and because it's hard to tell tone while typing...Lol. You're the first person I've reveiwed,ever, so nerves were to be expected I'm sure. As for Draco being cruciated...If that's what they call it these days then by all means yes ;)Roflmao. I just finished reading, and, for good measure, rereading and I loooved it and I wonder what else will happen in the bathroom. I can't imagine Hermione being completely submissive for long...Just long enough to get what she wants lol. It'll be interesting to see how it's dealt with. I can only imagine how creative Riddle can be and trust me when I say I've been tempted to see just how creative I can make him myself hahaha. But...that's another can of worms all together. I look forward to reading your next update and seeing how it goes..( Side note I almost thought you were going to have Harry see Hermione...'service' Tom or vice versa just out of spite on Tom's part XD...Dear god...can you imagne THAT confrontation?! -snickers- )
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From NinjaVampirex3 on November 16, 2010
Okay now I'm really happy that you made my wish come true. But I still think that Ernsta isn't pretty, I imagine her as something like hmm.. Godzila? And you described Dietfried as a not so handsome man himself, so it's not so unbelievable he choosed her XD

Also, I believe I mentioned that you're awesome at writting smut parts, so just keep up with it, and the snake part was very.. ahem.. interesting. In some perv, sick way. Ah who am I kidding, I loved it.

Well, I do love all the chapters so far, so I think I will love all other chapters, but you could kill someone. To spice things up. You know, a person here and a person there...

I think you will need quite a lot of chapters, like, 60 more. Or 70. Or more. Just continue it :D
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From ANON - e-cam157 on November 16, 2010
I really liked this chapter, it is about time Harry realised that something was going on between Tom and Hermione. I am looking forward to seeing how the others react after Hermione and Tom leave the bathroom.
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