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By : serpentinred

From ANON - Anatha on October 13, 2010
Yay! :) This is getting along nicely. Though I'm bothered about other people knowing their secret - this is bound to get back to Tom, isn't it? Somehow...cause those boys are true blabbermouths.

I love how Hermione will do something to prevent the engagement. She'll probably reason to herself she's doing it for the poor girl's sake, too, to save her from big bad snake-face. :p
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From mirrorofrapture on October 10, 2010
Thank goodness there's no cliffhanger. I couldn't stop laughing about the whole Iris thing, but I still hate those Parkinson sisters just the same. I can't wait to see how they four of them are going to go to Germany! I'm still wondering what's up with that deadline that Tom gave Hermione... So many questions left unanswered! Please update soon!
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From TheLadyMiya on October 08, 2010
Miya was laughing out loud when she read Nerys review :) AND I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THE RUBBING THING! But that soo makes sense with Ginny never had heard about a relative named Gareth and all... I bet Tom will kill him or have him killed or something. Aaaaanyway. Since Nerys and I have started to converse through this page instead of msn I just want to remind the sweet (oh, well) woman about the brand new story I sent her like... six months ago and which she forgot and then forgot again. Which probably is good since I don't plan to finish it anytime soon... but I do still exist... even if you have to be a real good friend of mine to actually get to read the stories that aren't done yet XD Flattery will get you everywhere, you know!
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From ANON - bluelagoon on October 08, 2010
this chapter made me ask myself: how dumb can a person get? i mean...honestly...harry...temper!!!!

he.was.so.utterly.annoying.in.this.chapter.

ahhh does he filter *anything* that comes to his mind before saying it out loud??? it would be so much easier if he would just ask tom to kill him now...instead of waiting a few decades...won't change a thing...because this answer-question with harry in a 3m radius is bound to end ina total disaster -.-

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From Nerys on October 08, 2010
No cliffie? No cliffie? *takes pulse and feels forehead of Serp* Yep, like I thought, burning up. I knew you were ill the moment there was no cliffie. *brings around hot chicken soup* (which gets tossed away because you're veggie) Okay, hot noodle soup then, while tucking in Serp with extra blankets (must sweat out any germs that caused this no cliffie infection).
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Anyway, I loved the chapter. But you already know that. *giggles* Gotta love the hilarity of all of them talking about the future while Hermione is futily trying to shut them up. XD And poor, pooooor Melantha (yeah, I care; stop sniggering), she'll be in for a rough ride with whatever it is Hermione will do now. I am sure Iris will be pleased she only gets boils when she touches Tom AFTER seeing what happens to Melantha. *snnnrks* No pressure. xxp

So, Gareth is rubbing his left arm underneath his sweater. How possitively interesting.

Oh, I can't wait to hear Tom's questions. You evil author for not adding them in this chapter. I'm so curious.

UPDATE SOON! (although you do write quickly, much quicker than some other authors who have vanished completely from the tomione section altogether *cough* this-is-a-hint-Miya! *cough*). xxp

xx Nerys

PS. Make sure to disillusion Tom when he travels to Germany. We wouldn't want the evil fangirls to snatch him away *insert pointed glare* for he's OURS!
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From ANON - Rena on October 07, 2010
Yay! No cliffie!! Lol man I can't wait for Germany!! It's weird because I'm so excited but it not me who's going! Oh well I really can't wait though and I have a feeling that Tom is going to sneak over there with them, that sneaky boy! And like you said Hermione sure is possessive, I bet she's even going to do something to Melantha or Iris before she goes. Though I wonder if Draco and Harry are going to end up doing anything to stop her from being with Tom cause I mean lets face it Ginny's not!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Rena
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From TheLadyMiya on October 07, 2010
Wait... I became confused. What is Hermione attending? Ah, well, I guess we'll find out soon enough :) I'm happy that you manage to review so quickly. Much quicker than some other authors *cough*this-is-a-hint-Nerys!*cough*. Although, to little Hermione/Tom action! Okay... I always feel that way, but still ;) I do believe the future will have changed quite a bit though, and I'm veeeery annoyed with how stupid Harry and Ginny is, being so eager to tell people about the future. Do they really want to risk changing the future or are they just not thinking that far ahead? Baaah. I wonder what Tom will ask them... hum, probably not just questions about the wand. I'm sure Harry will find some way to screw it up, though. He always do... baaah.
But something tells me Hermione won't be able to keep hers and Tom's... relationship a secret much longer. That will be quite a explosion, I'm sure. Hm... it will be interesting to see how that plays out!
Great chapter :D Take care!
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From ANON - Hungry fan fictions' fan on October 06, 2010
Oh, please update Prisms of Darkness, it is a great story and quite unique, I love how you portrait Hermione's character. Please update soon.
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From Tassanaburrfoot on October 05, 2010
I am so sorry about that earlier. I got your story confused with someone else's. Oops.

Although, I do greatly enjoy this story and am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I feel greatly embarrassed now, though, so I think I'll bow out as gracefully as I can and just patiently wait for the next installment...
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From ANON - bluelagoon on October 05, 2010
dum dum dum dum *insert dramatic music*

you made my day with your update!!!! thaaaaank you :D

good for her he was in the potions classroom...who knows when he would have cured her if dear sluggy had not come. But hahahaha his acting skills are getting better and better. Honestly?!?! An embarrassed dark lord??? No way.

Loved their little interlude in Muggle Studies btw. bwahahhaha leave it to Hermione to guard her possessions properly :D But he did enjoy this...I mean who else can put a jinx on him and get away with it? If Parkinson had done any of the sorts...well she would be keeping Myrtle company by now I guess ;)

hahahaha cannot wait to read the rest 2/3!!!

A lovely day to you and btw...cannot wait for our dear dark-lord to come to germany hihihihi I will be waiting at the borders and abduct him the second he sets foot on german grounds :D so much to changing the time line ;)

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From ANON - Rena on October 03, 2010
Le gasp! Oh no they've been found out! Lol very nice cliffy though I'm not happy about it ;). Love it so far and I don't think I could ever stop loving it! Tom is great (though really when is he not?) and I love how Hermione is falling for him but even she doesn't relize it yet. Now I wonder how they are going to explain the 'future' comment to Gareth and Joseph, as I'm asuming those are the two people who just came through the portrait hole. Hmmm...maybe Hermione can just you know kick them where the sun don't shine and they can all run away *Snickers* I don't think that joke will ever get old!
On another note, I don't think that anyone is bored with these as you call them long but I say not long enough ;) and if they are send them to me I'll tell them a thing or two!!
As for China I guess I can't blame you I mean not being able to write chapters not only sucks for you but us as well.
Well I believe that's it! The only thing I can say now is I look forward as usual to the next chapter and can't wait to see what question's get answered next!
Rena
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From mirrorofrapture on October 03, 2010
YES, AN UPDATE!!! I really enjoyed this chapter, although I am curious to find out what it is you found unsatisfactory about it. The scene with Slughorn was hilarious! A wedding? Kids?! God, I loved how you described Tom's reaction. It's so perfect and I can just imagine it happening. I wonder why Harry isn't pressing Hermione for more information as to why Tom's so obsessed with her, but guys can be dense sometimes. So, did Tom completely remove the venom from Hermione? What's up with the 14th??? I guess I will find out next time.

As usual, excellent work! Your grammar is nearly perfect without a beta, although there were some minor things that I can't even remember now. Anyways, I can't wait for the next update! I wonder how the four are going to explain the whole future thing...
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From TheLadyMiya on October 03, 2010
What is UP with these cliffhangers? Do you live to torture us? Us, poor defenceless readers who just want some fun... and a little smut...
Haha, I laughed my arse off with the whole children-thing. Oh, Slughorn can really make things interesting! I bet Tom thought about it too... hehe... okay, I don't, but it would be fun if he did. Oooh, I can just see him sitting in front of the fire together with his Death Eaters, knitting socks to his evil offspring. Naaaaaaw! And Abraxas will of course have found the latest unicorn-hair for the socks and they will be drinking tea and sing songs together. Ladidadida.
Hm... I get weird thoughts in my brain when I have PMS. I think about Hermione ripping heads and Tom knitting. Oooh... blood. MOHAHAHA.
Mhem... where was I? Oh, right. I wonder what they will come up with in how to deal with Tom's questions. Or maybe they won't have to because now the gossip will be out that Ginny mentioned the F-word (future). And I'm sure that Tom will put two and two together. And get four little socks! YAY! THEY CAN HAVE TWINS!
Ooooh, well. This will be interesting. I'm sure Harry will do something drastic that will make things even worse. He is good at that. Have I mentioned how much I don't like him in this fic? Oh, well. Good thing most of the focus is on Hermione and Tom these days :) But it was nice when Harry and Ginny was gone. I want them to go away again. OOOH. Let Tom kill them! Pretty please! And throw Draco in the mix as well so it will only be Tom and Hermione 4eva!
Eh... okay, enough ranting. I'll take my hormones and go to sleep, I believe. Toodles :)
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From TheLadyMiya on September 27, 2010
First;
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From mirrorofrapture on September 26, 2010
These cliff hangers are killing me. I was going to just leave that first sentence as a review, but then I thought that you'd appreciate more feedback. As usual, your writing is excellent and your characters are spot on. I was wondering when that spell that Tom placed on Hermione would come back into play, and so it has in this chapter. I can just imagine Hermione passing out before she makes it to Tom, but I don't really know how long it takes to get to the dungeons or how Hermione's running and panicking affects the spell's effects. And now I'm thinking too much about it.

OH, I CAN'T STAND IT!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! You know, I read the first 34 chapters a second time to hold me over while I was waiting for chapter 35... Now what am I going to do while I wait for 36??? Please update soon!
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