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By : serpentinred

From ANON - bluelagoon on September 26, 2010
Ahhh stupid internet...my review is gone :( ahh who cares...

You know...everytime i see you have updated your story, i get so damn excited...like a little child at christmas eve...i start reading and the happy feeling gets stronger and stronger. with every word and sentence...and before i know it, i am totally captured and forget everything around me. and suddenly BAM! Reality decides to give me a slap. not a little girly girl slap...NOOOO!!! A Hermione-Granger-slapping-Malfoy-for-being-so-damn-stupid slap

LOL i am a little drama queen at heart hahahaha ;)

Back to the chapter:

I really really loved the duelling scene. How Granger managed to show our favourite Slytherin Heir that girls can hold their ground...ahhh and the punishment...was so very exquisite.

It is so amusing that Harry is so smart and sharp at times, but when it comes to feelings as dim-witted as he was with Cho in 4th year hahaha Malfoy on the other hand is much more observative than given credit for I think.

And last but not least...the REAL punishment. The fact that she knew where to find him...is this a build in feature, so our dark lord does not have to worry that she actually dies, but can be rescued in time...so he can torture her for real? Well, she will have to explain to him why she was discussing the Chamber in the first place...

ahhh I can so not wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update. Looooooove you for this story ^^ I am curious: how far into the story are we? I mean are we already running towards the ends?

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From ANON - Rena on September 25, 2010
Not here agian eh? Well whereever you are I hope your thinking up some more exciting things for this story! Though I wonder how Hermione is going to explain about the spell being actived and what happened with the wands hmmmm...
Also on another note sorry to hear about your godfather's father's funeral, though maybe China was nice? (My pitiful attempt to look on the bright side)
Well as usual I can't wait to see what happens next.
Rena
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From janasi83 on September 25, 2010
Now if I was Tom, I'd be seriously pissed with Hermione. I suppose she'll be punished for this - and not just in a pleasant, smutty way!
Tom must be really close to figuring out that they are from the future (if he hasn't already), because what else could explain all of the stuff they know about him, and now the wand business...

Once again an amazing chapter! You hideout strategy is working really well for you, isn't it? :p
Another update can't come soon enough.
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From TheLadyMiya on September 19, 2010
Now I'm really glad it took me so long to read this chapter (I was reading the first and probably last twilight fanfiction ever. It was really good, but that was mainly because they skipped everything in Twilight that makes it annoying. Like the vampires). I really, really hope you'll manage to update soon! Gaaah, that is not a nice ending! Hundredths of scenarios are swilling around in my mind. Will a connection be formed between Hermione and Tom now? Or will she pretend to miss and then let him hit her? Or will she faint? Naa... she doesn't strike me as the faint-when-things-get-tough kind of girl. Or maybe she will just throw the wand to the side and knock him down physically? Hehe... at least Voldemort got the payback on Draco now. Hope that's it. For poor Draco's sake. Hihi, Draco is the kind of character that I either pity or get annoyed at. I don't really like him... oh, well. And Harry is so ridiculously easy to provoke. It's sooo annoying. He deserves getting his arse kicked. Oooh, well, great chapter! Really looking forward to the next one :)
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From mirrorofrapture on September 19, 2010
WOW! I can't tell you how much I love this story. Although the whole travelling back in time thing is not original, what you have done with the characters and plot feels totally new. It is such a treat to read your writing. I love the way you describe Tom Riddle. It just seems so perfect. I also appreciate the fact that the way you write the characters doesn't feel completely out of the ordinary. It all seems so believable. I also can't tell you enough how much I appreciate your efforts to get your fanfic betta'd. Reading a fanfic that is not riddled with numerous spelling and punctuation errors is such a breath of fresh air! I cannot wait to read more of this story!
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From ANON - Vella on September 15, 2010
I can't believe that cliffhanger!!! Oh my gosh I can't wait. I absolutely adore this story, please update soon :)
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From NinjaVampirex3 on September 15, 2010
What cliffhanger? WHAT CLIFFHANGER? How dare you. And I wouldn't use bombs. It would be something more ... ahem ... sophisticated *evil grin*

And don't you get tired or I will take the bomb idea into second consideration. Ahem.. So. That chapter was long enough I think.. Even though nobody'll mind some more ACTION *you know what I'm talking about look* and could you kill somebody? Just to satisfy your killing instinct? And for some fun? I'd be soo happy.

Anyways, I still enjoy any new chapter and as long as that continues you don't need any worries to be without reviewers/readers. So keep up with that and as I always say, I freaking love this story.
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From ANON - bluelagoon on September 15, 2010
YOU!!!! You better run for you dear life missy...hide under the biggest rock you can find, because i will find you and do terrible things to you for leaving us with such an eeeeeeevil cliffie!!!! And there will be no mercy, because you totally had it coming!!!

wonderful and intense chapter especially the duelling part totally hooked me....ahhh cannot wait to see what happens. he has already dueled with her and saw the wand switching with draco so he will know it is not her wand and ooooh i am so excited to see what happens next!!!

thanks for updating to suuuuper fast btw ;)
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From janasi83 on September 15, 2010
You better not come back from your little hideout until you've put up the next chapter! *grumble* Great cliffie though.

Marvelous chapter! I had a blast trying to hold in laughter when Tom and Harry are fighting for Hermione's hand (my boyfriend would have become curious and I don't particuarly want to share AFF with him, he reaps the benefits anyway :)). That is so like teenage boys who've forgotten that they're not 5 anymore LOL.

Can I say what a brilliant writer you are for the umpteenth time? Cause you are. ;)
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From ANON - Rena on September 15, 2010
uhhhh...WHAT!?!?! Now that was just plain mean!! I feel like crying cause of that cliffy!! *starts sniffleing* It's coming along nicely hope you update soon now if you will exscuse me I need to go hide in a corner and be depressed about having to wait...
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From NinjaVampirex3 on September 10, 2010
OH YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME ! Another cliffhanger? C'mon *annoyed face*

Anyways, I seriously doubt that people will get tired of this story, because you truly know how to make this things interesting.

Oh and this chapter was awfully short in comparison to the previous one. *tears*

Well, I love this evil Tom >:) And keep up with this story for a loooong time, please ! ^____^
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From ANON - bluelagoon on September 10, 2010
he is an ass...an evil manipulative sneaky hot snog-worthy utterly annoying ass...god...i love him and want to kill him at the same time...and another part of me wants to...ehm...totally going off-top :D

what i meant to say: loooooooved this chapter. while there was no smut *sniffs* it was amusing how he kept on irritating her...one of his favourite past times i guess ;)but i guess she really should remember who she is dealing with...good thing she remembered at last...it is amazing and so disturbing and only something riddle would so: i mean come on...intending to kill a girl and then shagging her a couple of hours later lol

ahhh hot dictators who want to take over both the magical and non-magical world...one certainly cannot live without them...
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From janasi83 on September 10, 2010
Hooraaaaay Hermione wasn't being all stupid! :) Good job! (What did you have to bribe her with? Does she get to knee Tom again? LOL)

Your writing continues to amaze me. I love how blas
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From TheLadyMiya on September 10, 2010
ah, ah, ah, this those not look good for our heroin. I wonder what Tom will do with Harry... I'm quite sure what Harry will try to do with Tom but... ah, this will be very interesting to see the continuing off. But Tom is often sooo annoying with always wanting to have things done his way. Tsk, tsk. I hope Hermione will find a way to take him down a notch or seven. She does have information that he wants... perhaps she could use that to her advantage? Loved the possessive display though. Mehe... looking forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - YummyDraco on September 07, 2010
Wow...I just read your last chapter and all I can tell you is that my husband is going to be very happy tonight. Very well written. Please update soon :)
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