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By : serpentinred

From NinjaVampirex3 on August 20, 2010
Haha, well I'm glad I'm not the only one who dislikes her. She just doesn't deserve Tom. *jealous face*

And that was SOOO evil. Why didn't you let them finish their stuff in library?

But, still, great chapter, waiting for next one ^______^

P.S.: You just stick that needle in her voodoo doll, nobody will mind. I totally support you on that one.
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From ANON - TwilightAddictNumber51391 on August 20, 2010
Awesome! I have been on edge all week waiting to see what would happen between Tom and Hermione and WOW. I think Tom was quite angry with himself over the fact that he didn't realize that she was a muggle-born witch. But he seemed mesmerized by Hermione and all that she is. I really look forward to seeing where their relationship goes. Where is Albus? Is he okay? Whats gonna happen next? More Lemons I hope! Update Update Update!
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From TheLadyMiya on August 20, 2010
Yay, no cliffy this time, but none the less exciting! Although, GAAAAH! The scene between Hermione and Tom in the library was hooot. I was like Yeeees, yeees, YEEES.... NO! I sooo hope those two will get together properly soon! But now, what is this with Dumbledore's office and shit? She can't leave him! BOOO!!! Although, I'm starting to think that Hermione and Tommy-boy will come up with something and he will not die-die when Harry defeats him, but just disappear and then send them back in time so he can use Hermione for ever!!!! MOHAHAHA. Or something... Hm... will be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter! Take care!
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From Nerys on August 20, 2010
*sniggers* He's such an evil, evil tease. *sniggers some more*

And nicking her panties. Hahahaha! So now, he has evidence to blackmail her with. Mmmm ...

Eh, you should never show him how much you don't want others to realise something, Hermione. And she makes it rather apparent to him that he's got something to hold over her head. Time to realise this and turn the tables on him. XD

Eh, loved the chapter. And the smut. I beg to differ on the not cliffy bit though. ;p

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

BTW. FFnet is doing that weird thing again, by displaying the tomione list of an earlier date. *snnrkkss*
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From ANON - j on August 17, 2010
omg please please please please please please updateeeee!
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From Nerys on August 16, 2010
Yes, run little author, run. *eerie squeaky sounds echo accompany the sharpening of The Blade*

Run as fast as those little legs can carry you. *tosses different troll's clubs through the air to decide which is heaviest*

Make sure to find suitable, non Tomione ff-reader's homes to hide in. *pockets handgrenades and decides to add the flamethrower as well*

Because you can run, little author. *adds nuclear device to backpack*

But there are MORE of US. *tests machinegun*

And WE will FIND you. *Fluid sprays through the air as she tests her syringes*

And when we do ... dun dun dun ... *watches electrical shock on dummy satisfied before packing ALL her torture instruments*

YOU will be very VERY sorry. Muaaahhaaahhahaa!!!
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From ANON - kit on August 15, 2010
oh dear lord, please update soon! this story is fantastic and that last cliffhanger has to be one of the most painful i have ever endured >.< Good job! :D
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From TheLadyMiya on August 15, 2010
*runs after with a hammer* GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! EVIL AUTHOR! Another cliffhanger? *Throws hammer, realises she doesn't have a good aim and runs after author without hammer, screaming in Swedish* ELAKT! ELAKT! ELAKT!
Bah. Not happy. I'm all *holding my breath in excitement* and them the chapter ends! WHAT. THE. FUCK? Booo... this is also one of the reasons to why I don't like reading fics when they aren't finished... too many cliffies. I really hope you'll be able to continue update at this speed, it's very nice! I mean, you can't just have Tom realising Hermione is a Muggle-born (and that he has, in fact, slept with a Muggle-born quite enthusiastic) and then leave it at that! And what about all those delicious hints about Hermione fucking Tom to keep him quiet? Miya want to see Hermione exchanging body fluids with Tom! OOOOH! Will they have angry sex now? Will Tom be like "I need to put some real wizard inside you"?
What do you mean, I need to get laid?
Just looove the UST between those two. Although, it's not as strong now when they have had sex ones... so make sure to build that up nicely now with all the threatening and pushing-up-against-the-wall and all that. Nice... Sooooo hope that Tom will reacts "I'll fuck you to punish you for not telling the truth" instead of "I'll crucio you for deceiving me". Pretty please? With a cherry on top? And some big puppy-dog-eyes? I'm not above sending puppy-dog-eyes-pictures to you, you know.
Aaaah, liked this chapter very, very much. Despite the ending. GIVE ME MORE!!!!
Cheers!
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From janasi83 on August 15, 2010
Yes! The cat is out of the sack LOL finally! :) I'm so not mad for you to end the chapter there hehehe, it really was the only logical choice. Nice touch with Tom just going still on it, now we have no clue what will happen.
I confess I kinda read this in a hurry, so I'll have to return to it again to really soak it in, but as always, well-done! And thank you for updating so soon!
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From ANON - Jennifer on August 15, 2010
It finally clicked in Tom's head as to why Hermione was always defending Muggles in Muggle studies, why she wasn't afraid to talk to him like others were. He realizes why he found her fascinating in the first place. Now, what will he do with the information he now has? How will it affect things between the two? He must realize that she is very powerful, even being a muggle-born. There goes all his theories that they are anywhere inferior to other magical beings, if a muggle-born could be as powerful as Hermione.... Where will things go now? I cannot wait for the next chapter.....
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From NinjaVampirex3 on August 15, 2010
Okay, so needless to say, I enjoyed this chapter just like every other. But right now I am scared that Hermione might get murdered. But screw her, I don't like her anyways.

Now I hardly wait for next chapter, as usual, and I'll try not to eat all of my nails. ^^
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From janasi83 on August 11, 2010
Yaaaay! *jumps up and down with glee* I came back from vacation to two new chapters waiting for me! Hooray! Many thanks!

And what is so wonderful about them is that they are just as good and better than the previous ones. I was a little bit afraid that you only planned on writing one more chapter (must have been a comment made on FF?). I think this is a fic that calls for at least 40 chapters, but could work at 60 or more - as much as you can, pretty please? LOL

Love the fact that Hermione kicked Tom's arse, uh, privates! And of course she's be denying that it wasn't really rape. I LOVE it how her brain didn't turn into mush after that delicious shag (for lack of a better word, you couldn't really call it love-making, could you?). But Tom told her some profound truths, too. And I think that Hermione's observation of "how can he live in such a world" is so on-spot and perceptive. We really are responsible for the world we live in in terms of what our thoughts are creating. And it's truly sad to see someone so convinced the world is out to get them, because it really is a self-fulfilling prophecy.

So Iris has latched on to Tom's ambition, huh? No deal there, darling hehehe Tom can barely stand the hypocrites surrounding him as it is, I'm pretty sure they disgust him. I think part of his attraction to Hermione is based on the fact that she's not a hypocrite.

I also love the way you made Ginny react to Hermione's confession. I'm glad Hermione can talk to someone about Tom. :)

I'm only uncertain about something concerning this story: why would anything they (Hermione and co.) do now have neccesarily affected the future which was their past? For there must have been a first time they travelled back and the first time their to-be-future/now past would have unfolded as it did, with none of the people in Tom's youth having met them in Hermione's past? I'm not sure if you can follow my line of thinking here, it's difficult to try and discuss this. Took me a while to figure out the question in the first place LOL.

What I mean is, Hermine and co. live their normal life, Voldie hates them etc., then - for the first time - someone sends them back to the past. Now they meet Tom, but Voldie from their past doesn't have that knowledge nor will he ever, because when "their" Voldie was still young, he hadn't met Hermione. I guess what I mean is I'm curious whether this is their first time back in the past or not. If it is, there's no need for them to worry about how anything they do now might have caused anything in their previous lives in their "old" future.
I tend to get lost here myself so please let me know if I've managed to confuse you completely.
However, I assume that the future they might return to would already show signs of having changed because of their time travel, but only after they return. I'm not sure they can return to the present/future they had before going back. Does what I'm saying make sense?

BTW, I suffered an abstinence crisis on vacation LOL (yes I'm an AFF addict!) and on a whim decided I'd like to try myself at a Tomione fanfic. I think I have a good basic plot, but it will be a while before I actually post anything and I have a ton of HP reasearch to do. Still, I'm excited - and it's all thanks to you!

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From MrGalion on August 09, 2010
Better. Much Better.

Knee jokes for the next 50 years easily

Ready for some change up. Maybe have Tom Finally take control.
Announce to the whole school who's his and if anyone else lays a finger on her they'll have to report to him.

all the back and forth is building for something big. Please don't let it crest and drift daintily into bed.

Thank You and I humbly await the next chapter.
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From NinjaVampirex3 on August 08, 2010
that was really evil, i agree with former reviewers! no tomione action *very very sad face* and another cliffhanger !

well, you certainly know how to make people anxious about what happens next :D

and please, please, please, upload new chapter soon, because i will check every ten minutes if necesarry :3

and if i haven't mentioned already, this is brilliant ! i simply don't find any other words for this story. ^___^

you just continue in that way =D
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From Nerys on August 08, 2010
NO TOMIONE ACTION! NO TOMIONE ACTION! *rants and raves along with Magenta and Miya*

*wails*

What do we do now? No tomione action. Boohoo. Where is my shot? Where do I get my fix now?

;p

PS Will review more extensively on ffnet
loved the chapter. it was very funny. Now go kill draco and harry. XD
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