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By : serpentinred
  • From MrGalion on July 14, 2010
    Wee Thank you for the email.
    I saw that and just had to read.
    Thank you for the quick update.
    How many people can go pinning after Hermione? After my last review been thinking of her as princess Leia and was wondering if she'd kiss her own brother. Then I realized she be an only child. V.v Oh well's Kissing Malfoy in front of Tom will have to do.*chuckle* It was just for sweet revenge. >.> Alphard stealing a kiss in front of Tom would work too. Like right after a quidditch match. who else can she manipulate Tom into getting rid of until the secret is so obvious that dense Harry has to see it.

    Oh I have a solution to your Cliffe!
    Draco stands in front of the Dark Lord.
    Tom: "Draco you will not hang around my girlfriend"
    Draco: "WHAT?!?!"
    Tom: "Crucio"
    Draco: "She's a mudblood"
    Tom: "Don't call my girlfriend names""Crucio"
    Draco: "She has muggle parents!"
    Tom: "She's a witch and that is all that matters" "Crucio" again
    Draco: "Owwies"
    Tom: "Now treat her like a princess"

    No idea where to go from there. Which is probably why my stories never leave the first page. Oh wells
    Thank you for the update. Wish to read again soon.
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  • From MrGalion on July 11, 2010
    Ayie What a mess. Thanks for the email. I would have reviewed sooner but I wanted to reread the last few chapters so that It all flowed. I've been so busy with work during this holidays I can understand where you don't have the time to update. I barely have the time to read. However this last chapter is short. I can sorta see where Hermione can see Malfoy as a Traitor but not enough evidence to accuse him. Tom must have really messed with her if she is willing to openly accuse Malfoy with so little evidence and without even informing Harry or ginny, and to add insult to injury she goes off alone with Draco into a room right after she accuses him. It's a good thing I beleive he is not a Traitor or she would be walking into a trap. But then again the Trap might be a good thingy cause slave Hermione is Kinky like Slave Leia. Ok end rant I should sleep more work and programing to be done.

    THANK YOU *Bows*
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  • From ANON - Deea101 on July 07, 2010
    I'm shocked this story has so few reviews, it's one of the best Hr/TMR out there, and definitely one of my favorites. ;D

    Well, for starters, I love the idea of all four of them time-travelling together, it's very original, and I'm thrilled that you included Draco (one of my favorite HP characters ^_^), though I think he should be more active in the story. I mean, he knows from experience Voldemort's intimidation tactics and I think he could give Hermione some useful advice. Regarding the last chapter, I assume he might have spilled something, but I'm sure he didn't tell everything, like Hermione assumed he did. After all Voldemort put him and his family through, I don't see him risking the future for Voldemort's sake. But enough about Draco. ;]

    I also like that the action between Hermione and Tom is going slow, she's obviously attracted to him but she has to realise at some point that he'll be the future Lord Voldemort. I'm especially interested in the Tom's relationship with Iris. I remember at the beginning that Iris was attacked after she annoying the future Dark Lord at breakfast. I'm sure he was behind that and after that he just used her to make Hermione jealous, like in the last chapter. I'm annoyed that Hermione doesn't realise that she's being played so easily. Maybe Draco can tell her? ;D Leaving Draco aside (again), I'm also curious about Tom's ring, the Horcrux. I saw it mentioned in many time-travel fics and I wonder if you'll have him wearing it, it would make an interesting scene if Hermione noticed.

    So, after all that rambling, I have a few questions. How many chapters are you planning on writing? Are you planning on using that adult rating? ;D Will they ever return to the future? I've been following this story from the first chapter, and I really hope you dont abandon it.
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  • From MrGalion on June 24, 2010
    Curse Thee... I want to find out how Harry reacts. Tom should kiss her in the middle of the great hall next chapter. and she should return the kiss right as harry walks in!

    (childish tantrum)I am a loyal reviewer and demand you stop twinkletoesing (is that even a word?) around the issue, and make Hermione fall for Tom.(end Childish tantrum) (the suspense is great well written and well done!)

    (Sarcasm)Who needs school and work? you should just write stories taking out loans and selling all your worldly possessions until you are living in a box outside of an internet cafe with your laptop starving. Then maybe you should work a little.(end Sarcasm)

    If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or to just talk to feel free to email me. If not can you still email me with updates? Mr.galion At gmail.com

    edited: apparently any html tags are removed when posting >.> even if they are fake
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  • From ANON - e-cam157 on May 30, 2010
    One of the best fics I have read on this site in a long time, I read it straight through, can not wait for a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - scarlet on May 29, 2010
    epicness on a whole other level. I will admit was not to intrigued at the beginning but slowly every chapter kept pulling me in. I love how the progession in the story was, and No it wasnt too slow, it was perfect. And the chemistry between them had me shivering in glee. Please update soon.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From TheLadyMiya on May 24, 2010
    Haha, we defiantly like when they kill two birds with one stone :) Glad to see you update! Now all we need is some naked action under the cloud and they'll all be happy :) Progress though, that Hermione finally realised that she can start kiss him as well! YAY! Hm, I wonder what Harry and Ginny will say if they see them snogging... probably not anything good :P
    Thanks for a great chapter!
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  • From MrGalion on May 24, 2010
    The Weasley twins would love that spell/curse.

    I wonder what Harry will think about these rumors. Maybe he already knows?
    I can see someone else informing him by Owl.

    So Hermione is Tom's witch now. Tom is very possessive. I wonder when he will Tell her she's his girlfriend.

    Please Don;t make me wait so long for an update.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 24, 2010
    I like this story and will be waiting (jumping up and down) for more to come. I cant wait for Harry and Ginny to find out what naughty little Hermione has been doing on their little "Vacation" and i want to know what happened to Ginny!!! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cosettex on March 23, 2010
    I cannot wait to see what happens, glad to see we got some action!
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  • From Kayrox133 on March 21, 2010
    Yes I was refering to you and Tom, the conspirators of this fantastic story! Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - liv on March 21, 2010
    ahh! i love the story! cant wait till you update:)
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  • From MrGalion on March 19, 2010
    ohh can't wait for more.

    I'm waiting for Hermione's next slip up.
    I'm sure she can't keep all this knowledge locked up forever.
    Especially now that her emotions are in the way more than ever.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 19, 2010
    Oooh! They finally kissed :D Excellent! And what a kiss :) I'm very happy you finally let them work out all that tension, it was really time for it! Baah, but now Harry is comming back :( They will only get in the way! Boo! I wonder how they will interact now afterwards.. hm.. will Tom mark her in public or will he contiue to drag her into some unseen cornor and snog her senselessly? I'm okay with either way, as long as they contiue to be snogging ^^ And then some more... mehe!
    Excellent chapter!
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  • From MrGalion on March 15, 2010
    Who grabbed our pretty little witch?

    Only two months but seems soo much longer. Maybe it is because the two month delay between chapters>.>
    Just teasin.

    That was doing better. Don't Rush it. Let it Flow and i will follow.
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