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By : serpentinred
  • From risotto on March 12, 2010
    Wonder if something nasty will happen in the washroom.
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  • From Kayrox133 on March 12, 2010
    Oh you two are most certainly cruel! Was it Tom that grabbed her for a thorough snogging? Iris Parkinson who is begging to be hexed with a mass of huge zits on her face?
    Please let it be Tom!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 12, 2010
    Iiiih! Finally something happens and it just ends! AAAAH! EVIL!
    I like how you had Hermione all reluctant to dress up but then almost blackmailed into doing it :P Hehe, it was realistic and funny. Joseph was more funny in this chapter as well, not so annoying. Although, he has great competition in the annoying-depertment, especially from Iris and that cousin of his. GAH! Why do you have so many annoying chracters??? I mean, I don't find Draco annoying because everyone else is so annoying. Draco is just cute. Tihi.
    Okay, good chapter :) Now I'm really, really, really looking forward to the next chapter! Take care!
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  • From MrGalion on March 12, 2010
    Interesting prediction.
    Things have been moving a bit slow.
    Ready for a slight change in speed.
    I humbly await your next update.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 08, 2010
    ... and the battle of wills continues! Pleeease make them come somewhere soon! Very interesting with the crystal-ball thing. Did Hermione hear any of what the cow saw or did she come later? Ah, well, good chapter, but I'm getting a bit annoyed that there are no relationships-changes at all... what if Dumbledore returns soon? :S
    Take care!
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  • From risotto on March 07, 2010
    Mmm...yun another update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    its awesome please update soon. :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 01, 2010
    Okay, just have to say that Hermione's bad mood was contagious, now I feel like I'm a bad mood because of how annoying those girls are and of the stupid Gryffindor duo. Really, everything was just getting worse and worse for Hermione in this chapter, don't think you can give her some victory, soon? Hm... doesn't look good for her, tough, not if she will begin battling Tom again.
    Looking forward to what will happen during that party! Some fighting between Tom and Hermione ending in a snogging session? Pretty please?
    Haha, anyway, you really managed to deliver the atmosphere in this chapter, but it's a bit slow without any actions. But you need those chapters too of course. Just hope something will happen between Hermione and Tom that will break the status quo they now seem to be in...
    Great chapter! Good luck with writing more!
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  • From MrGalion on March 01, 2010
    W00t UPDATE!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    Okay. Just want to say GO SHAGGING ALREADY!
    What do you mean I should get myself a sex-life and not live it out through fanfiction? Sigh...
    Oh, and Draco was very sweet in this chapter :) But I think Black was interrupting. I want to know what Tom will do with Hermione! Iwannawannawannawanna!
    Boo.... I guess I should go to bed now... it's pretty late...
    excellent chapter!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    Chapter 16
    Oh, the UST... the UST... they should be shagging like bunnies right now! I want them shagging!
    Pretty please with a cherry on top?
    Really enjoyed this chapter, you are very good at writing intimidating!Tom.
    I really should go to bed now...
    hm, but there are one more chapter... oh, dilemma...
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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    Chapter 14
    Eh... okay, this whole chapter is in bold. I'm guessing the change-of-style in texts aren't working really for you? Hope you find a way to edit it!
    Haha, and it's quite funny that everyone thinks Tom is Hermione's boyfriend. I just wish they would actually spice things up... oh, well. Hope those annoying girls will push Hermione into Tom's arms more times ^^ We like that.
    Great chapter!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    Chapter 13.
    Er... okay, I think you did a typo in this; in the former chapters you have written that they are in 1944, but now you wrote that they were in 1945. And also, didn't Draco just tell Hermione and Harry that Tom wasn't a Legilimency yet? Hm... I know all about forgetting things you have written, so I thought I should point it out.
    Otherwise, mehe! Harry and Dumbledore are finally gone! Leaving Hermione and Tom alone to do naughty stuff. At least I hope they will do naughty stuff together :D
    Oh, and now Hermione finds out it was Iris... ah, better late than never. I'm still waiting for her to get so angry she will confront Tom... although, how she will explain why she is suspecting him will be hard... oh, anyway. Great chapter! I love the tension between Hermione and Tom. Sweet.

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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    chapter 9
    Iiih! Scary, Tom did something against Ginny! I wonder if she will be okay... strangely enough, I don't care so much for her in this story. She is quite boring. Or well, maybe that is not strange, I usually don't care much for her... oh, well. I hope Hermione will do something that makes her get physical with Tom soon :D
    Oh, and you must have missed a / in the in this chapter as well... at the end of the chapter, everything is in that leaning-to-the-side style. Just thought I should point it out! Great chapter!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on February 23, 2010
    Chapter 8
    I guess you missed a / in the , because the whole chapter is underlined and it's rather annoying to read. It's such a silly thing, but I thought I should point it out for you so you can change it.
    Otherwise, the excitement is growing! I'm guessing it was Iris Parkinson that poisoned Hermione. Tom did say he would give the order not to let anyone else touch her, so I guess he has done something to Iris :) Not that I mind...
    Oooh, and I wonder what happened to Ginny! What will they do to her? Well, I guess I just have to continue to read and find out!
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