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By : serpentinred

From DB1 on October 05, 2012
@59 this story is amazing!!! I was a bit confused there in the middle with the wacky time line and all but it's all starting to make sense now!!! Please update this story soon!!!

DB
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From ANON - PieLover100 on October 01, 2012
This story is so amazing... I was addicted the second I started reading it. I'm going to flip out when a new chapter is added. I hope it's soon :) This is the best Tomione by far. This story just has to much detail and adventure. It sucks you in. I'm also going to add that you do Tom (as well as all the other characters) perfectly. I hate when authors make them flying unicorns that fart glitter or cannibals that shoot puppies. Happy writing :) (Can't wait for more)
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From TheLadyMiya on September 22, 2012
Aaaah! So sorry it took me so long to read, but now I'm here :D I really enjoyed this chapter! Ginny was so badass, and I really liked the way you used the fighting in seventh and sixth book in this scene. Time repeats itself before it happens and all that ;) But Ginny was just the best! GIRL POWER! I laughed out loud when I realised it was Ginny who called that (For a moment I thought it was Grindelwald, but then I read it properly, and just laughed). And now they are dead! Mihihihihi. I wonder how much the future will change because of this. Miya is guessing a lot.

FINALLY! Now we are getting closer to brining Hermione back. Good. Miya want some more Tom/Hermione interaction!

Oh, and nice that you had them changing their name to the Death Eaters now. Your explanation as to why they chose that name made sense in a way. It is a bit of a silly name, it sounds so evil, even when you don't know anything about the group and it just doesn't make sense for anyone to pick such a name when they think they are the ones doing the right thing. It sounds more like some sort of heavy metal band... But then, Harry Potter is children's books first and so you don't have that problem there, but it can turn a bit problematical when you look at it logically. So kudos on you for giving it an explanation!

I wonder what will happen to time now when Tom's main enemies are gone. Will Harry and Tom begin fighting again? Or will they just let time run its course once Hermione is back? Really looking forward to find out. But it does feel like the end is coming close and closer!

Thanks for writing, and best of luck with the next chapter!
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From ANON - Sara S on September 03, 2012
Loved the new chapter, it was fantastic, although I'm not one for Dumbledore bashing (I ignore Deathly Hallows so he's not such a manipulative bastard in my little world) I have to say I'm glad that he's dead.

Can't wait to see what you have planned for Hermione return (fingers crosses.)

May I ask how many more chapters you have planned?

Oh, and I hope to see more Outtakes from the 'Wacky future.'

Update soon, please.
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From ANON - Laura on August 26, 2012
OMG awesome chapter!!! It ended on the perfect cliffhanger!!! I really like that Ginny killed Dumbledore, that was a good twist, and although she was channeling her mom, it seemed kinda funny her calling Dumbledore a 'bitch'. Maybe it should have been, "NOT MY MAN, YOU FUCKER!" or something lol. But it felt good to have her call out Dumbledore on all the shit he put them through, I never realized that in the books Dumbledore was really manipulative and stuff until I started reading Voldemort/Hermione fics!! I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Alassea Riddle on August 26, 2012
Believe it or not, I can
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From ANON - Gabby0515 on August 19, 2012
Yes! There is a way to bring her back! I just knew she couldn't be dead and the story continues. It IS a TR/HG story after all. I'm so glad you brought this in to the mix. Now, to see if she will be herself if able to be brought back. Looking forward to the next chapter I love this story!
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From ANON - Weezie on August 18, 2012
I hope that hermione comes back as herself and not someone else in a hermione suit. I love this story and can't wait for the next update.
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From ANON - Shoplifterette on August 18, 2012
Aweseome chapter. I'm glad to see Dumbledore and Grindelwald defeated - they had it coming. Now, I only hope that the Coin of Charon really does what it's supposed to do. Can't wait!
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From ANON - Gabby0515 on August 12, 2012
I agree with Ginny and Draco in this chapter. Tom was acting a bit strange. So, it seems there IS a way to bring Hermione back. Well, maybe. Great chapter and looking forward to the next!
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From ANON - Laura on August 06, 2012
This story is reaaalllyyy good!! I got so lucky that you updated today! I spent the past 3 days reading non stop in all my free time and finished chapter 57 last night. I always skipped by this fic because I dont like the idea of harry and ginny and everyone back in the past along with hermione, but I'm glad I stuck with it this time! It really picked up for me once Dumbledore went to Germany and Harry and Ginny were at St. Mungos. I loved the end of chapter when hermione died and Riddle was like 'I hate you' and we all know he means I love you!!! XD

The only thing I dont really understand is that in the very beginning Hermione was like 'do I love him? How can I love tom riddle? etc.' but nothing has ever shown that she LOVES him. She's in lust with him, and can't help having sex with him and admiring him for his brilliancy, but she's always fighting, kicking, cursing, and hating him....there's never been any sudden epiphany moment where she realizes she loves him and doesn't want him hurt, no matter what else happens. She gets jealous of other women, but it just has never seemed like she actually loves him, as she has no qualms fucking him and then once again plotting his downfall. So I'm just wondering why it said she loved him so early on back at hogwarts, was that a mistake?
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From brightneeBee on August 02, 2012
I believe you nailed Voldemort's reaction to Hermione's death on the head, Serp! I do think he is one of those few people who can compartmentalize their emotions when dealing with a multitude of situations at once. He would definitely think of her as still alive, just sleeping, until he figured out a way to bring her back. No one escapes Lord Voldemort THAT easily, Miss Granger! *snnrks*

Thank you for such a wonderful update! Looking forward to the next, whenever that may be! *raises gun to Serp's muse* Yeah, Muse...I'm looking at you...get to work, missy, or I will be very upset with you.... *muahahahaa*

Great chapter! I envy your ability to characterize canon perfectly!

Sincerely,
brightneeBee
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From SRaven_Underhill on July 23, 2012
I am so intrigued! I can't wait to hear more about the coin and the possibilities surrounding that. I miss the scenes with Hermione and Tom, so I'm hoping that she will come back soon! Thank you for another splendid chapter! I look forward to your next update. Oh, and thank you for taking the time to review my story as well :)
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From ANON - Bluelagoon on July 22, 2012
Tom was...weird. Sure, he was all "Torture the old man, kill bumblebee, kill ALL the one's who cross me"...but still...he seemed like he was holding back. It was so surreal. Especially the part with Harry and the rest, but I have to say...that's exactly what I liked about that chapter. When Ginny of all people lashes out at him and he takes it. Like Hermione is standing right there, eyes narrowed going all "Don't you dare touch my friends" and I mean he knows how much she meant to them. Amazing how much Hermione changed him in a way. And that deal...couple of months ago he's crucio'd them on the spot, but now.

I want him to get his Hermione back :(

Thanks for updating by the way!!! Hope to read more soon =)
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From TheLadyMiya on July 20, 2012
Yaaay! Finally able to read the chapter and wow, lots of things happening! Did we finally see the end of Grindelwald or will he and Dumbledore try to stop Voldemort together now? Ooh, please let us see a scene where Dumbledore takes care of old Gellert and do lots of lurve and planning. That would be cute.

Why do I have the feeling I'm completely alone in thinking so? :( Oh, well.

Oooh, and Potter, Ginny and Draco are now bounding with Voldemort to kill Dumbledore? Isn't that a lovely twist. I do wonder what Voldemort is planning to do with them. Of course he must have some sort of plan... he always does. It will be interesting to see!

And of course Voldemort is planning to bring back Hermione. Duh. I can't wait to see how it happens, though. And how will Hermione take it? Will you have some scene with her in the after-life, or will she just appear again, with no memories of being dead? I'm also wondering if you will mix any mythology into her resurrection. Voldemort talking about hell make it sound like it's towards a christian after-life-mentality, but who knows? Or maybe you'll just skip that problematic and go for Hermione-appearing-again. I just find it interesting to read what other people think about the after-life!

Anyway, great chapter, looking forward to the next one! Thanks for sharing!
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