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By : serpentinred
  • From brightneeBee on June 08, 2012
    I really wish your muse would get her butt up and get to work! *snnrks* I could cry knowing it could be months before this is updated! I love your work! This is definitely in my top picks, always! Along with Nerys and Miya's works, this story helped convert me to the absolute rightness that is TMR-LV/Hermione fanfiction shipping.
    Your attention for detail is phenomenal, smut is incredibly well-written, plot is outstanding, and overall rating would be 101923040890 +'s but, alas, the rating scroll does not go that high!

    I do hope that your muse comes back so the next chapter is updated *bats eyelashes* I'm dying to know what happens next!!!
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  • From Gabby0515 on April 09, 2012
    This chapter made me so damn sad :*( I really hope there is some way to bring Hermione back. Surely there is right?
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  • From ANON - foreverlostdreamer on April 09, 2012
    Hmmm i think Tom will either use time travel to prevent Hermione's death or by preserving her body he will use some kind of dark magic to revive her maybe necromancy ??? ...well can't wait to see what will happen next :D
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  • From ANON - foreverlostdreamer on April 09, 2012
    Oh my god i cried so much when i read that chapter. It was really late at night and i was almost going to sleep than i checked if there was a new chapter and than "sniff" "sniff" ...all their reaction was very well described toms was the most heartwarming of all T_T. Love your story will continue reading when you update ^_^
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  • From ANON - somebody french on April 07, 2012
    ....Why?
    Why? Why did you do this to me? Why?
    Hermione is dead. Really dead. I know, the "Hermione Jean Granger died" cliffhanger was pretty explicit, but I thought that you would pull this "Technically dead, but actually..." situation. But no, she is dead. And Tom is getting mad at the body.
    About Tom. He made crucioing a body heartbreaking and not horrifying. Amazing, in a way. And yelling "I hate you" becomes a proof of love. Okay. This is what happens when Hermione dies: things don't make sense anymore. That is why sane authors DO NOT kill her off. Then again, sane authors don't write a whole chapter in Pikachu language either, so I was warned.
    And just in case I haven't cried enough, there is the scene between Ginny, Harry and Draco for me. Harry wants to kill Dumbledore. You do that, Harry. But then again, Tom's plan does sound better. I don't care, make him pay.
    I would ask you to update soon, but you probably won't do it fast enough for my taste anyawy.^^
    But as long as Hermione is dead (Since you are not totally unreasonable, I am sure she won't be permanently), you better keep those wards up.
    In case I wasn't clear, an amazing chapter.

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  • From Shamonti on April 06, 2012
    Wow!
    I'm speechless. The way you handled Tom's reaction so delicately was beautiful - it made me shed a lot of tears. But what broke my heart was the reaction of Draco's and his whole array of emotions - it was breath-taking! I truly felt his anguish. I loved how you gave each character their own grieving method, Harry being stotic in the begining and then revealing his pain, Ginny being more up-front about her pain and Draco with his fraustration. And of course there's Tom's revenge fueld craze that was filled with denial of Hermione's death. How could I missed that, it was crazy!
    What an amazing chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tori on April 06, 2012
    I object ! At cliffhangers! however I can not wait for the next chapter, I thank the writer so for this lovely story because it is a big favorite of mine. The story works in so many ways and I can't wait to see the new timeline and herm (being alive I hope) Comes back. Please please get the next chapter up
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  • From Popcornbandit on April 06, 2012
    You are evil. So freaking evil. *cries*

    Hermione you can't be dead for good ok, you got to come back. Because. My emotions right now. You can't just leave Tom all alone. ;~;


    Meep. I have nothing else to say because while the chapter was good I spent the whole time crying and it's your fault that people are looking at me weird!
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  • From ANON - Ujala on April 06, 2012
    NOOOOOOOOOO! Hermione can't die! You've captured Riddles reaction so well though, brillaint writing. Dumbledore needs to die. Always in the fucking way.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on April 06, 2012
    Sooo, you begin the chapter by having Draco doing something clever? WHAT HAVE THE WORLD COME TOO?

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW! Tom is being sad :( That was a very will written scene. BUT YOU DIDN'T TRICK ME INTO CRYING. MOHAHAHAHAHAHA! *Miya happy for thwarting Serp's evil plan to make her readers sob*

    Sorry, even when Draco is sad he annoys me. Sigh... it's kind of cute, I guess... but he is Draco! He is annoying! It's in his blood!

    Uhuh, Tom storing Hermione's body? This can't be good...

    Haha! Harry wanting to kill Dumbledore have me thinking about that "Harry Potter in five seconds"-clip... have you seen it? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aeYOdgwByLc

    Yay! Excellent chapter! Really much action and progress going on :) Will eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From AlasseaM on April 06, 2012
    First reaction: *dance* Yaay! Serp has updated

    Guess I shouldn't have done that, cause even the April's Fool prank didn't make me as sad.

    Oh, Serp! *clutches desperately to over wet tissue*

    I'm damn crying my eyes out! This was so sad! First I cried at Riddle's... behavior even when he knew she was dead. He wasn't crying, of course, (*shudders of disgust*) but his actions were enough. *sob*

    Then Draco's reaction. I really, really, don't think I've cried so much (see, I had just stopped crying at the end of the chapter, and now while I'm writing this I'm crying again!!). Amazing writing. *tries to laugh, but sounds awkward*

    Then Harry's reaction. When he came out of the shock state it made me cry even more. I was hiccuping and crying through the whole thing! *Bawls*

    It was so hard to concentrate and the fact that Riddle didn't even bother to talk to his Knights was really telling. I don't think I've cried so hard in a fan fiction!!!!!!!!!

    Now I'm wondering what he is going to do exactly. Riddle, I mean.

    And I seriously hope he kicks Dumble's ass! The FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

    *takes a deep breath but ends up sobbing again*

    Update soon, cause if I'm going to reread this without any continuation, I'm definitely going to be depressed (not that I can stop rereading).

    I really felt like killing you for this, but what the hell. It was good anyway. *dries face*

    *sniffs and snorts* My tissue is not the only thing my tears reached. My pillow and shirt too x'D

    - Moaning-Allie
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  • From magentasouth on April 04, 2012
    a *special* hell...
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  • From FutureErotic on April 02, 2012
    That was cruel...
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  • From Popcornbandit on April 02, 2012
    Im laughing so hard at your April Fools Chapter. When I read the first few lines I was like "Did I forget something about the previous chapter?" but then I was like. OMG SERPIE YOU AND YOUR FREAKING APRIL FOOLS CHAPTER! and sure enough the whole thing was freaking Pikachunese. xD

    I am so angry. I'm laughing. But mad. :P

    I hope you plan on updating tomorrow otherwise I just might go recruit Voldy (I'm sure he isn't pleased about having to argue like a Pikachu)and we'll go all Misery on you and break your legs and force you to write until the story is finished. xP

    By the way, I just realized I've been faithfully following this story for at least 3 years now.

    It's worth it. :P
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  • From AlasseaM on April 01, 2012
    I would say that I hope you get ready to be peed on, but I decided that since it's your birthday, you are going to have a hug instead. *hug* And pleeaaase update soon. :D xD
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