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By : serpentinred
  • From ANON - Ujala on March 14, 2012
    DAMN! You left it at such a cliffhanger! p.s I saw your message at the bottom about needing someone for grammar? Could help if you like :)

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  • From Shamonti on March 13, 2012
    HOLY SHIT!
    :O
    *speechless*
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  • From ANON - Mekom on March 13, 2012
    That was just plain EVIL!!!! That better not have been the end of the story, although that would make a particularly good early April Fools Day prank. I love this story. And I really hope you update soon.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 13, 2012
    Meh, it was doomed to happen sooner or later. Somehow, time will do a jig and then we end up with an alive Hermione again. I'm sorry to say that this ending doesn't really upset me. I'm more sighing "finally". I don't know why, but I've got so annoyed with the time travellers group I want them all dead. They are just stuck in this "no, I want to sacrifice myself for you. No, I do. No, me!" in every single chapter! It's in character and all, but I still find it so frustrating. Hence my "finally"-sigh. I'm hoping Hermione will be separated from the group now and get back with Tom. I do believe he will be the one to find a way to bring Hermione back.

    Where is Tom btw? What happened with his duel with Dumbledore? Dumbledore obviously lived, but since he was worried about the Elder wand ending up in Voldemort's hands, that means Tom is alive as well. Did they call a truce when Grindelwald disappeared?

    I'm also wondering what you are planning to do with Nicholas since you brought him up in this chapter as well.

    And kudos on the excellent fighting scene. They are so hard to write!

    As to the other three: more killing please.

    Good luck with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - somebody french on March 13, 2012
    This was a really good chapter. I don't think I have to say much: the plot was great, and I liked how the personality changes Dumbledore had were actually explained (unlike many, many other fanfics). Funny Draco is funny,Clever Hermione is clever, and brave (reckless) Harry is brave.
    So yeah, great chapter, however...

    " On February 25, 1950, Hermione Granger died at the hands of Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore."
    This shall not go unpunished.
    Never mind the wards, you can run,but you can't hide.
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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on March 13, 2012
    MOURNING
    Can't believe I just read that.
    All for the greater good!!!
    Albus Fucking Dumbledore!!! How I HATE YOU!!!
    But Tom is gonna travel back time and be there before Albus kill her. She can't die.
    If she dies, the fic is gonna end... so I know she is gonna be back!
    Now they are gonna follow Tom... No doubts about it.
    If they don't, they are idiots!
    Can't wait fdor the next chapter! Kisses.
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  • From AlasseaM on March 13, 2012
    And a new chapter! Yaay! Eh... that doesn't mean I've forgiven you for Dudley, dear.... But I still love you! :D xD LOL

    "he would make comments about how and why he didn't think certain ideas would work" - You know, either Draco is a very good observer or he's a Seer. I mean... EVERYTHING he said in this fic has come true, one way or another. Take him seriously sometimes, dammit! xD

    "There were no Knights standing outside" - Why do I have the feeling that there is a very good reason to NOT go out?

    ""No wonder we had a good night's sleep last night," Draco muttered as he ran his hands through his hair." OMG! HAHAHAHAHA! May I ask you if you are actually talking through Draco, cause sometimes there are comments he makes that makes me think that it's something YOU would say... and blame another person for xD xD xD

    And of course... Self preservation is a Slytherin trait, so of course the "nobel" Gryffindor's are bullying him for it. Poor little thing. He can't get reassurance here or there. *cackles evilly*

    Blood, blood, blood... ugh...

    Uncle Gellert... That made me laugh.. Sounds funny xD

    "Finally, they caught sight of a familiar white-blond head of hair hiding behind a tree while others were dueling farther away." - The Malfoys are a misunderstood kind of creatures and they deserve our utmost respect... NOT. This is hilarious! I love how you've made it more like the "family" trait than anything else. xD xD

    Oooh, clever thinking Draco, clever thinking...

    Somehow I KNEW that Dumbles would make his entr
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  • From ANON - miya on phone on February 22, 2012
    They never stop babbling, do they? Where is my smut?! Oh well, at least it was an informative chapter. Very interesting. Ill try to review again when Im on my computer without mum next to me. Toodles for now!
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  • From ANON - blindfaithoperadiva on February 18, 2012
    Awesome ... I haven't read this in awhile ... Lol
    THanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Allison on February 16, 2012
    awww, no smut? I'm disappointed! lol
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  • From BeccaSummers on February 15, 2012
    FINALLY!! Have waited eons for this chapter. I LOVED it! You`re so, so talented. Can`t wait till the next one.

    Love Rebecca!
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  • From ANON - Alassea Riddle on February 15, 2012
    Okay, so after a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong pause, I finally came back.
    I must say Hermione annoyed the heck out of me. "Blah, blah, blah" Yes Hermione, we don't want to listen to you. You are only good for 1 thing: To make the Dark Lord react (which I must say, you do very well, although you can get veeeery annoying).
    Is it okay to drool again? I don't think I've drooled for some time now...
    Oooh, she likes his handsome face better? Well, I don't care. Hmf! I like my Lord either way! *blows kiss*
    Hahaha, Draco's reactions are so priceless xD Well, he did have a point. If Tom doesn't kill him for turning sides, he will deffo kill him for being near Hermy.

    ARGH, I hate how this isn't a long review.. anywaaay, I loved the chapter, and it was good you had updated, or else I wouldn't have bugged you to death. xD

    I look forward to an evil cliffhanger, so I can hunt you down.
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  • From Shamonti on February 15, 2012
    As if your story could not have more brilliant, you through the wand plan which is amazing! This is on EPIC story. I've never been so dedicated in reading a story since Homer's Iliad, H.Potter series and The Qu'ran(Arabic Version).
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  • From ANON - Tom Icklle on February 15, 2012
    Tom Icklle: I wanted to say that I luuuuurved thou story with a nice symbolic heart for Vday. But I'm not allowed to use < and a 3 together.

    So hereby: Loooooved it.

    xx F!T
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  • From ANON - Tom Cripple on February 15, 2012
    I say ... finally an update. But how can you update on Valentine's Day, have them naked throughout the entire chapter and forego with our much needed SMUT!?!!!

    I daresay the birthday girls won't be amused. I know, even though I'm not one of them and a total and complete as well as utter stranger, that Miya and Nyers like their Tomione smut. So naked Tom, naked Hermione and noooooo smut! Tom Cripple does not approve of this message.

    Here is what Tom Miffle does approve of:

    The Ten Commandments of Fanfiction:

    First: Thou shalt always worship our Lord, your master.

    Second: Thou shalt always write smut.

    Third: Thy smut better be long and kinky.

    Fourth: Said smut should be between our Lord and MEEEEEE! (Otherwise known as Hermione.) T_T

    Fifth: Readers shalt require their Hermione Voodoo Dolls (registred trademark) whilst reading thy chapter.

    Sixth: Thy smut should be everywhere and at any time.

    Seventh: Thy shalt not have a life or pretend to have one and forego on thy update responsibilities.

    Eight: Thou shalt not commit the horrors of writing Hermione with third, unworthy parties, such as Draco, Ron, Snape, Lucius (for full list, see my homepage).

    Nine: Thy fanfiction shalt be written promptly and without delay.

    Ten: Thy fanfiction shalt not have evil cliffhangers EVA!

    From hereon, I expect full compliance with these rules. If not, be aware that ... You. Have. Been. Warned.

    much lurve,

    Tom Icklle.

    PS. I
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