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Reviews for What Would You Wish For?

By : ronsmistress
  • From CrazyPedantic on February 19, 2010
    What an original story! Never seen a fan story based on a genie before. Ordinarily I'm not a Ron fan, I think he's hot headed and stupid. However I'm enjoying the way you've portrayed him here.

    Really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Can I guess what his third wish will be? He'll wish his genie's freedom. (That's the sort of soppy romantic notion I'm known for.)

    You really are casting Hermione in a bad light. I understand why and it works for this story. Trust her to get all snooty becasue someone else is displaying some brains, although she could also be feeling threatened as well.

    Please update soon. If you'll write, I'll read. And I'll try and review it all.
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  • From purpleann on February 19, 2010
    Oh, I am utterly charmed by this story so far! The genie is so sweet and loves Ron just as much as I do. :) I can't wait to see what Ron does with his new-found understanding of women. :)
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  • From architect on February 18, 2010
    Such a sweet story. Ron has always been my favourite character. Keep writing.
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  • From Daye on February 18, 2010
    This is very good. It's nice to see Ron depicted as an all round decent chap. A lot of fics go the 'Ron is a totally git' type which sadly is not without evidence from the canon. I mean did Ron get to do anything decent or Heroic after Prisoner of Askaban? (Where he stands up on a broken leg to protect Harry from the world's most notorious mass murderer)

    So, yes, I'm liking your depiction of Ron, the genie quite an interesting character. I have a shrewd suspicion about where the plot's going though, and what Ron will probably use his final wish for.
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  • From ponderguy on February 17, 2010
    i really enjoyed this first chapter. your fundamentals (grammar, spelling etc) were all very good. the dialogue between ron and he shopkeeper was very natural and made me think of a grandfatherly shopkeep. just a really solid first chapter, and i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From KhloeBee on February 14, 2010
    please update... i love this story
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  • From flatliner15 on February 14, 2010
    nice, definately want to read more
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  • From purpleann on February 13, 2010
    Yay! You're writing again! Can't wait to see where this one goes. You're off to a great start, and I'm intrigued by the woman in red. :)
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  • From Daye on February 13, 2010
    A genie in a watch? Pretty cool. A decent start; Ron's going to wish for something dirty I assume...
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