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Reviews for Sex Talk

By : cocacolaqueen
  • From EnyalTegger on December 14, 2010
    Very sexy first chapter. And I'm glad the story had some closure in the second chapter.
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  • From calypzo69 on June 20, 2010
    I felt like I was on a rollercoaster the whole time! That was an amazing experience! My heart was frantically beating the whole way through! Great work!!! I could actually see it in my head like a movie! There was enough hate, punishment and pain to balance it all out with the rest. Zero sapp. I got to say I am very impressed!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2010
    I loved that ending, sweet but still entirely Draco all at once.
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  • From brayzen on February 27, 2010
    Definatly a much better ending me thinks. Good happily ever afters and such. *stands and claps* Bravo!
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  • From jaceni50 on February 26, 2010
    Really liked the ending. I didn't think it would be good if you continued from where you left off, but I was wrong and it gave closure. :D
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  • From Baybeetricia on February 26, 2010
    I love how it ended. I almost cried when Ron apparated Hermione away.

    -shudders- Love it. Write more.....but in a next story since you said it's the last chapter :)

    Baybeetricia

    P.S. I think they need to add a button called "Add to Favorites"...
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  • From mrequecky on February 26, 2010
    Yay, I liked this chapter a lot :D Thanks!
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  • From chiquitaf16 on February 26, 2010
    That was a good ending, I love a posessive and almost obsessive Malfoy. I don't know why cause in real life i would find a guy like that to be creepy but it's hot when it happens between enemies in a story.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 26, 2010
    Yay :) Thanks for a conclusion. Was a pretty good one too. Loved how you made her pissed at Ron for taking her away. Also loved how much of a prat Ron was.

    Thanks so much for writing this. :D
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  • From brayzen on February 21, 2010
    THE HELL YOU SAY....NOT WORTH IT?!!! GET YOUR MUSE IN GEAR AND SAVE HERMIONE.......and they live happily ever after ^^
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 21, 2010
    So very glad you weren't insulted. It's hard to be honest and encouraging in a review, without coming off as a tool.I will now shoot myself in the head, your explanation makes complete sense (and now that you've given it, completely obvious). I know it's a big ask, but in my humble and hopeful opinion another chapter (just one) where he gets her out or they die trying would be really satisfying. Completely understand if you don't want to.

    I'll read anything else I come across that you write, because lately I have read a lot of poorly written fiction. Someone with decent grammar, spelling and structure skills is getting harder to find. You're one of the good ones.
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  • From cocacolaqueen on February 21, 2010
    I'm not insulted by your review at all.
    Actually, I kinda got mad at myself for writing it like that, but I do want to explain myself.
    Draco still knew his dad was listening in, and all the other Death Eaters, so at the end he had to act like he was still bad ass. If I chose to continue the story, it would be with Draco coming back and getting her the Hell out of there. But I don't think its worth continuing. :) Thank you for the review!
    Amy
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 18, 2010
    This isn't a flame. (Just incase this comes out wrong)

    I both liked and hated your story. It was well written and made sense structure wise and all that technical rubbish.

    I think what I didn't like was the content, especially the ending. I think because it seemed from the way you wrote Draco that he was adverse to raping her. Then at the end he's like, so what. That didn't sit right with me.

    But yeah I appreciate your talent in writing this, even if it isn't my cup of tea. Keep writing and I'll keep reading :)
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  • From Amanda88 on February 14, 2010
    Draco is absolutely horrible, great story :-)
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