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Reviews for Rejection and Acceptance

By : ryuchan001
  • From ANON - bluebird on March 08, 2010
    There... happy now... I gave myself a nickname *beep*... So far so good... Let's get to the action now... pleaseeeee........... thanks.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on March 06, 2010
    I sent you an email :)

    Interesting chapter. Ron is still being completely irrational, but he wouldn't be Ron otherwise. I liked the way you punished everyone. And the bit with Hermione, very clear. Dumbledore's silencing bubbles were good too. It means they couldn't argue with each other whhile telling their versions of the events. I liked the resorting. "That's never been done before!" And Harry's reaction of being both Gryffindor and Slytherin. Curious as to why it took the sorting hat so long to make up it's mind.

    Only part I didn't really like was the start where you have them talking to each other as adults. But that's a personal preference of just wanting to get into the writing of the story.
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  • From danawarner on March 06, 2010
    Ron is such an immature ass. He's just ticked that he's losing his place as The-Boy-Who-Lived's best friend. He apparently does know HARRY at all. I hope Hermione comes around though.
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  • From AyaChan2006 on March 06, 2010
    also forgot to say thanx 4 the shout out Draco, u n harry are da best...love u guys heaps

    Aya
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  • From AyaChan2006 on March 06, 2010
    ok now i give u a proper review...OMG i love this story soooo much...i can't wait for the next chappy, oh btw i hope i don't do like a hundred of these be for it loads properly

    XD

    Aya
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  • From SilentDreamer on March 06, 2010
    Sorry! The last review was mine... I posted through the iPhone but the thing didn't connect me first...
    "This is wonderful! Two chapters in a row!!! I am really excited can't wait to see everyones reaction to Harry's re sorting. About the beta thing, I really don't know why you want one I have yet to find anything wrong with your work but if you need proof reading I can help out! Will keep posted for more!"
    If anything contact me to my facebook!
    ♥
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2010
    This is wonderful! Two chapters in a row!!! I am really excited can't wait to see everyones reaction to Harry's re sorting. About the beta thing, I really don't know why you want one I have yet to find anything wrong with your work but if you need proof reading I can help out! Will keep posted for more!
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  • From ANON - thetigersfire1 on March 06, 2010
    I like where you are going with this story. Please continue writing and thank you.
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  • From SilentDreamer on March 05, 2010
    Once again totally elated with the chapter!! Loving the whole Harry/Ron fighting... they are always 'perfect' best friends in every other story, and it is refreshing seeing them fighting for once. Gotta say the after reading the last chapter I was left with a nice image of a Harry in Draco's clothe!! *drools* Soooo smexy!! More please! ♥
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  • From Elvira on March 05, 2010
    Update soon!

    I loved it, Ron should be hit on the head with something HARD.

    Can't wait till you update!!!
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  • From mrequecky on March 05, 2010
    Yes, definitely liked this chapter! Wow, that went out of line... Loved!
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  • From ANON - Natasha Marois- McKenzie on March 05, 2010
    I still say there are many spelling errors sis of mine. Is not bad.. but get ur ass movin and write more... any missing letters are there for a reason btw... so dont say I cant spell.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on March 05, 2010
    Wow. Great fight scene. Ron has totally lost all sense of reason. It was his fault Harry had to sleep in the dungeons and now he's blaming Harry for it. Stupid git. Love the way you have Harry calling him a homophobe. One thing I wasn't clear on was whether or not Hermione was fighting and if so what team she was on. Actually I think the rumours were funnier because they were raving on about them shagging. I can see them giving each other hand jobs at that age and lots of snogging. But full penetrative sex, not for a year or two at least. (I'm really careful what ages I get them knocking boots, the laws in my country would count it as child porn and I don't want to be sent to gaol. Don't know what it's like anywhere else.)

    I am very curious as to what Dumbledore will be saying to the Gryffindor boys. I hope you include this in your next chapter. I loved the way Harry had people from all houses on his side whereas Ron had no Slytherins. Peeves calling Dumbledore Professorhead LOL. The girls not really noticing some of the blokes were half naked lots of LOL. The fact that you mentioned Harry wasn't wearing underwear was really really funny. This was a great chapter.

    I'm reallly flattered that you have to read my reviews before you post. Thank you. If ever you are unsure about anything and want an opinion please email me. There were a couple of spelling errors and some of the words could have been arranged a bit better. What I do after I finish writing a chapter is leave it for a few hours and then re-read it. I always find a few things that need to be tweeked before I post it. Alternatively you can get someone else to read it too.

    This is a great story and I love where it's going. I just want you to write the best story you are capable of. (If that sounds really patronising I'm sorry. I meant it as encouraging, but sometimes things just don't come out right.)

    Really looking forward to your next update.
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  • From AyaChan2006 on March 05, 2010
    ok your prob with Bold and Underline is easy to fix just use < b >< u > to start and < / b >< / u > to finish with out the spaces
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  • From Elvira on March 03, 2010
    I absotuly loved it!!!! Oh, whats going to happen when they see him in Slytherin robes?
    Hmmm....

    Update soon please!
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