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Reviews for Rejection and Acceptance

By : ryuchan001
  • From CrazyPedantic on March 03, 2010
    Found one little mistake. In the first paragraph you wrote ignoring but ended it with an f not a g. Other than that little error. BLOODY FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!!! Totally loving the twins...they're so funny and also loyal. Ron is being a completely ignorant sod. Yeah a ticklefest really looks like shagging. *rolls eyes dramatically*

    Disappointed in the way Hermione is acting. The fact that she used magic against Harry was really deceitful. And her response to the fact that Harry has accepted Draco as a friend was very pathetic and spineless. The gossips of the school making up ridiculous stories is crazy. It's great that you've made some of the canon characters that I liked be completely acting in ways that have made me dislike them in this story. Well done :)

    Hehehehe loved the way Draco and Harry woke up cuddling. So cute :D

    Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From BleedingHearts on March 03, 2010
    For the love of god MORE!

    I haven't read a fluffy fic in years, but this is so good I'll consider reading them more often.
    This is a fantastic first story, I love how it's gradually developing and Draco and Harry are slowly becoming friends.
    Will there be any Harry/Draco any time soon?

    Great job, can't wait to read the rest! xXx
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  • From SilentDreamer on March 03, 2010
    OMG!!! I AM LOVING THIS!!! Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more so please!!! Write soon! ♥
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  • From mrequecky on March 03, 2010
    Liked the chapter a lot and hope you get better soon!
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  • From ANON - veracityrules on February 28, 2010
    Axel, sorry to contact via a review for your story but your email address is not available. Don't worry, I'm not a weirdo or anything, I'm just another huge Snarry fan who is a big fan of a fic we are both reading at the moment; the Snarry fic Deserving by Moon of the Sea. I saw your last review when I posted mine for the latest update and I noticed that you mentioned it was the first one that made you cry. It is excellent isn't it?

    However, I too have a particularly favourite Snarry fic and it is so gut-wrenchingly emotional it will have you crying like a baby if you are interested. It's that good! I bookmarked it about 18 mths ago and frequently go back and read it and it never gets old! I have posted the link below if you want to check it out. Trust me, you won't be disappointed. Again, apologies for hijacking you review board and email address is veracityrules@aol.com if you want to bollock me for sending a fic rec via your review board!

    http://thetwobroomsticks.slashcity.net/siren/AttheHeartofThings.html
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 26, 2010
    BOOM!! Ron's anger bomb exploded. Very well written, it sounds just like the Ron we've all come to know. Really don't blame Hermione for staying out of the argument. Harry's reasoning was very sound. I liked the way you had Harry and Draco interact, I would put them as being neutral at the moment. (Harry neutral, Draco's being friendly.)

    I saw a spelling error, you wrote poition (position?) in the part where Ron wanted to hide behind Harry because all of these people were annoyed that he got them stuck in groups. No biggie :)

    Can't wait for the next one....it's starting to get very intriguing
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  • From Elvira on February 26, 2010
    Nice, Nice! love it!

    Update soon!
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  • From layne378 on February 24, 2010
    Very good
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  • From Elvira on February 24, 2010
    Loved it!!!!

    I like it so far so please update when you have the time!
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 24, 2010
    Thank you for another lovely chapter. First of all, Harry hasn't had a chance to tell his friends about his conversation with Draco, but yes Ron will most likely have a lot to say about that smile. I also liked the way you had Draco be almost nice about Harry's lack of ability in potions. He was quite pleasant to him and offering to teach him techniques was a wonderful idea.

    Liked the whole Ron hating Slytherins. (That prejudice was firmly evident in the books.) There is very little canon information about Blaise Zabini, so you can portray him however you like. Very funny that Ron caused all those problems, I think he managed to piss off Dumbledore. He did pretty much say he was stupid (that was funny too). The Pansy and Hermione working together was a good idea too. It seems they would be civil if for no other reason than to get decent marks.

    No spelling or grammar errors leapt out at me, but if I see any I'll let you know.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. You rock! :D
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on February 24, 2010
    still reading and liking it. one thing though i don't know how much you care but the truth serum is a 6th or 7th year potion other then that it was good
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 20, 2010
    Yay another chapter!

    Nice to see that Harry isn't just dismissing our favourite ferret. It's good that he didn't go straight into trusting someone he's disliked for years either. Now I'm really curious as to what Draco learnt over the summer that has him changing his mind. Although they are at the age when a persons ideal and morals are being defined by themselves rather than by parental teachings.

    I see you laying the groundwork for Harry's schism between his friends to form. Although I personally think that Ron will be the first to betray, he is after all the one who jumps to conclusions and accuses hhis friends of imagined insults.

    Can't wait for the next chapter...I think this is gonna be really interesting :)

    I'm your favourite reviewer at the moment? Thanks I'm touched. I only saw one blatant spelling mistake, but I can't remember what the word was, silly me.

    Keep going, even if the chapters are short, I'll still read :)
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 19, 2010
    You're gonna draw this out for us all aren't ya? Great chapter. I loved the way the boys were all "oh brooms are beautiful".

    Can't wait for another chapter. My one complaint is that your chapters are too short. Then again, I have trouble keeping mine short :)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on February 19, 2010
    uh it's good so far. a little confusing though. what year is it exactly? because you seem to be jumping around from years 2,3 and 5.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 19, 2010
    Hmmm I see what you mean, the first two chapters have been very close to the novel. The tiny little differences are what I think will make this story potentially interesting. Looking forward to seeing what will happen.

    Since I only read slash stories that have a great plot I hope you aren't planning on having Harry at such a young age be sexually active. On the other hand a relationship doesn't always mean sex.

    Please update soon, I want to know what happens :)
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