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Reviews for Return To Me

By : JuggaloRyda
  • From DarkSpyridon on March 31, 2010
    If you're going to write in third person, the most common is to use the past tense. It also makes it flow easier. The correct spelling of tragedy is that, not tradgity. You might want to get a beta reader.
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  • From Daye on February 20, 2010
    I'm sorry but this needs quite a bit of work before its even readable. Most prominently, the lack of paragraphs. If you had any, they haven't survived the upload, you need to hit the returnn key a couple times at the end of a graph to start a new one, like so.

    The other major problem I see is the uses of tenses. The fic starts out in present tense but finished in the past tense.
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