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Reviews for Happiness

By : SlytherinWench
  • From amerereader on March 06, 2010
    No problem, this new chapter was great, even though it was short haha, but everyone does need a vacation once in a while! Gods know I do. Anyways, can't wait to see how things progress between the two, even if I have to wait a few days! It's good to find a well written story once in a while! Haha, and actually I just read your info and you said you didn't have a Beta, so kudos for writing so well without one! I haven't noticed anything wrong grammatically or spelling wise (and I normally will spot something if it's there). Thank you for updating so consistently, have a good vacation, and think up some more ideas! Hahaha, I wouldn't mind some more Lavender-bashing ;-)
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  • From CrazyPedantic on March 05, 2010
    Short chapter. No tears this time. The interaction between Hermione and Draco was well done. She was distraught and really just wanting her pain to end. I don't think he got that, she would have asked anyone to kill her at that point (that's what I think) Draco's anger and pushing her around was understandable. He's just hurting and confused.

    I liked the way at the end of the chapter he comes to the realisation that he's not alone. Only hope that sometime in the future there's that realisation for Hermione too.

    Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From becka8199 on March 04, 2010
    Wow another great update. Draco acted very Draco-ish. But now he's seems conflicted. Poor Hermione, she's breaking my heart. And the fact that no one else has looked for her, hmmm? I mean someone should have went to her rooms and found her gone, and Harry has his Marauder's Map. Her friends aren't being friendly are they. Just go about their happy lil lives. Pathetic. Or am I getting ahead of you? So..... anyway. THank you for giving us that little bit before you left. I was ecstatic to see you'd updated again so soon. I can tell this is definately going to be a fantastic, heart-wrenching, grab my puffs and cry story.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From CrazyPedantic on March 04, 2010
    You made me cry. Your descriptions and emotions are so vivid and well written that you had me in tears. If you were aiming for a cheerful and fluffy story you failed. If you were aiming for a heartwrenching, soul searching, learning how to survive loss and angsty story then spot on.

    I'm really looking forward to your next update. Not often a story will reduce me to tears. Well done :)
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  • From amerereader on March 04, 2010
    Thank you for updating so quickly, but, AHH that's where you left me?! Hahaha, it's a great story so far, and I hate Lavender... the bitch... and I REALLY can't wait for more! :-)
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  • From becka8199 on March 04, 2010
    Well you are evil aren't you! *wink* You definately left that hanging. Good job. I hope to see another update very soon. Oh and I like how when that Brown (biatch) girl started in on Hermione, she finally let out a little of how she was feeling. But will her friends comfort her, or will the stay away because they don't know what to expect from her? Will Draco think she's gone nutters and leave her where she is? Probably not, he will probably try to find out why she is ready to die. See you've got me questioning everything. Please update soon. Very nice chapter.
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  • From TinaMaria12084 on March 03, 2010
    Great job, this story is very real. I hope that you will continue on with it, Draco and Hermione's relationship will be really interesting.
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  • From amerereader on March 03, 2010
    Another great chapter :-). Happy to see that we have some Draco/Hermione interaction... but that's where you left me! So now you'll definitely have to update soon so I can see what happens! ;-) But seriously, great work and keep it up!
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  • From becka8199 on March 03, 2010
    Hmmmm, very interesting beginning. I hope you plan to continue this.
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  • From amerereader on March 01, 2010
    I very, very much want to read more of this! I am loving the story so far. So please, please, please don't take long to update!!! :-)
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