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Reviews for A Secret Kept

By : MrsHermioneMalfoy
  • From becka8199 on March 08, 2010
    Well, this was a nice chapter. I love how you described in detail, the meaning and reasons for the name Hermione chose for little Carina. It was better with a longer chapter. So what's gonna happen next? Lol. B.
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  • From dragongirl on March 08, 2010
    Love Love Love More More More
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  • From CrazyPedantic on March 04, 2010
    You have my curiosity spiked. Would really like an update soon. Your chapters are really short so as yet I can't say whether or not I'm really into this story. (For me 3000 words is short)

    Your spelling and grammar seem ok to me, I just want to read more. Keep it up.
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  • From nonentity on March 03, 2010
    The deadpan teenage fangirl delivery is amusing. You kept the most annoying parts of that style out--no long descriptions of Hermione's perfect hair.
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  • From jaceni50 on March 02, 2010
    Interesting story, can't wait for the next update. :)
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  • From becka8199 on March 01, 2010
    Well, this could be very interesting. The summary really caught my eye. I hope you will continue with this. I have a tiny request, could you make the chapters a tad bit longer. If not, that's fine, I'll take what I can get! ;)
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  • From shelagh on March 01, 2010
    Good start keep it up!!!
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  • From nitesfool on March 01, 2010
    ok.... that wasn't the most complex writing style, but atleast it's clear and too the point.... and not blotched like alot of others that i've read.... keep going...i'm eager to read more.
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