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Reviews for What A Malfoy Wants

By : christineyoung
  • From ANON - drake on August 24, 2012
    Hmm, I've read the story so far, and I have to wonder why Hermione is acting as passive as she is. She's about to become a sex slave for two perverts that are using drugs to keep her horny, and have told her that not only will she be their sex doll, but their brood mare. Given Hermione's stance on slavery, I'd expect her to react rather violently and try to kill them, and that's before you consider the kidnapping itself and taking her from her family.
    The Malfoys have certainly proven that there's nothing redeemable about them and I hope she will kill them soon and then, as Hermione Malfoy, head of the Malfoy family, use the fortune and influence to change society to her views. I assume that's what the main point of the story will be... or are you going to keep it about Hermione getting drugged and raped by Malfoys? Because that'd be both disturbing and boring.
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  • From ANON - colao on August 23, 2012
    big kisses! I'm properly vamped for the upcoming chapters
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  • From kadajclone on August 23, 2012
    Like i have said before, i like this story ALOT, the one single solitary flaw in my opinion at least is how both the malfoy's flip flop between "oh i truly do love you Hermione and i hate that things have gotten this out of control and i promise it will be alright" to "Your mine and its within my rights to claim you and you have no say in the matter as the 'law' is on my side and i could kill your ex-husband......but i love you and want you to be happy.......as long as that 'happy' is what i decide it is" lol. It just feels at times like that kind of abusive boyfriend who takes away your ability to choose what you want to do and still claim to love you. Again i am honestly not trying to flame or knock you, i have read your other stories and they are golden its just that it seems here that Hermione goes from being the brightest witch of her age to some submissive little saint of a thing that is being put on a guilt trip by her captors and swayed by gifts and pretty words. I understand that it is mostly due to the Veela's instinct but this whole affair is not painting them in a good light when they have the ability to control their mate against its will. And will Ron be shown in a better light before this is done or will he lose the moral high ground to the malfoy's?

    sorry just had to get that off my chest and please don't be offended by it as i intend on reading this to the very end regardless of the path you take with it. Also will we be shown the reactions of her children? I would feel a SMALL amount of sympathy for Scorpius if he went back to school and had the whole Weasley/Potter clan after his ass, Veela powers be damned lol.
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  • From kadajclone on July 28, 2012
    aww please dont make ron the villain of this just to make the malfoy's look better when all this crap is there fault, and it kinda seems like hermione is still giving in too easily to her abducters and jailers and she shouldnt have to feel guilty towards them. I understand that the pull between them must be hard to resist but come on this is freaking hermione lol i dont think a trip to santa's workshop is gonna be enough to sway her lol. still a good story, just has me raging at the "netorare" aspects and i cant wait to see how Hermione's children react and i wonder if they might try to get at Scorpius once school starts again.
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  • From ANON - Vicky on July 04, 2012
    I think the child custody issue can wait. We all are waiting eagerly for the bonding. After that, the less interesting issues can be resolved. I adore Veela stories and this one is delightful.
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  • From DSTorres on June 28, 2012
    Interesting story thus far. I would say Ron filing to keep the kids from visiting at the Manor would be fair as Draco & Scorpius destroyed their family. However Ron should be more agreeable to a neutral site (supervised). He trusts Hermione but those other 2... Keep up the good work.
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  • From lemonade8 on June 20, 2012
    I don't know about bringing her children around the veela. I'm a mom and I would protect my kid with my dying breath. Then again, if the Malfoys know she would reject them or even kill them if they harmed her kids, would they harm them? But would she really want them to see her hormonally chained to those two, most likely behaving inappropriately and making them uncomfortable? What if Scorpius transferred to Rose? Hermione might kill him, but if Draco's transferred to Scorpius... Doesn't really tone down the awkward any, though.
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  • From Christopher11 on June 19, 2012
    I'm sorry, but there is no way that it should be 'equivalent to murder' in the slightest. If someone doesn't want to be tied to another person, 'mate' (I don't think those exist) or not they shouldn't be required to be.

    Harry is right, the law reeks of injustice and it's time for the law to change...... at the sword of Harry Potter, if necessary.
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  • From kadajclone on June 18, 2012
    Damn that sucks for Ron, and I totally agree with harry. Nice story but i am finding it VERY hard to like the malfoys lol.
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  • From MacPhisto on June 10, 2012
    I would have preferred it if you had stuck with Scorpius being hopelessly in love and trying to win Hermione's heart
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  • From Avivafae on June 05, 2012
    OMG! I absolutely love this story! Please tell me you're going to update soon!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on May 21, 2012
    Wow! Really impressed with this story! Don't think I have read anything like this before, really interesting and unique. Can't wait to see how she handles this!
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  • From chris7100 on May 13, 2012
    Sorry, but the logical response is that Scorpius gets yanked from Hogwarts and home schooled. He's the one in the wrong here, even Draco admits it, so if they want any chance of Hermione not hating both of them for the rest of their lives, despite the bond, then they have to make it right.
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  • From sexyPineapples on February 26, 2012
    I've been reading all your stories and you have a very seductive writing style. I wasn't into werewolves but last night I went to bed and dreamed about having sex with them hehe.
    I really hope you continue this story soon. It's hot and I'm really curious what will happen next.
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  • From pandabear on February 23, 2012
    why in the hell havent you updated this?
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