Adult-FanFiction.org : Harry Potter

Reviews for It's Not Just Sex

By : Daye

From ANON - ares88 on March 22, 2011
This chapter left so many questions i dont know where to start whihc i hope to be answered in the next chapter. It was a good update.
I do have one thing i want to point out. Malfoy and others would be stupid not to consider the possibility that Pansy is trying to fool them. In a case they accuse her... i wonder how she would defend against it?

Anyway, left me waiting with certain anxeity. Good work.
Report Review
From SalonKitty on March 21, 2011
Great stuff, Daye! I really love how Pansy turns out to be the cool, collected one--standing in for Hermione, perhaps, but with more wit and style.

Report Review

From shadowcat2 on March 13, 2011
I must say that I am very impressed with this story and its predecessor, It's Just Sex. It is not often that a fic follows so close to canon and is unique and original. Keep up the great work.
Report Review

From ceylon85 on March 05, 2011
I really wish you would update soon! i just love your story. I'm so happy Hermione's back! Maybe this time they (Pansy and Hermione) could at least tolerate one another. I'm still curious if you would let Pansy utter those famous words she one said in the canon. But I guess you won't because she is in love with Harry and never turn him in... Still, it was a thought that maybe that got into a fight and let Pansy say it because she was angry at Harry...
Report Review

From ANON - pansy25 on January 09, 2011
AMAZING! I'm so happy you updated! I love how Pansy stayed on. Regardless if the adventure was totally hard and rigorous a true relationship is something that you take on and stay on because you love the person. i hope Harry realizes that and not hurt Pansy.
You know this is the only Ron that I actually appreciate. Maybe because I hate JK Rowling patronizing him so much and maybe because I'm a true Dramione to the core. Still, your story rocks. I hope Hermione comes back even though yours is totally a nagger. She's basically a miniature Mrs Weasley. Still great story though and yeah they are only human...

Report Review

From newtothis on January 03, 2011
first i love this story, and i love how you had hermoine leave, ron get a lot of crap for leaveing but even if you count his being injured, you still have the locket playing that hermione loves harry, if there was a nother girl i could see hermonie leaveing becouse of that. i do hope ron and hermoine are together in this story, and it would be nice to have pansy and ron as friends.
Report Review

From SalonKitty on November 09, 2010
Heh, thanks for the lovely acknowledgment.

The twist with Hermione leaving the group is delightfully unexpected, but is entirely plausible in light of the new dynamic you've set up. I see Hermione's feelings being quite abused all this time, as she's threatened by Pansy's usurping of her right hand stance next to Harry's side. It's such a coveted spot, being the only girl in a group of boys, sometimes, because they are all looking to you to provide them with another way of seeing things. Then along comes another girl and ruins that feeling of being the special one. This would so grate on Hermione's nerves.

The voyeur scene was quite hot, but I was surprised at how surly Harry was towards Ron, at first. Guess it's all due to their stress levels from the Horcrux. Still, the snowball fight was great to see. I'm very curious how this new 'trio' is going to get things done without Hermione's expertise to fall back on. Then again, this is quite an arrogant and in-control Harry we're seeing, who maybe was not paying much attention to Hermione in the first place. He seems quite annoyed with her, lately.
Report Review

From MDB021Boo on November 05, 2010
She might be a little jealous of Pansy. Or she feels it
Report Review

From ANON - ares on November 05, 2010
nice. Even if it isnt anymore about two teenagers having crazy sex around an old castle, its very nice! I mean, it was totally unexpected when Hermione, whom i believe was always closer to Harry than Ron, in a way, was the one to take a hike. Of course, Pansys presence might have effected things but i dont really like how Ron is in this fic. His mature way of handling things is nice but uncharasteristic of him. Well, it also might be an effect on Pansys presence here.

Anyway, loved the chapter. Please, update soon. See ya.
Report Review

From SalonKitty on September 19, 2010
I'm growing to love Hermione's digs towards Harry's sex life. She can be quite amusing. It's great to see Harry and Hermione butting heads all the time while RON tries to play mediator. Nice change of pace, that.

You kind of threw me at the first line of the chapter, because I'd been thinking it was Pansy who had come to the rescue and Apparated them out of Umbridge's place. But I really liked the way you described the fallout from that. I would imagine with their adrenaline still on octane, their need for each other's bodies would be just as you depicted. It is a testament to Harry's character that he recognizes things for what they are, and that he could see Pansy's terror and respond to her more softly was lovely.

I had to go back and re-read a few chapters that lead up to this one to bring me up to speed. I'd almost forgotten half the stuff, but it was a good reminder on how well you're laying out this story.
Report Review

From ANON - Jess on September 18, 2010
Please update, this is one of the few good pansy/harry fanfics please continue with your story
Report Review

From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2010
Dude! Don't leave me hanging, bro! THOU MUST CONTINUE!
Report Review

From ANON - Donato on August 02, 2010
Awsome set of stories, love that you actually use the fact that you aknowledge that adding another character would affect the choices made in the canon as opposed to her simply following Harry and Co. around w/o adding anything new to the story. Can't wait for the next update.
Report Review

From Pete91888 on July 31, 2010
Awsome story can't wait for the next update. By the way I tried to email you at the address on your profile so that you could alert me to your updates. The long and short is that it didn't work. I got a reply saying that the eaddress was invalid.
Thanks
Report Review

From DSTorres on July 17, 2010
Always a pleasure to read your updates. Nice and to the point. Little dicey towards the end (2am.. ick) but still quite good.

Report Review

1

2

3

4

5

6