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Reviews for It's Not Just Sex

By : Daye
  • From alina290 on March 17, 2010
    Very good chapter. Thank you for the update. I keep on wondering what Pansy has to do in order for Hermione to at least know that she is on their side and will not betray them.
    Liz
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  • From DarQuing on March 12, 2010
    In the books Ron just didn't seem all that smart and generally acted like a prat. If you can write Ron as being reasonably intelligent, I see nothing wrong with R/Hr scenes. Just write the parts that move the story along, and Hermione removes the stick from her arse, including the smut if it moves the story along (which is largely relationship and character development). The parts in DH I liked least were the scenes where they were basically camping in the woods.

    Whatever you decide to do, I look forward to more. :)
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  • From fantasyra on March 09, 2010
    Personal advice for the story is do what the story wants you to do. If you want to follow the story, its your call, if not the same. personally I would follow the book loosley keeping the main events but altering them as you see fit to incorporate the new person. Or just follow the vision of the story as you saw it when it started. Really its your call, I have enjoyed all of it so far and look forward to seeing were you go with it either way.
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  • From serenagold on March 08, 2010
    Personally I think that if Hermione just got laid, she might be more laid back about Harry and Pansy. I'm just saying. lol

    Anyway, keep up the great work. I like the direction you're headed with a change from the canon.
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  • From MayorHaggar on March 07, 2010
    Speaking for myself, I'd prefer to see you branch off and take the story in a different direction than DH, even if that does mean a longer wait between chapters. Also, while I happen to like Hermione and Ron (to a lesser extent) as characters, I have little to no interest in reading about them in a romantic sense. Something about their relationship just seems...off. I'll read scenes that show how their relationship is changing, but if you give them smut, I'll likely skim past it.
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  • From ANON - ares88 on March 07, 2010
    Damn, this is getting excited. What the hell is going to happen now? Pretty pleaase, write soon!

    Excellent chapter. I enjoyed the whole 'Harry-Pansy-on-the-field-scene' though more smut could've been longer but no biggie. I enjoyed it still. I still care to know, where Pansy and Harry apparated.

    As for those R/Hr scenes, keep them in the bare minimum. It's not that i have anythign against that pairing, but this is Harry Pansy fic so unless you're going to add Hermione into a threesome, i dont really want to read about them more than plotvise have to. Sorry, Thats just how i feel.

    I think you should go with your gut feeling, whetever write it DH or your own. Whatever it was, i promise to read it.

    See you soon.
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  • From ANON - vic on March 07, 2010
    i absolutely love your story! I also love that there are consequences for pansy for being a total bitch to everyone in the past. It makes the story feel real. As for ron and hermione, I am not sure if i want a sex scene but some fluff scenes would be nice. As for plot you don't have to have pansy follow the trio everywere, but help out in her own way and just happen to meet up with harry in every chapter for some smex!
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  • From ANON - taran63 on March 07, 2010
    I'm really liking the story, and I look forward to seeing where you take it.

    As far as your questions concerning how the story should go, you're the author, so you should pick whatever options motivate you to write the most.

    Personally, I dislike the R/Hr pairing, although I do like the characters. If you write R/Hr scenes, I won't bother to read them and will skip them to get to the rest of the story, but if you feel the story needs them then write them. I'm definitely enjoying all of the story so far!
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  • From ANON - Sorrow on March 06, 2010
    Loving it so far glad to see more Harry/Pansy keep up the good work!!!
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  • From alienyouthct on March 04, 2010
    Honestly, you're having a bit of dead butterfly syndrome here. You introduce a major change like Pansy, and it amounts to... nothing. Apart from a bit of bickering, you're following DH so closely you could be filming the movie for JKR. I liked the other story, but if this is just going to be a rehash of canon with "and Pansy" inserted after "Hermione, Ron, and Harry" for each scene, I think I'm going to give it a pass.
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  • From DarQuing on March 04, 2010
    I'm glad to see that they're not like 'Oh? You have a Slytherin for a girlfriend? And its the same one who's been treating us like shite these past few years? That's alright, we forgive her!' :P I do hope, however, that they get over it before Harry decides he'd rather have her with him than them. :P

    I look forward to more chapters. Please update soon! :)
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  • From serenagold on March 03, 2010
    Bwahahahaha.. I loved your breakdown of Dumbledore's opinion. hehehe

    Also, you're continuing this! Gasp! This should be exciting.
    Pansy is a real trooper to put up with all this shit for Harry.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Orator on March 03, 2010
    I've enjoyed reading about this story, and think your pulling it off quite well. Quite frankly sex and good plots rarely mix because most authors are to afraid to write about sex or it's the only thing they write about.

    You've managed to weave them together in a story with strong characters, and a surprisingly decent plot. Credit where credit is due.
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  • From ANON - DHsucks on March 02, 2010
    All in all, its a good start, although I wish you had covered more of what happened in the month between Pansy's and Harry's arrivals.
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  • From fantasyra on March 02, 2010
    feel free to branch out of the originial story some and make it your own. Mostly your not changing much as far as plot goes but take the liberty. personaly I am looking forward to Pansy showing both Ron and Hermione that she is more than just a pretty lay or bed warmer for Harry. Should be intresting. Keep it up.
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