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Reviews for The Riddle Heiress

By : Scorpio87
  • From ANON - Evie on July 22, 2012
    This story is pretty good so far but I really wanna know what happens to draco and what hapens when Hermione finds out who her true parents are! Please update again soon!
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  • From Angelwithbrokenwings on May 12, 2012
    Please keeping writing . I really love it please email when get new chapter on
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on January 13, 2011
    okay so I've only read two chapters...I know I know...I'ma read more, I just thought I would review first and let you know that I think this is a great story. I do see that you are having trouble going back and forth from present tense and past tense. If you need a beta I can totally do it for you.
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  • From on August 25, 2010
    A good story thus far. When I saw what Albus did, I wanted to reach into the computer and into the dimension where this is happening and THROTTLE the meddling old fool for kidnapping Hermione from her parents, whether or not they were 'Dark' (which by the way, is solely someone else looking at what you are doing and disagreeing with it in most cases).
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  • From jaceni50 on April 19, 2010
    Oh, one more thing. Thanks for not following Cosmyk suggestions. I would probably stop reading it if that was the case. Don't mean to insult, but really don't like the type of plots cosmyk suggested. Stick with where you already went and I'm sure this will be a good story. :D I'm also of the thought that she should like Draco.
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  • From jaceni50 on April 19, 2010
    Interesting story; although, the grammer and spelling is lacking. I wonder why Hermione kissed Draco. How come you didn't explain it? Can't wait to find out how this turns out. :)
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  • From MIverson on April 13, 2010
    Well, I have a suggestion if you are interested since you have changed the story line so much anyway, why don't you put her and Ron in Slytherin and Malfoy and Potter in Gryffindor. Wouldn't Lucious SH** a brick if his son was in Gryffindor? Also, this way, you could have the Dark Hermione resisting the advances of Ron (Or seducing him under her control) as she tries to Seduce the Perfect Pair: Malfoy and Potter. Just a suggestion. Hope you like it.

    Cosmyk
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  • From Magzie on April 12, 2010
    Hello. I believe you should put Hermione in her own environment. Put her in Griffyndor where she should befriend Ron and Harry, This is what Dumbledore would have wanted because he knows her true identity, wouldnt he want her to team up with Harry because Harry is so good. She can have a mean streak, or a hidden agenda. Maybe with all her book worm knowledge she can find out who she is by research because its obvious that her appearance charm may be up sooner or later.And obviously she needs to be in love with Draco
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  • From angelnomiko on March 18, 2010
    wow that was great i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From becka8199 on March 16, 2010
    Nice update can't wait for more. Excited to see what will happen.
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  • From goldhorse on March 10, 2010
    You had a great start, but this chapter was extremely rambly. You might try to clean it up a bit.
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  • From unitedgravedigger on March 10, 2010
    There are grammatical errors throughout, awesome plot and i have been looking for stories like this for a long time... about the grammar i suggest you get a beta ( a person who reads your chapters before they are posted checking for grammar) i have been a beta before and i am available if you want a beta. The grammar does not make the story bad, it just makes the story harder to read through... for instance you seem to mix up their and there, simple mistake but it makes the reader have to stop and re-read a sentence to catch the meaning intended. Hope i helped. If you want me to beta send me a mail at unitedgravedigger@hotmail.com

    Ace
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  • From becka8199 on March 10, 2010
    Yes, I was happy with this chapter. Good work. Don't forget to check for spelling errors. :) So, how many chapters until we get to Hogwarts? Obviously Hermione will be put in Slytherin, I mean she's felt all that power, and she's Voldy's daughter. Cant wait to what you have in store for us next! :) B.
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  • From becka8199 on March 08, 2010
    Well that was interesting. I wasn't expecting the parents that the Order placed Hermione with to be that way, but people change with time. Great chapter. And just to let you know. You are getting better with the spelling and grammer. Nice improvement. I can't wait for another update of this story. Its great. :) B.
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  • From BabyMomma2fo on March 06, 2010
    i think you should really contiune this story i enjoy it so please hurry n update soon ill be checking in lol
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