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Reviews for Starfish

By : KohakuShadow
  • From Severus1snape on April 24, 2015
    Love love loved it!
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  • From ShivaMotherOfEarth on March 27, 2010
    Oh like this story can't wait to see what else you'll write. :D
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  • From ANON - Sheree on March 26, 2010
    Sirius was a randy little thing wasn't he?
    Imagine boinking your arch nemesis and wanting more.
    Very good - very good indeed.


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  • From countesszero on March 18, 2010
    great! i have a weakness for severus/sirius. i loved the very hot, very enthusiastic, delicious sex. and the thong was ingenious!

    i think i am not the only one who hopes for longer fics from you!

    btw i recced both "underneath" and "starfish" on http://asylums.insanejournal.com/bottomsnape/, and "underneath" on http://asylums.insanejournal.com/lupin_snape/

    sorry, but both recs are friendlocked since they're nc-17 - i didn't want to get the comms into trouble!
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  • From Elvira on March 13, 2010
    LOVE LOVED IT!!!

    So freaken Awesome!!!

    I loved how you made how both are different in their ways of love making. And that you explained Remus need to be anamailistic because of Moony.

    Loved it!

    Update soon!!!!!
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  • From JanisJ on March 13, 2010
    Yay! Wasn't sure how you were going to pull off that pair (the boys, I mean, not the thong, ha-ha!) But you did it in a believable way, taking into account the animosity between those two.... and making it work. Of course, being hopelessly horny boys, they had to go for it, despite their antagonistic history.

    I loved Snape in the thong-- how the material stretched away from his waist due to his straining cock and describing pulling the "floss" to the side, and how it would sneak back in his crack when it wasn't pushed out of the way. Nice realistic visual there ;P

    Also, the 'starfish' reference was too hilarious!!!! Good job! :)
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