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Reviews for FALLACY

By : Kalendral9
  • From dragonlady on December 03, 2010
    love it buta little consered that manverva might be a bad guy
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  • From dominique1 on November 27, 2010
    three bitch should die the master make up a crazy power hungry half blood that or nick flemmale his old enough and way want more
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  • From dominique1 on November 27, 2010
    am happy the famliy is together
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  • From erospandora on November 20, 2010
    still interesting, a bit confusing i suppose but i think it adds to it... we will see

    ~eros
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  • From stray523 on November 13, 2010
    Holy Crap! Minerva and Trelawney are in on the Ministry plot too?! Omigod, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings and how this all turns out! I love your pairings too. I'm geussing that Fenrir is Remus' father? And Lee is related to Blaise? Oooh, I jsut can't wait until you update again!
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  • From jamieslady on September 21, 2010
    the master..Fudge or one of the other idiots at the ministry...or even worse..Vernon

    loved the update and look forward to the next
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  • From mjmusiclover on September 20, 2010
    ahh very amazingly well written :D, i'm gonna say fudge
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  • From Silverstargirl on September 20, 2010
    Facinating story! I'm really enjoying it. I would say that Aberforth Dumbledore might make an interesting villian. And what about Arthur Weasley? xD Another possible choice could be Rufus Scrimgeouor. Cornelius Fudge is too dumb in my mind, but I suppose he could be the 'master' as well.
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  • From hellangelhellina on September 19, 2010
    What the hell is going on. This is crazy. I can't wait to read whats really going on.
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  • From Rainbow12004 on September 19, 2010
    I love it. I can't wait to see what happen next.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on September 19, 2010
    awwww i've always liked minerva.... such a shame.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 06, 2010
    Sooo need chapter 14!!! What is wrong with Harry?
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  • From Dreamfool on September 04, 2010
    This is a very good plot, original too. A little far fetched, but isn't that what fanfiction is for. My only issue is that it moves a little too fast. Let the readers get used to a new idea before jumping to the next. it's a little bewildering. Also focus a little more on the relationships. The pairing are good but let us see how Blaise and Hermione get together and the same with Harry and Draco. if you ever revamp that is the thing you should work on. Everything else is really good.

    I love Albus and Grindewald together. They make a good couple. I always wondered if that was cannon. As we all know Dumbledore is gay and they were good friends as boys. It's not out of the question for the two of them to have had an affair. I just want to point out that Albus had better get back into the swing of things soon here. i know this has cought him a little (ok alot) off gaurd but I'm waiting for him to turn the tables on the ministry. With him and Tom working together the ministry doesn't stand a chance.

    One more thing. How are you going to explain Moaning myrtle? It's not a complaint, I really am eager to see what happens. I know I said there was only one thing but what can I say, I really love this story and I only want to see it get better. I love constructive critisism my self and it's always easier to see the inconsistancies when you arn't the one writing the story.

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  • From SParker on August 29, 2010
    about #13...

    Ooo...everything's about to get hectic in the next chapter! :-]
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  • From layne378 on August 29, 2010
    OMG!!! Thanks so much for the new chapter!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
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